We could tell that the Rainbow Laser emitted by the Rainbooms at the end of the Fall Formal was powerful, just look at the crater it left. But what else could that do to Sunset Shimmer?
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9032929
You're welcome! ^^
What'd I do? 8'D
9032964
Just giving us a new story, that's all ;)
(And because I've noticed in one of your blogs you were wondering if you wanted to keep doing stuff here/aren't motivated/don't have time/etc., well you've still managed it and are spoiling us - in my opinion).
Now here's a criminally underused premise and as a plus it's not framed around Canterlot Wedding. Definitely interested in seeing where you go with this.
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Well hopefully this story goes over well~ ^^
It's going to be slower coming because I don't have as much time at the moment, but hopefully people enjoy it~ ^^;
9033016
What premise are you thinking? ^^;
I don't want ya goin in with the wrong sort of idea... >.>
9033058
And I don't mind waiting about anything coming from you.
I enjoy it already.
9033076
Well thank you~! ^///^
9033065
Any premise that revolves around Twilight spending an extended period of time in the human world. I do realize Sunset and what happened to her will probably be the focus, as these stories usually are focused on Sunset.
As long as it's free of the toxic atmosphere you get with Canterlot Wedding or Anon-a-miss I'll be happy.
Great start. Very interested to see where this goes.
Yayyy new story! Hopefully Sunset’s okay, but great job again.
9033083
Ah, gotcha!
Yeah, the story is gonna focus on Sunset (Cause I love her so much xD), but Twilight will be a major character for the first while~ ^^
9033096
Thankee! ^^
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9033387
Thankee~ ^^
And yeah, it's gonna be a fun next chapter~ >;'3
Quite a fascinating start, builds the drama and mystery behind Sunset's condition and Twilight's choice. It'll be something to see how both parties on each side of the mirror make their next move from here. I can't wait to catch up with Sunset and Twilight.
not bad, looking forward to more, moony
you even get the Pinkie hat
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Makes sense. Being cratered like that sounds coma worthy to be sure.
Odd closing line on the chapter. I look forward to more.
My interests is piqued
9033951
Thankee, Rix~ ^^
I have some fun stuff planned~ >;'3
9034593
Yaaaaaay! XD
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I needed 3 more words to hit 1k to go live, and I just played Twitch on LoL xD
9040024
Awesome~ ^^
That was so good when's the next chapter
Interesting premise, I'd love to see more.
Whelp. It’s only chapter one, but I’m pretty sure I’m hooked. This was a great first chapter and I can’t wait to see where things go from here.
An interesting start, can't help but wonder how this story will turn out.
9089082
Just getting to replying on this story, over a year late is fine, right? 8'D
And I still dunno, sorry ^^;
Trying to decide what I want with this fic xP
9174917
Just getting to replying on this story, over a year late is fine, right? 8'D
Hopefully soon? ^^;
Soon like next year...? >.>;;;
9189969
Just getting to replying on this story, over a year late is fine, right? 8'D
Thank you~! I hope I can figure out what to do next soon... >.<;;;
9226369
Just getting to replying on this story, over a year late is fine, right? 8'D
Thank you~ ^^
I hope to figure out what to do soon xP
9943063
No problem, I understand. Just answer when you can.
Aww, your stories never get continued :(
next chap?