Seven friends are thrust from their homes on Earth to the world of Equestria. Two unfamiliar worlds will have to learn to adjust to each others rules and how each others interactions can bring change or create new influences on one another.
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This update makes a beautiful community x mas gift
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I really wanted some bonus adult art as a bonus gift, but ended up running short on time. Maybe at the end of this six-parter. Gotta see what my schedule and budget are looking like.
ANALOGIES GALORE!
• So that's what Benny looks like? He's not a bad looking dude. Now I'm wondering what Peter looks like, what with how much tail he's been getting with his charm.
• Oh my god, LOOK AT TAVI! She looks so damn adorable. I can see why Benny & Vinyl fell for her. She's drop dead beautiful, she's got elegant skills, an wonderful personality & that damn accent is just the icing on the cake!
Yeah, I guess you & Cerb ain't so different after all. 😅
Also go head Benny! While not being able to fuck his lovers....yet, he finally crossed the line into getting as close as possible.
6 out of 7 done & maybe just maybe, Becky will complete the puzzle.
Chapter 88.2. Comparing Apples to Jelly Donuts.
Awww shit! 👀 *grabs popcorn*
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Of course! It's one of the best ways to get a point across without beating the audience over the head with boring dialog. That, and it makes me feel clever.
All in due time, my friend. Hopefully, before their night ends.
Peachez did a great job with her. And take a look at them hips!
But yeah. Cute, classy, and adorable when she isn't paying attention. I can't wait to see more of her.
I was a bit conflicted on how to properly express those thoughts. Mostly because he's never spoken so crewdly... but then I remembered that he's a guy and guys rarely speak the same way that they think.
Benny did cross that line, but Becky still seems to be rowing in a different boat. We'll have to wait to see how/if her position evolves.
You get the popcorn, I'll grab the drinks.
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That's not a bad way of looking at it, but these types of interactions might not be the norm moving forward.
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It's a party in a bottle, and everyone is invited!
... but also the potatoes juice.
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You have a good eye for finding laps in logic and inconsistencies. I've put a lot of thought into this tory to limit, if not outright remove, as many of these problems as possible.
Not to say that there won't be a few moments where you might question something that either wasn't immediately addressed or explained, does get addressed very shortly after for plot purposes.
I won't leave you hanging.
Humans are like boosters/drugs to ponys.
Ponys are candy and emotional stability for humans.
Neat
Great chapter. From nothing to juicy in seconds/minutes.
Trixies hangover will be horrible
Lets see how they fix Trixie Loolamoon back up and plan there plan of action for the future.
Since Benny future marediver and Peter present Sex Guru in the making are low on mares perhaps we can squeeze Celestia for a trial run inside. Before Sunbutt runs supernova
or full on emotional hollow.
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That's certainly one way to look at how they depend on each other.
I think you mean from sweet to juicy, but yeah. Benny figured it was time to get his.
such a shame I couldn't have had this story start up a bit later in the year, otherwise this would have been a perfect song for Trixie:
Trixie just needs some downtime.
Well, it's not much like there is a numbers game going on. No one is trying to out mare each other or build up a bigger bank than the other as far as lovers go. It's also hard to say who would be the lucky (or unlucky) human would be the one to take that plunge. Not only are not all of the mares open to sharing to just anypony else. Even the humans seem to be far more selective on who they would want to be with. There is also the issue that only the mares know that Celestia never wanted them getting very close with each other to begin with.
So, it's going to be interesting when they all finally meet up again.
* Hey, I saw one of your responses & you mentioned wanting bonus adult art for your chapters? I'm gonna be caught off gaurd if I'm suddenly met with the image of these characters doing the dirty while reading.
I'm not opposed to seeing it, I'm desensitized as fuck but maybe a heads up note would be in order if you decide to.
Hell that's if this site would even allow such an image.
Maybe making it ''lewd enough'' would get it pass the censors.
* Also I had to go back to the image of Benny, Vinyl, & Tavi when you mentioned Tavi's hips.
In conclusion : She got some hips & ol Benny ain't gon get enough of it, especially when he finally gets to the point where he dives DEEP if ya get me. 😏
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The rules on this site say that I can't directly link or post any of that content on here. If anything, I would only be able to leave the 7 digit Derpi picture number that the readers can manually put in so they can see the art if they want to. An example would be to take the number 2514793 and paste it after https://derpibooru.org/images/ which would bring up the picture. That number being the last picture of Benny with Tavi and Vinyl.
The hips came about from the artist wanting to draw her that way, which I'm more than fine with. We'll have to see how things go with these three.
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Very well said, of course, those are things that don't really apply to the ponies.
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While I didn't mention it in the chapter, I'd imagine she lost no more than 3 pints. They've kept pressure on the wound pretty consistently, so while her bleeding is bad, it's been managed pretty well.
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Well... clearly my efforts lacked the same trainings in story telling that you received for such expansive dialog.
You are one versed writer.
From almost zero to sex mountains of fun.
Lucky Mares and happy Human.
Making it a daily? They become eventually Alicorn level of human spunk boosted
Maybe Equestrian Red Bull will be Human spunking in the drinks
Awesome how Benny awakened yet another pair of ponies to their potencial in love and life ♡
So in the end Becky will be the only one denied the bliss of Pony lovers, maybe Becky get non ponies instead? There is a huge list available:
Changelings
Dragons
Sphinxes
Diamond Dogs
Griffons
Hypogriffons
Abesinians
Yetis
Harpys?
Naga?
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All he needed was time and some breathing space... and a lovely pair of mares to ease him in comfortably.
Becky has a lot to work out on her own. More than Benny did. Otherwise, why did you leave out the yaks and deer kin? All the kingdoms love Becky.
ponies in this story are fucking huge but god damn that is great artwork ( hard to put this story down)
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I wanted to make the pony's size somewhat comparable to a human, in more ways than one, for a variety of reasons. Some of it is a little based on canon material, other reasons just seemed to make it more workable for all their interactions.
As for the artwork, I was fortunate enough to commission Peaches for a time, and god do I miss her doing art for me. Unfortunately, she became unavailable to continue doing art after only doing a few more pieces, which are still up ahead, I believe.
Otherwise, I'm happy to see you're enjoying the story because shit's about to get a lot crazier. And please, I'd love to hear any thoughts you have along the way.
Side thought: I really need to come back and add more art to this story.