Seven friends are thrust from their homes on Earth to the world of Equestria. Two unfamiliar worlds will have to learn to adjust to each others rules and how each others interactions can bring change or create new influences on one another.
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nicely done, worth the wait!
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Sees chapter title....wait is this story almost over? Are you gonna make a sequel? If not what other stories you have planned?
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Thanks. This took longer than I thought it would, trying keep track of where everyone was and not mixing them up to be two places at once. That, or having go back and writing them in so you and the rest of the readers would know where they were at.
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For right now, I foresee two more chapters to go. Otherwise, I will say that I am working on the idea of a prequel. Anything else I might do will have to wait until the last chapter of this story is published.
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you're welcome
What a bloodbath. Guess every outside Harmony construct dying get erased. At least thats a good thing.
Harmony as a sociopath is expected. Her direct attempt in massiv murder streak... Less so
I guess the best outcome would be this realm Harmony and Sword to die/stop existing & the remaining ones to retreat and ignore this Equestria.
Guess this is a Dead Space situation and they need to hunt down all Tree's planted by Harmony?
Guess Trixie Rose and Luna Ring to the rescue? There replace this universe Harmony.
If this universe Harmony cut the connection dont that stop her regenerations?
So... Becky is physical & magicaly damaged?
That tough.
I think it's better to have a free violent world, than a caged pieceful when desired one...
What a magnificent chapter. Made my heart rate jump better than a coffee or Energy Drink
Words without context , very dangerous...
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Every harmony is tied to their realms. These Echoes found a location where they can survive, but death would still be complete outside of the worlds they originated from.
She must have been desperate.
If only, though I'm sure our heroes would want to beat them back.
Who knows? But it appears that Harmony is the only one of her kind in this world.
Two Trixies and two Luna's now in the same world... Let's just see how this turns out.
Losing Harmony would affect magic production. That was a problem for other worlds.
The energy that is put off from Becky and the other humans will be a little better explained later, but it's not really magic. There is a real science behind what Harmony observed.
I couldn't agree more.
I'm glad you enjoyed it, bud. There's more action to come in the next chapter.
Ayo, I think I speak for everyone when I say FUCK HARMONY!
Not my boy Sniff, he gotta pull through. Now this shit is looking grim!
Twilight don't play when it comes to her man. Big ups! I'm proud as hell.
This chapter....damn it is one bleak ass one to say the least. Some serious life threatening situations that I'm sure will be traumatic for everyone ( mostly the kids ) involved. Jesus, all that I could think to say was "fucking hell" by the end of it. Outstanding intense chapter. Felt like a movie & the fact that this shit involves characters from My little Pony of all things is just crazy & impressive.
You foresee two more chapters? It'll be sad to see this story end if that's the case. I can only hope you give a satisfying conclusion to the all stories you've created here & I'm sure you already know who's story conclusion I wanna see most.
Next chapter title has me thinking after everything is said & done, maybe an epilogue in which we see the differences in the years past 2016 aka the final years of FiM. Sadly I don't know if Becky would live to see those years but hey anything is possible.
This was 100℅ worth the wait & I can't wait to see Harmony's head get popped!
P.s. It's a pain trying to keep up with your story while new interesting ones pop up & current stories that haven't finish update their chapters. I've been on reading hunt with this site since discovering it last year. 😅
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Yep... That's pretty much the consensus.
Shit just came out of nowhere.
Some lines you just don't cross. Harmony... She done crossed it.
I try to write a lot of the action scenes as I want to see them visually, but you're right. Things did take a turn for the worst, and Harmony isn't going down like the rest.
Where this story ends, more will come to pick up the mantle and carry on the torch.
No one knows how things are gonna end. There is so much hanging in the balance with so many dangers coming at everyone all at once. Anything could happen at this point.
LOL! Bitch already had her head popped twice. Our heroes might need a new strategy.
It's all good. I started falling behind on my once-a-week release anyway, so it's not like I can blame you for finding other stories as well.
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Holy shit. Sniffs hurt, Harmony is on a bloodshedding rampage, and now we have sword and the others there?! The next chapter is gonna be insane!
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Sniff down, Harmony is back up, Sword is in, and hope is slowly on the way out.
This next chapter is proving difficult to write out, given all the bodies duking it out.
This kid....poor fucking kid. He's gotta watch as his essential father figure is hurt & could possibly die. I gotta hand it to Spike for being able to hold on & stay with Sniff & reassure him that he will be okay because he there. A real father-son thing I'm seeing here & I love it.
That's gotta be fucking terrifying to see for them. Limp is never a good word in regards to injuries, especially ones as life threatening like the one Sniff got. Pull through Peter!, pull through!
Read this in the voice I have for Chris in my mind & made myself chuckle. Dead she in fact is Chris, or at least she was. Get ready for the next battle!
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That whole scene almost didn't happen. I kinda forgot where he was in the story for a while. It took me two read-backs for me to go "Oh-Shit!" trying to think about how Spike was going to react when he found out Sniff got shanked. Of course, it was then I was like "Fuck me," because I realized I wrote the whole scene while ignoring the fact that he was in the room.
I think I saved that near disaster.
Originally, Twilight was going to go ballistic and lash out at Swifty for failing at her job... Or just lashing out because she needed a target to blame and didn't know handle so much devastation as the thought of what happened to Sniff.
There was a lot of things that could have happened once Sniff was brought down, but Harmony threw a wrench in any of those plans.
Yeah... shit's about to get real.
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Tell me about it.
I really liked the idea of how they interacted with each other, given how both are so into their practices of magic.
It will likely make more sense later on, but I don't properly address this continuity issue. Mayor Mare does dye her hair, but it was greying on its own before decided to make it all match.
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fair point
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I can't remember if I had him call her Candy because I thought it was a cute nickname, I read it in another story, or I saw it in a spoof pic depicting her in inappropriate acts while using the name Princes Candy Ass.
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okay
Delays again?
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Physical therapy held me back and I had a few other things to take care of. The next submission will be put out here shortly.
Welp, now I definitely know who the big bad is. Typical God entities, arrogant, believing mortals to be nothing but playthings in their game.
Fuck her shit up, along with the rest of her misbegotten ilk........
One enemy is defeated, but at a price way to high to be fine with... The Owlbear just a puppet and did way to mutch damage for comfort.
Can't Celestia give the allied Harmonys some of her Crown stored power?
As mutch the Echos will lose if they are defeated, they will not longer mess with this Equestria, unless?
Yet the Darkness is still a problem.
The good guys got seriously fucked up. Slice of Life will rather be on the down low i guess?
Guess after this major battle they can melt down all their stuff again and make it higher quality?
They can probably not replace ammunition for their guns? Unless Pinkie Pie?
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Sword and his Echo followers are all sociopaths...
Apperently only the broken two Harmony construct that binder to a individual and merged in mind and spirit are reasonable at all.
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Both of those portions are fixed.
Some were sociopaths, some were emotionless drones, others were purely logic-driven, while some may have simply failed to see the humanity behind their cause all along. It's hard to say for all of them, and for many, it simply is too late.
The only ones that we were able to see at least.
Let me get this straight. The history of the MLP FIM show up to episode 6 of season 6, along with the comics and specials, not counting the Equestria Girls ones, was because of that world's Harmony's manipulation? Not only did she use her magic to make creatures say and do things and move objects around to make certain events happen, but even made the bodies immune to blood related injuries and removed the idea of sex from their minds? All of that as a means to make the world pure and innocent as these 'Words' demand?
I can understand making a story to entertain little girls like this, but if you fumble with it, they'll get confused and disappointed. Like, the show started out great, but it ended on a flat note. If some people can't see how wrong that is, that's their loss.
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That seems to be what happened here, but there are still a few more chapters to go. Might help shed a little more light on things, or at least clear it up It up in the story's own narrative.
I'm not sure what you mean by that?