Seven friends are thrust from their homes on Earth to the world of Equestria. Two unfamiliar worlds will have to learn to adjust to each others rules and how each others interactions can bring change or create new influences on one another.
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Worth the wait! I like occelus and sandbar the most of the young 6, plus i find they fit well together.
Also loved how the foals were proactive.
good Thing dinky is not hurt or else you would get to know me and a certain elite royal guard
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I think the younger Ocellus, had she been exposed to a welcoming pony community, pre-Thorax overthrow, would have been overwhelmed by how much better those lifestyles were. Plus, Sandbar always stood out as a kid who always wanted to be generous and friendly, as well as do the right thing. At the same time, not overly confident or brave enough to attempt anything stupid.
They do seem to work well together.
As for younger foals, if any of them were messed with, Chris would have probably lost his mind. As for the elite guard, if you mean Onyx, that would fall in line with Pina Colada, Berry Punches foal.
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Yep.
i actually meant an oc of mine, who became part of dinky's family
Welp, thats one injury.
This makes me want to go and burn down a forest. The tree literally is making KIDS fight a damned BEAR.
I love these kids
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Got ya.
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And yet, here we are.
Glad I could give you a laugh.
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Sadly, that's just how the bad luck rolls.
Well, the bear wasn't supposed to follow them, or so she said. We'll have to see if that comes up in the next chapter.
So adorable, even when they're trying to talk smack. I particularly like Button throwing a stone that was too big, making him not even come close to hitting the owlbear.
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sorry, old habit
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Anything button does is usually overdramatic and barely gets anything accomplished, and thats what makes him so funny.
And the harmony tree can go to hell, though once again I marvel at the fact I'm hating on something thats SUPPOSED to be a symbol for good. Really nice storytelling there to flip that script so well.
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He's a little kid with a big personality. That's always something to enjoy. Of course, hopefully one day he'll get it right.
Harmony doesn't have a clue about what's about to come down on her.
At the same time, neither does really anyone else. Celestia certainly didn't know who/what she was double-crossing.
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Then that goes to whatever the hell is in the drivers seat of fate right now... Oh boy.
So how many chapters till this part is done?
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Oof. Thanks for catching that for me. It's fixed now.
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I'm not sure where you got that idea from. Did I miss something?
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There are a lot of restrictions on disclosing military training methods and practices. Exposing the actual training service members, as in recreating them and/or explaining their tactics would be a violation. However, there have been plenty of examples of service members training other foreign forces. Of course, those are regulated and catered to the group being trained and who their opposition is.
Given how those he would be training lack the same formations and equipment, the training would not be the same actual training Cerb received. Even his hand-to-hand combat would not be the same same. What he could offer would be training on how to enter spaces, do patrols, avoid ambushes, and things of that nature. Most, if not any at all, would divulge the same classified or restricted tactics and operations used by his or other branches of service, given that he would be catering the training to avoid magic blasts, spells, medieval edge weapons, and put an emphasis on non-lethal close-quarters combat. That's a far cry different from modern warfare with firearms and advanced explosives/munitions.
Also, much of the training would involve martial arts, which are not military exclusive, and would only be illegal if intentionally taught to a hostile force.
It's just not likely he'd be sharing anything that would jeopardize any military operations, training, or agreements that he had made.
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Tchotchkes : a small object that is decorative rather than strictly functional; a trinket.
Now, as to why that was added onto the store name, I don't claim to know. That's the name that was provided in the comics, which I wanted to keep as accurate as possible.
Given how these characters appear to be taken directly from the show, the concept of herding is not within their culture, per se. Maybe in Saddle Arabia, but that hasn't really been a thing yet. Otherwise, the conversation will come up.
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Some helpful insight would always be appreciated, but we shall see what all she has to offer.
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Fixed, and sorry about those slip-ups, but I do appreciate you catching them for me.
Okay....it's been a minute since I been on here. Hope your vacation was good. Mine is going okay, could be better though.
I did read this chapter but don't have much to say about it. I'm just getting back to commenting on stories.
I will say that Harmony is gonna fuck some shit up.
The little moment between Lumberman & Apple jack was adorable just like all their interactions. Lord knows that I want them to have one hell of a happy ending out of everyone in this story.
10/10!
Is the next chapter delayed & have you gotten good enough to make the art chapters yourself or will we be seeing favorites like Peachez or Timkaa return if possible?
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Mine was good. Certainly needed the rest.
As for yours, I hope things pick up in a better direction and you can really enjoy yourself.
This last chapter went a bit everywhere with the kids, but it will be better explained later. I will say that a lot of that was from them being kept so deep in the dark about what was happening and so they had to make everything up as they went.
Lumber Jack couple is always going to be something to look forward to. Glad you enjoyed it.
As of right now, I'm maybe about a third of the way done with the writing of the chapter itself... though it may end up being a longer one. I really don't want to stretch it out any further than I am as of now.
As for the art... unlikely, though I would love for Peachez to return my messages, given how we did have plans to do more art again. Same for Timkaa, as she had personal issues to attend to, but left me with the impression that she would be open for art again when everything was taken care of on her end.
As for art from me?... I really don't know. I'd love to, but my inspiration has been low for doing my own art, even if I should force myself back into it.
Otherwise, I expect the next chapter to be out next Friday, or Saturday if I have to push it back. After all, I can't leave all those kids there with Harmony. That bitch is crazy.
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Given the nature of alcohol, as well as how poorly so many Equestrians seem to manage it, the humans seemingly opted to control its distribution. Primarily, ponies and the like simply couldn't be trusted with it after Starlight's fiasco with Chris.
That's not to say that they haven't seen its benefits, still sharing it those like Italian Stallion and Top Shelf, as well as making it readily available at their events with friends and important figures. Heck. Even Sniff used it to barter favors.
That being said, you are not wrong about the financial gains and other benefits. However, they know what how they keep their supplies refilled is morally wrong if used to turn a profit, as well as illegal... probably.
Still, it gives them an edge to remain in control of it all.
But it's totally going to happen later on.
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That is one of the most well-thought-out possibilities for how the POS plays into the story. The fruit analogy is genius as well.
You've put a lot of thought into all of this, and it shows. However, there is still more to learn, more that will help cloud, or potentially clarify what led to the human's arrival.
After all, I've never flat out said who was responsible in the story. I've only shown here and there who was involved while other's statements have added to the theories. Nothing has been confirmed yet.
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Twilight is about to become a lot of things. That particular behavior is one that will likely come up again in her near future.
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as i had said earlier in that word salad, i don't really hold much to the POS being responsibe, but figuring how to make that idea plausible was fun.
Wtf? I forget the comment on this chapter? Impossible
Harmony forces them into a deathmatch, than plays the good guy. No shame at all. Yet i wonder if she can heal or just mend their wounds.
I think the concept of killing in self defense is not that wide spread yet...
Everything is fighting to survive and the tree of wanne be Harmony sure enjoys her spread of death and chaos. Little sociopath sure is having a great time...
From one trap into another, this is where the true hard part of the story starts...
Since Discord is Harmonys counterpart, is there perhaps a dimensional wall made by him?
The have similar abilities after all.
Unless chaos is unable to keep the darkness away?
Time for the real showdown to start... blood was spilled and more has yet to flow.
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In a lot of ways, this is my favorite chapter.
They are similar and can pretty much do anything they other can, just in different ways or will counter what the other can't.
This portion went on so much longer than I originally planned.