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Adagio Dazzle, Aria Blaze, and Sonata Dusk don't know what to expect when they moved to Canterlot; Manehatten was quite a ways away, after all. But they don't mind; a new city means a new beginning, and a new beginning starts with a new school, and what better school to attend than Canterlot High School, a school that values friendship and good behavior above all else. With that kind of reputation, the trio will be up to their necks in new friends and fun memories!

At least, that's the plan. Sure, no plan is perfect, but really, what's the worst that could happen?


Despite the Main 7 tag, human Twilight will not be present in this story. There simply isn't a Main 6 (EqG) tag.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 62 )
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“I’m well aware,” Adagio said. “Now, let’s take a walk around the neighborhood before heading home. We have a big day tomorrow, and we want to be well-rested. And as for the principals’ behavior, let's look on the bright side: If they take student conduct that seriously, the students there must be the friendliest in the city, right?”

Ohhhh this is gonna suck...

You know, Rainbow and the others are gonna feel real shitty when they realize they've been harassing the wrong Dazzlings.

This story is looking good so far. I always love a good story about the dazzlings even though they aren't technically the dazzlings.

9133987 Glad you like it so far! I love those three, too!

Sooooooo.....how long till someone uses common sense?

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Worry not. As you'll see next chapter, the sisters' reasoning was not lost on Sunset. Something's definitely odd about this whole situation.

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Good.....good.... Cause you'd think the magic of CHS was already known.....even if it was on a small scale.

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Soon Sunset will realize they are not the same people. Hope the guilt comes crashing down on them.

Will the Equestrian Dazzlings be appearing?

i cannot wait for the next chapter
i want the school to be filled with so much shame they are crushed.
especially that girl with the scissors. expulsion

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Ugh. Both Celestia and Sunset really fucked up here. Why didn't Celestia TELL anyone they weren't the original Dazzlings?! Sunset could have told her friends, who might have spread the word to the school! Now everyone's just going to be angry and hurt for no reason.

Or did it just not occur to Celestia that they might not be the Dazzlings, given they have no idea what anyone's talking about?

no one recorded the Dazzlings at all for the new girls to see?

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Even if someone recorded the whole thing , they wouldn't show it to them , because there will be some explaining to do . They want to keep it secret .

.....so....they about to find out, aren't they.

So you had to end this chapter with a cliffhanger.

Now they’ll learn why the students fucked them up and want to kill the bastard who sent their siren counterparts to their world

OHH!!!! OOOOOO SHIT THIS GUNNA BE GOOOD!!!! XD CANT WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER! WRITE IT NOOOOOWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!:pinkiehappy:y:pinkiegasp:

ooooh.....shiiiiiiit

This has been a really fun story so far. Looking forward to the next chapter.

oooh snap
i wonder what the dazzlings will do
more importantly i hope the nightlights dont go "ooooh we forgive you...bullies" XD
they better earn that crap!
i really wonder if the dazzlings will be good or evil here.

Very much looking forward to more

9196156 9196541 Glad you're enjoying it so far!

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Answers damn it! XD

9196578 Well :ajsmug:...To keep details out of it, there's a difference between understanding why someone's done something wrong and looking the other way.

As for the Dazzlings, you'll have to wait and see :raritywink:.

Holy haybiscuits, this story is amazing. It's even better than I expected, and that's taking into account the great ratings.

I absolutely love the pacing and how you went from one problem right into this new one for Sunset. I love how you write your Night-Lights (name pending) and their relationship with Sunset.

I absolutely love this story and can't wait to read more of it, and I'm gonna try to get as many people as I can to follow this as well.

I'm sick of the Rainbooms, they actting just as bad with the Anon A Miss incident and hpe Sunset throws it in their faces soon.

9199066 Oh, man, this really made my night! Thanks so much for the kind words, and I'm thrilled that you're enjoying it so far!

9199838 Yeah, that stubbornness of theirs is a serious flaw I've noticed in the show. It's fun to write, but I'd be tearing my hair out pretty quickly if I had to actually deal with it in person.

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Pinkie Pie accusations were funny....at first now it just stupid and annoying and insulting!
I love for Sunset to tell them all off, and maybe even say, maybe it was a mistake to give THEM a second chance and walks off to be friends with the human Dazzlings.

This is the point that I nope out of your story. You had some technical issues in earlier chapters and your heroines were undeveloped, but it was still readable before you went full bore Anon A Miss. I loathe Anon A Miss stories, they're the opposite of fun. I rolled back my instinctual down vote because you're a new writer, but I will not be reading this any further.

TL;DR mean high school bullying stories makes baby Applejack cry.

9202487 This isn't an Anon-a-Miss story. The following two chapters have nothing to do with Anon-a-Miss. Anon-a-Miss is canon in this story, though. But, if you don't want to keep reading, that's fine.

P.S. The Equestria Girls universe is full of mean high school bullying.

Had to double check the likes on this story. I can only assume its classified as 'undiscovered' as it needs way more views. Solid pacing so far and excellent job portraying the trio's terror at seeing siren!Sonata.

9218426 Thanks very much! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far!

Yay, an update.

Its clear to see that 'redeeming' the Night-Lights in the eyes of CHS will be a long term project. Or a couple heartsongs.

And there is no way the Dazzlings are going to stay quiet over their doppelgangers.

Hmm, you would think Celestia would have given the Rainbooms, at least if not others, a heads up about this.

i cannot wait to see the dazzlings in this! i want them to make thier come back! XD

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And there is no way the Dazzlings are going to stay quiet over their doppelgangers.

Heavens, no. The question is, though, "When will they strike?"

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obviously right on the turning point of the schools/humane 6s opinions of the Night-Lights.

This is one interesting story! Haven't seen a story about the human counterparts of the sirens until now.

Am I the only one hoping that the Dazzlings and the Night-Lights would actually get along? and maybe become friends? If they do it would be funny to see when they just show up at CHS together and freak the entire school out! :trollestia:
Keep up the awesome writing!

9329978 Thanks for the compliments!

Happy to see this update although admittedly I feel it's stretching things by the other students being so unwilling to listen to Sunset and the others. Looking forward to the next chapter.

honestly at this point im with aria
like even if they are proven wrong. i dont think aria will be willing to forgive anyone and i really hope she doesnt. hope the school feels guilty over this.

Why can’t Sunset sent them back to Equestria? And don’t say that their creatures that are evil because the human 7 screwed up giving them another chance and it’s The Sirens are Equestria’s responsibility since Starswirl send them there

I'm starting to like this, although I still don't see why Celestia didn't quietly pass the word round that these aren't the sirens.

Kudos to Sunset for going into that situation without succumbing to paranoia. She only had the sisters' word for it that they'd seen one of their counterparts, and the Rainbooms already offered convincing alternative explanations for why they appear to have parents, and not to be dangerous. The reader knows they're legit, but Sunset does not. It could all have been the culmination of their sinister plan, yet she goes home with them and stays the night anyway, for the sake of friendship. In another story, it would be an act of suicidal bravery. I love Sunset. The Mane 5, by contrast, are coming over really badly... which is totally appropriate in a continuity which includes Anon-a-Miss.

The group falls into an uncomfortable silence, until Aria finally says, “We gotta find them.”

There was a surprised pause before Adagio says, “Excuse me?”

Switches to present tense here.

Sunset shook her head. “Canterlot’s a big city. Like a said, unless I get lucky, I doubt I’ll find them.

Should be "like I said".

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No one said she can't, but she's gotta find them first.

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The first person the sirens went to the first time around was Celestia. Most of the students simply don't trust anyone to tell them that the three girls aren't the hypnotic sirens.

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Fixed! Thanks for pointing those out!

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Glad to hear you're liking it so far! I know it seems a stretch, and it certainly felt like a stretch when I was writing it, but it seemed in character since they were so slow to accept Sunset even with the school's saviors on her side. CHS students are really unforgiving, it seems (except with human Twilight, I guess).

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But if she finds them will Twilight allow them back since she fail to give them a second chance like she did with Sunset

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