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Echonic


How Echonic

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Not bad, I am getting interested where this is going. Good chapter btw.

9042147
Thanks! i spent two days trying to even get it readable.

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I have one tip though. Try to make the first Chapter as good as you can even make it. The first part is the most important in an Story, believe me, I lost many possible readers when the first chapter of my Story was really bad.

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Believe it or not, chapter 0 went through six re do's, not just editing but also erasing the whole chapter several times to make it even slightly look good.. it took two weeks, I also only started writing this because I really want more gamer fics and then imagined that there may be people like me, waiting for a new gamer fic to come out... but no one came, so i guessed i'll try making something others could enjoy and not just myself!

Oh and sorry to hear about your story's first chapter, it probably happened to mine too :).

Is good story so far, give me more.

Please keep going there's not enough gamer fanfic in the fandom.
Plus loving where this is going.

Nazi cliche. NEIN!

No german speaking Griffons, I am a bit disapointed, but not bad idea.

I liked this Chapter a lot, good luck continuing this story.

You gained the title *Protagonist that's going to be op very soon*

You've fell into our trap card creature!".

IT'S TIME TO DD-D-D-DUEL!

Comment posted by Echonic deleted Jul 27th, 2018

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I'm surprised you got that reference lol

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Griffons have many different languages but German is their main.

9071505
currently watching VRAINS on crunchyroll
also,
I set Timegazer Magician and Stargazer Magician in the Pendulum Zone!

Lol i've spent an hour trying to find my own story, wondering where in the hell it vanished.. then my mouse glossed over settings
[View Mature] Off... I'm very angry and embarrassed at myself now. but I've been spending some time trying to make the third chapter so it should be out soon?

I love the story I can’t wait for it to update

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I decided to change my draft, It's taking longer than I expected. when I'm done i'll start making the next chapter!

Okay I'm a huge fan of the gamer webcomic and I was kind of iffy on reading your story mostly because everyone that does a game or comic or something close to it it doesn't continue also the description kind of put me off but I am very happy that I decided to read this fanfic is really good keep up the good work

I felt some what heavy, perhaps it was caused by the iron chains surrounding my entire body, the chains on the dildo on my forehead felt even more heavy. like they doubled it's mass compared to the rest of the of these fucking chains.

Okay this is a weird way to start a story... AND WHAT THE FUCK IS HAPPENING HERE?!

I hope to see more of this awesome story!
I like these game fanfic alot.
Hope he gets op by hard work

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I have no idea what you're saying.. is English perhaps not your mother language?

Dexterity can give you the speed of a cheetah and the reflexes of someone who seems to have a sixth sense, maybe if you spend enough points into this one you may actually get a sixth sense!.

This one sounds like a coward stat, it could help if you're blind or couldn't see how fast your opponent was swinging his or her sword.. actually maybe dodging isn't all that bad it probably hurts a lot less that's for sure.

Excuse me, I'm about to choke a bitch.

i got click-baited here by Han Jee-Han

I hope you will come back to this story one day, I really like what you have so far!

*Added to tracking list*

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That is from the manga/manhwa called The Gamer.

hello...? Echonic...? hello?

please can you ressurect this fic... please.

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