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Ayumi Otosaka from Charlotte.

Who is the girl in your avatar, and where is she from?

2613204 I was going for the horror feel. That's why I started with a screaming filly.

I have many ideas for stories. If I turned them all to novels, I'd have a few millennia of writing ahead of myself. It's easier for me to just banish a pesky idea out of my head by writing a one-shot.

I was going more for a feeling. The idea of how darkness encroaches. How the last hope is snuffed out from the bravest of souls.

These things resonate with me. I still read my stories from time to time. I wouldn't feel them as much if I diluted them with other stuff in order to turn them long. One usually doesn't need a lot of words to express an idea.

I did, however, also write a novel if you're interested in something long. It's about loosing oneself.

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I didn't think that it really needed the horror tag, it wasn't long enough to fully sink in, But I think the story is interesting and could be more than a one shot, but i think that would be missing the point as to why you made it, right?

2612976 Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Would you change anything in the story if you were writing it?