Seven friends are thrust from their homes on Earth to the world of Equestria. Two unfamiliar worlds will have to learn to adjust to each others rules and how each others interactions can bring change or create new influences on one another.
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not kinda lie celestia thinking sniff is handsome is cute i dont mind if tia ends up in sniff's herd with twi and the other mares, however i fear for his pelvis i dont think a normal human can handle all that booty even though he may not have a choice if she goes all daybreaker or worse molestia on his ass
I believe the term I should use for this is 'hotdogging'. Princess Twilight Sparkle from My Little Fucking Pony just performed 'hotdogging'. What a insane story man.
- So it looks to me that Twilight is now all about the lesbian action. That is double the fun for Sniff now!
- Sniff being jealous of Chris is something else. He was the man on Earth but we ain't there anymore. This is Chris's domain.
- Chris harem 2.0 begins
- 'Drunk on Dick'...not something I thought I'd read but you learn something new everyday. I take it that you've experienced it?
- Very much happy for Swifty out of all the new harem recruits. Her & Peter click really well.
- Flash Century is here....that's cool.
*now onto the bigger subject*
So I felt bad for Celestia but this chapter has brought back the anger I felt towards her. Her tone & behavior towards the humans is not sitting well with me.
The idea of her going after Sniff is making me side eye her more than I already do.
Also "I'll be free"? Sounds like someone who is very unhappy with the life they have & is probably willing to do whatever it takes to get what they want.
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This right here in reference to Sunset?
It makes me fear what she'll do to anyone trying to stop her from her goals.
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Celestia not looking so good lately.
Shout out to the artist of Top Shelf (though I miss Peachez, hope she returns soon) . Sniff's got quite the looker in his group.
Also out of the harems, Chris has the most beautiful looking ladies & Sniff has the most cute looking ladies.
Benny just managed to have one mare (Octavia) as both the most beautiful & cutest looking girl out of the 6 six humans that beats them all.
Well next chapter should look to be an interesting look into Big Red, Kelly, & ol Moon Moon's situation. See ya next week! 😉
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Celestia and Sniff? ... well... ya never really know where this story is gonna go, so... who knows? Although his pelvis might not have the training needed to handle that much pony. As for Day breaker, the flames would do him in before her weight.
Molestia? Hmm... pretty sure Sniff would be too into that for her to properly live up to her hype.
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Hotdogging has one bun (also, buttcheeks, but I know what you mean)... so maybe this was more like a corndog, or two loaves of bread fighting over the meat to fill them?
He is getting spoiled something fierce, and Twilight certainly is getting swept up in all the action, but with all the stress and fear of losing Sniff, ya can't really blame her for not wanting to give up someone as special as Ovens.
The polarization of the dynamics between those two was too strong for me to ignore it, and having Twilight use it to get what she wanted was the perfect opportunity. Besides, it's not like he was actually taken advantage of. She just wanted to be the one to treat her stallion to something special that night while securing her bond with Ovens.
Working on it.
Well, if I'm being honest, I'm not built for speed, but have a knack for endurance. And that's not a brag, since most women can't keep going for as long as I can... Anyway... One such occasion was with a lady friend who was particularly sensitive and preferred penetration over external stimulation.
So... time went by, plowing away and she asked me to stop, but she sounded drunk. Then I thought maybe she slipped herself some ecstasy or someone gave her something, but it was actually just an overload of dopamine from the sex. Someone she was with had to explain it to me, since it wasn't the first time she'd gotten like that, but never from a guy (I guess?) and she was fine within a few minutes or so.
Just an odd experience... Kinda sad I only got to be with her once, but life goes on.
I had a lot of different thoughts on how to bring Swifty into the fold. Some ideas ranged from her being his first, but Ovens took that title away real quick. Then her beating Lyra to the punch, but that seemed kind of cruel and out of character for Sniff, even though I did find a way to make it work. I was really tempted to have her join Lyra her first time, and even considered having her give in much further down the road, but this just seemed to work the best.
- Flash Century is here....that's cool.
Well, yeah, bro. Flash has been around since Chapter 17. He was given the field promotion to Captain and now heads the Solar Guard in Canterlot Castle. Also, Sentry with an S is a type of soldier. Century with a C is a time span of 100 years. And don't worry, my editor caught me making the same slip a time or two.[/spoier]
As to be expected. She isn't exactly treating them fairly behind closed doors. Although, her true motivation has been admitted yet. So, keep an open mind.
All she really admitted was that he was handsome and entertaining.
Well... she isn't happy. Ever since she thought Sunset had returned, the only real enjoyment she's had was her time with the Stranded Seven, and she wants them gone.
But also look at the time line:
Tia has a lot of reasons to be bitter and spiteful, even if she doesn't have the right to be.
Hell hath no fury, my dude.
There's still more to her story.
I'm going to miss Peachez, too. Still no idea what's happened to her, but I'm bringing on board two more artists to split up future commissions with. Their art will debue in chapter 89.
... unless I can sneak in something before than, but I kind of doubt it.
Between the full-on harems, it's a really good mix, in no particular order:
Twilight - Starlight
Swifty - Redheart
Lyra - Derpy
Mayor - Cheerilee
Topsy - Prim Posy
Although, Sniff still has to deal with Lily, Daisy, Roseluck, and Spring Forward, and Amethyst Star... That dude's plate is super full.
Benny really lucked out with who he ended up with. Largely Octavia, but I think it would have been difficult for Benny to hold together without Vinyl there to break up the tension and stop them both from failing to address issues or discomforts.
It won't be just those three. Next week will have another deviation to somewhere else to show what else is going on in Equestria.
You mentioned DayBreaker. I assume that might be a form of Celestia's right? I think it had fire & that might explain the whole hoofprints leaving behind smoke trails after the Sunset situation. Correct me if I'm wrong.
Mercy she said. Now that just gives off some very sinister vibes. Ol sunny had enough of playing the role of "good pony".
Though I'm not sure what possibly torturing Sunset for something that happened ages ago, something that just wasn't possible anyway due to fucking with alternate universes, is going to do for Celestia.
If you asked me? It wouldn't solve a damn thing. Celestia's a ticking time bomb just waiting blow! She'd be corrupted due to her personal pain.
There's gotta be some bitter jealousy given her behavior towards the humans, I know there just has to be.
It's a damn shame that she fucked her relationship with her sister & daughter-like student. Those humans have changed the very nature of Equestria for better or for worse & she just wants them gone immediately, not caring about how they would feel.
Celestia is F L A W E D !
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You mentioned DayBreaker. I assume that might be a form of Celestia's right? I think it had fire & that might explain the whole hoofprints leaving behind smoke trails after the Sunset situation. Correct me if I'm wrong.
Daybreaker is the alter to Celestia, just as Nightmare Moon is the alter to Luna. We never see Daybreaker until Season 7 Episode 10 "A Royal Problem."
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However, this story is still taking place in season 6, so the others wouldn't even know about such a possibility of that side of Celestia even existing.
The occasional rise in temperature, searing heat, and smoke trails, are all signals of what might be lurking underneath.
Oooooh, boy, you better believe that Tia is holding a grudge against that pony. Sunset said that keeping the divide between Celestia and The Good King Sombra was an act of love, but was utterly destructive to the Princess of the Sun. So, if destroying a 1,000-year romance is an act of love, Celestia is already looking forward to showing all the "mercy" Sunset deserves for her betrayal.
It might make Celestia feel better for being robbed like she was.
You might be right on all accounts, but pain can be a powerful motivator, if even for all the wrong reasons.
There very well could be. We'll see a little more after this night is over and the group makes their way to Canterlot.
It really is a shame, but perhaps, as it was pointed out, that distance put between them might have been exactly what they needed so that a more natural relationship could grow between them.
Granted, some of the mares were pretty keen on still trying to get as close as they could, but still.
Just like everyone else around her. Only she's too proud to let others help her fix herself.
(Not related to the chapter)
There's been a lot that's happened ever since the ponies & humans started linking up romantically. They've started harems or herds (That term is never gonna catch on Twilight) & the world of Equestria has had it's world flipped upside down with how the characters have changed in regards to action & behavior.
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Unfortunately I feel like it's inevitable that Twilight or someone above will find a way to send the stranded 7 home.
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That inevitability makes me sad because of how it could affect everything that's happened, especially in regards to the relationships that blossomed.
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I'm sure the harems that have had members of said group falling for other members ala Chris & Sniff's harems will do fine with the humans gone & that includes the 3 partner trio with Benny & Cerb.
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Applejack and Lumberman however, are such a special case because their love was built organically. You could feel that they really do love each other. Hell! AJ loves James so much that'd she leave her world for him regardless of how the world would treat their love.
I honestly think James would end up in prison regardless of AJ being sapient because the law wouldn't see her as anything but the thing that she IS & that's a terrible case in scenario. If you could convincingly solve that, this wouldn't be so depressing to think about.
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Maybe I'm thinking I'm too hard or maybe I'm just really immersed in the story & just wanna see something good be the conclusion, hell I want that for Celestia too despite how much of a bitch she's been in the story lately.
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Bit by bit, either by with subtle changes or dramatic leaps, things have and will continue to change.
If something was powerful enough to bring them there, something has to be strong enough to send them back.
No need to be sad... not yet at least.
Octavia and Vinyl, plus Fluttershy and Rarity are both couples that seem good to go on their own if their humans go. In Chris's harem, it would probably be Starlight and Prim, Redheart and Derpy, then Cheerilee and Cream Heart. With Sniff's girls, probably Twilight with Ovens, Swifty and Lyra, then the others would either link up in pares, or they would all stay together as one giant... herd.
Actually, Chris's girls would probably do the same. That would leave Rainbow, Applejack, and Pinkie to rough it on their own or start over. Unless AJ could find a way to stay with her man just as she intended.
Pretty sure AJ would find a way to make the trip to stay with him.
There's generally always a workaround to make something happen. Some kind of sacrifice or tradeoff.
You're good people. I won't let ya down.
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Well, I appreciate the Favorite, and I do my best to keep things interesting in my story. Comedy, Horror, Suspense, Action, Drama... I got a bit of it all mixed in here and there.
This story is a big read, and not every element of the story is clearly written out, but do get explained. So, if you have any questions or comments along the way, feel free to ask.
My favorite thing about your story is that it isn't overly misanthropic like alot of HIEs are. Honestly alot of the really good stories tend to not be and if it is, only a small part of humanity is criticized rather than the whole species.
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It would have been hard to write my story where it was misanthropic when the human characters are generally pleasant characters themselves. Even when talking about their hardships or having been done wrong, it's met with examples of either them taking care of each other or finding support in others. It's never a clear-cut one versus all or the world against them. It's the good mixed in with the bad, just like real life. And just because some of them have found Equestria to be better than the world they left behind, they don't hate that world either.
I'm glad you're still enjoying my story as well. Won't be long until this arch can be finished and we move onto the next story of our Stranded Seven.
I'm a little surprised that Celestia would take such a risk as to eat an alien's foodstuff without even having it examined for how that foodstuff would interact with the equine biology. I do understand that she has a massive sweet tooth, but if just really flies in the face of Celestia as a chessmaster/strategist and her previous experiences with fighting national/international grade enemies. She could be ingesting something that is toxic/poisonous to ponies and slowly harming/killing herself by complete ignorance of what it is that she is consuming.
Deep under cover... A bond joke
Great chapter
EmptyPlotFiller, you do know that the agency BonBon works for is for monster hunting and not espionage right? So why write her as an actual spy and not the job she has in show
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Um just guessing here, but maybe sunbutt sees the humans as a “potential monster threat”. Bon bon even states she doesn’t trust the humans many times
What will Lyra chose? Love or Nation...
Dun Duun DUUUN!
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With Celestias size? Fisting probably becomes the norm, if they would do it regularly than they have a work out making them buff lime Cerberus
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Pretty sure Tia is untouched and about as tight as a drum at this point. Sniff would have his work cut out for him trying to break her in.