Seven friends are thrust from their homes on Earth to the world of Equestria. Two unfamiliar worlds will have to learn to adjust to each others rules and how each others interactions can bring change or create new influences on one another.
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Why is Celestia resistant to the Humans' concepts anyway? They aren't inherently good or bad. Maybe its just because she is a monarch and is looking out for her subjects rather than any prejudice on her part. And also I have to question why did Octavia assume the USA was a monarchy when in actuality its a Constitutional Republic?
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There's a mix of reasons, but the truth will be revealed.
All the other nations around Equestria are monarchies, and since only Sniff has ever spoken about government politics with Twilight, Octavia had no way of knowing and just assumed.
First & foremost
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The adorableness has been dialed up to 100 with this chapter.
Once again proving Lumberman & AJ to be the best written pair in the story. Not to say the other pairings aren't well written, it's just something so real with these two that makes me love them a lot.
Lumberman actually teased AJ with his d***. I'm mad as shit but it's very understandable given her situation.
Here's to AJ getting her rut in her own words "Maybe tomorrow" π₯
Here's where my heart began to hurt.
IT HURTS!
IT'S HURTING EVEN MORE!
GOD FUCKING DAMNIT! π€¬em.wattpad.com/fae7ffc1cad0b72d1820a4388be8337266f3e27e/68747470733a2f2f73332e616d617a6f6e6177732e636f6d2f776174747061642d6d656469612d736572766963652f53746f7279496d6167652f683938354f5a59374a33566977513d3d2d3136362e313464646632623538326563343738373430393536363739303837302e676966
God I don't wanna see them get their hearts broken but maybe it inevitable & that's what makes even more sad.
If AJ could go to Earth with James, I don't even wanna think about the harassment she could face in a world where regardless of the fact that she can consent & talk, their relationship would be heavily criticized because of the law.π
Thier only hope in that case would be a miracle coming to them. The only support they'd have would be from the rest of the stranded humans & a whole other world not of our own. Damn this is depressing.
On a less sad note? This was a great chapter albeit a short one (the first short chapter if I'm not mistaken)
10/10
Chapter 79.3 : Half a Harem & Their Man
OH SHIT! Starlight's A Coming!
If you had some choice words for Chris in this situation, what would they be?
For me it's "NIGGA RUN!"
I can see why Saturday's gonna give a reaction now.
Damn fine appetite kickstarter We can look forward to some cowgirl/pony action in the future.
If AJ want to do it all herself? She probably becomes the BJ master of Equestria
Personaly i hope Zecora joins AJ. Apple+Construct expert + Alchemy mastery? = Best alcohol based Applecider ever
Nice chapter
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Very neat
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Indeed β‘
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To be fair... Scootaloo is still a foal. Late blooming is very likely.
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Poor little foal...
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Ah! Take that kidshow logic
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I can see it now... After a epic fight the enemy is still not defeated and there are only two solution left...
1. Orgy to power ponys up
2. Fuck the evil into submission
In a story or to i read how Nightmaremoon/- Sombra as mare get defeated like that xD Also Cozy Glow...
Sooo... As a silly reader ones say
"A great lay can make your day" - 'Black--Soul'
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Yeah. I really like tying in dialog into a chapter's title when I can.
I agree to a large extent, mostly because they're the only couple that's strictly dedicated towards each other. Kelly was close, Cerb and his two are pretty tight, but AJ and Woody clearly stand out.
That was one thing I somewhat regret writing in, but couldn't logic my way out of it. AJ is head over heels for Lumberman. I also didn't really know how to convey or work in that being how he is her first love, she doesn't know how to wait things out and take it slow with the emotional commitment. Even if she is more or less an all in character.
Same for Lumberman wanting a family of his own and jumped to try and catch up to AJ's pace.
I don't want to see them hurt either.
Oh, without a doubt that would cause some problems. It would take a big workaround to make that work for them.
It was my shortest chapter so far, but I think I got the more important parts knocked out.
I'd say, "Chris... Fucking, pace yourself."
If you care at all for Chris, by that man some floaties or a lifejacket. Because he's about to drowning in pussy.
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Once she heals up, can't see it not happening.
Ha! We'll have to wait and see.
That would be interesting, but we haven't seen much interaction between those two. Not yet at least. Postions and alcohol... interesting.
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She'll get her chance, the poor thing.
No, the ponies are going to take it. Well, Kelly, too.
LOL! Oof... I don't think anypony except Trixie knows the powerup feature is even a possibility for these mares.
I've heard it refered to as getting dicked down. That would be funny, though.
The one thing that makes me love about Sniff & Lumberman aside from them as individuals is how they treat other people.
The way they interact with their significant others in Applejack, Twilight, Ovens or any other mare Sniff's got wrapped around his magic fingers is a testament to that.
They really know how to make others feel great.
Sniff (in more ways than one π)
Lumberman? There's a lot to love about him, especially with his relationship with AJ.
Speaking of treatment, interaction, etc.
I remember you telling me how Starlight might be jealous of the pamper & gentleness Twilight has experienced with Sniff as opposed to her & Chris.
But you know what I think? I think Starlight has a little kink for that intensity. I mean you see how ready she is for more of Chris whenever she gets a little horny? Remember that attack on the timber wolves & how it was so powerful due to her full on lust to get back to Chris.
Even now she was immediately into the idea of dating mares starting off with an instant lip lock with Prim.
I believe it's safe to say that Starlight likes it rough.
Holy shit that only makes what's about to happen to Chris on Saturday even more scary.
Yeah I might have to go buy him that life jacket like you said. Mans is about to be SWIMMING! π
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They know how to treate others properly so they feel appreciated, that's for sure.
Ooooooooh, I see what ya did there.
True that.
It was more of a thought, given how much Starlight appreciates being accepted by Chris and all that he's been willing to share with her. What Twilight has experienced has more depth to it with a lot more consideration. For Starlight, she's almost always the aggressor to get any sexual attention from him and pushes for what she wants, where Sniff is the guiding hand for Twilight and Ovens, ensuring complete satisfaction. Then again, what Starlight has would be something that both Twilight and Ovens would be jealous of as well.
Starlight lacks patients, for the most part. She's still carrying a bit of her old mentality of "Well, I want it, and I can take it, so I'm going to."
She certainly does seem to give herself fully to anything pleasing.
Well, just imagine everything they've done so far... but now without the fear of social retrebution.
Proably at least 3 mares deep over his head.
Tossing aside the other mares in the harem & focusing soley on Starlight, I have to ask.
How would you describe Starlight & Chris's relationship?
As we know it has far surpassed the relationships the other humans have had with their pony counterparts, especially in regards to the sexual aspect of it & that was before Kelly became the second human to go all the way.
In speaking of the sexual aspect.
Do you think Lumberman was a little too quick with his sexual behavior towards AJ at the end of this chapter? I mean I know they've been flirting & have got to know each other more personally but they JUST got together.
Honestly I think this could apply to every other human except Becky & Benny.
Chris was inevitable but I believe him getting it on with Starlight was too soon. Cerb getting REALLY close with his mares to the point of sweating his d*** off at the sight of Fluttershy & Rarity making out for him has me thinking he gave up his earthly morals rather a too quickly.
Sniff while he's engaging in sexual activities (not full on fucking but still sexual), has wondered what the actual fuck he is doing. His inner voice did question him fucking horses (albeit sentient, magical, & damn near human like horses) but he continues to pretty much go as far as he can with his pony lovers until the damn finally breaks. He's on the same page as Cerb for me.
And Kelly? Need I say anything?
I'm not saying this is bad or anything. The pacing of these relationships are top notch & I've come to be intrigued in every single one. I just noticed how relatively easy it was for our humans to start going beyond from what was deemed morrally wrong on Earth.
They however are not on Earth & were already a bunch of broken individuals. Broken but very interesting individuals.
Perhaps being in Equestria was fate? It brought out the best in them & everyone around them despite them unintentionally messing with the timeline.
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Immature, underdeveloped, as well as physically and emotionally dependant, if not mutually exploitive.
Now that might sound terrible, but they have jumped into something that is not grounded in a history of well understood and meaningful things to related with while together. That doesn't mean that they don't care about each other or have things in common, they've just let the physical and instant gratification of sex take the lead with each other. They haven't even had an actual date yet.
With all of that stated, they just need more time to figure out what they really mean to each other and have a stronger bond. The same goes for the others, although Chris seemed to connect with Derpy pretty well since their date wasn't focused on lust. I do want to see how the relationship between him and Starlight when they actually have a date.
As of right now, Chris has the most advanced and understood sexual relationship with his harem. I'd say Lumberman and AJ have the most grounded relationship. Cerb with Flutters and Rarith is probably the deepest and most supportive. Kelly and Big Mac, along with Luna, is a strange mix of being ground, dysfunctional, chaotic, but also arguably the most committed to each other in the same way Cerb is with his two. But that's based on the legitimate conversations they've had with each other and getting to know each other.
The odd one out is Benny, who's relationship has just started, though isn't based on lust. He's taking a strong lead with them, but well see more with them here shortly. I really love where things go with them.
Yes, I think he did move to fast with her. At the same time, AJ was thirsty as hell and probably would have ended up hurting herself if she didn't get her urges taken care of.
With AJ and Lumberman, they've had a good amount of time with each other, though not as a couple or two individuals being romantically intimate. Becky has yet to show any interest, which hasn't amounted to much interest in her.
At least with Cerb, when/if whatever happens, he's had a lot of time with his girls to get to know them and let them get to know him. Not only that, they've been physically close with each other and have some level of comfort with each other. I think there is a lot of depth between them, and they're just missing that last step.
Chris was very much a done deal, but with Cerb, his push to be closer with Flutters and Rarity was largely due to his desperation to move past his misery and relief from his PTSD. At the same time, Flutters and Rarity have never pushed or manipulated him into escalating things. Perhaps they've presented a favorable path, but have allowed everything to progress with him at his own pace.
Sniff to a large extent knows that what he's doing goes beyond the morally grey area. At the same time, he can't stop himself from trying to please who he's with while feeding his sexual needs. He has at least been forward and smart enough to be upfront with not offering long term relationships and just letting what happens happen with no strings or expectations attached.
Even his physical restraint has been impressive, albeit, flawed. At the same time, his approach to who he's been with has been overwhelmingly focused the mare he's with, as opposed to anything in return for himself. He's constantly stressed helping them learn and understand how to approach a relationship, self-improvement, improving their self-image and confidence, and becoming acclimated to their own sexuality at a slower pace.
Overall, he is probably too sexual, but he's not been exploitive with then, nor let them exploit him (mostly). Things may get more complicated if he allows himself to become too attached to any of the mares in his growing herd. Sadly, of which, Twilight might have pulled ahead of Ovens in that regard, but we'll have to wait and see.
As stated above, I do feel for Kelly. After waking up from her attack byt the Solar Guard, her desire to be with Mac was unhealthily strong. Even to this point, she doesn't fully understand why she had such a strong shift in her attraction to him. Sure, she loves who he is as an individual, but her ability to move past the idea of being physically involved with Mac was constantly pursued regardless of her hesitations and discomforts.
However, she's put a lot of effort into her relationship with Mac, but is still grossly immature and needy, both physically and emotionally. Even if she does acknowledge it, she hasn't been able to overcome it. That lack of control has led her to using Luna and tempting each other, as well as weakening Mac's morals to push Kelly towards being with a mare to appease his own growing sexual desires and interest. And Luna herself? She outright manipulated and essentially lied by omission to Kelly to work her way into their struggling relationship. Not that she won't be a welcomed or even potentially helpful and supportive addition, but that's still a poor starting point for all three of them.
in most of these cases, the pacing for these relationships were going to develop relatively quickly, but for some, that was by design. At the same time, even with the ones that might feel rushed, I don't think they come off as unrealistic, given the context of what brought each couple together.
Loneliness, dependency, desperation, over-active libidos, physical gratification, and other factors have all played a role in expediting the progression of each set of couples. In each case where it's easy to point and say "Um, isn't a little soon for them to do that?" that isn't the wrong opinion to have. There have been times where I've intentionally allowed those things to happen. Cerb sleeping naked was a big one, but he was desperate to win over Fluttershy and Rarity's approval and prove that he trusted them. Chris's first time with Starlight was his libido overpowering his logic, but being horny can make people do stupid things. Even Lumberman wanting to be with AJ and using the idea that they were all probably stuck there forever looks to be like him searching for an excuse to have a chance at having a family with someone he trusts.
Lumberman might have the best shot of having the most realistic relationship at the moment, but Becky hasn't found anyone yet. So, maybe she'll break that mold.
Being so broken has made them all vulnerable, and while some relationships seem to have been perfectly set up with some forced/leaps in development, there's still been reasons to point to for their vulnerabilities being focused on. For others, the vulnerabilities seem to have allowed them to search out an exploitation to take advantage of them.
You are right though. It does seem like fate that they all met up this way and have been able to grow and show their best since arriving. Excluding a few late bloomers, but even they came around.
I think AJ and Lumberman are the most realistic pairing because they only want each other and no one else.
Fun times ahead. We need more snuggels π
Dawww factor is with this two rather high, great chapter π
Applejack idea isn't bad, but the adrenaline would ruine a lot of the painkillers effect. A example I have is the syringe with painkillers before a tooth get pulled.
I as many other have extream fear because of the sensitivity of teeth towards dentists.
As a 11 year old my panicked little self made two child dosages of pain killers for pulling a teeth out mostly useless.
I had to be returned the next day, because the doctor wasn't sure it's safe to use more.
Applejack would most likely kill the painkillers accidentally.
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I took a lot of time and care with how I approached those two. I'm glad it paid off.
She just needs to be more patient. At the same time, I recall laying in bed with bandages, casts, and the like while still thinking, "I need to get laid." So, I can still relate to her mentality of just saying "Fuck it," and trying to talk her way into having sex anyway.