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A god bit? Sounds expensive

6559464 In the manga Han Jee Han is what people call a cheat character or a broken character since he doesn't have a limit to what he can and can not learn.

but be honest who in video games doesn't want to be the biggest bad ass there

"Sure I have a gold bit right here." I said pulling out a god bit from my pocket.

This was what i was talking about

6559778 Read the manga, he makes so much money just killing a weak boss.

6559817
It's not about him having money, but the fact that you misspelled gold.

Please, find an editor... :facehoof:
That quite literally made my eyes ache.

On a better note, for a displaced character, you chose a relatively good one mainly because given time and effort he can do and learn just about anything and everything. The only real problem "the gamer" had in the manwa was that, for the most part, the stats were just numbers on a screen. They didn't really make him any smarter. He gave himself sky high intelligence and never seemed to realize he was still a moron.

Comment posted by kitsunekit deleted Oct 23rd, 2015

And i read the manga wich was awesome btw, at least 3 times so i know how his power works,

I was expecting this to happen sooner or later.

nice story and F yeah for the gamer powers.

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I thought it was awesome looking forward to another chapter !

6559928 Thank you for noticing for me I will fix it right away

note for the future try to make chapters 1000 words or longer because it's annoying when you go to a story with lets say 50000 words and you go to read through it and there's like 50 short chapters (not saying you'll do that though)

6562221 Don't worry I hate when others do that. I'm going to make them as long as possible

Well, the story is not bad. A bit sloppy on storytelling and plot points but it's pretty readable. I think I'll fave it and follow it for a little while.:raritywink:

I like the blade of the buzerk manga and the reference to it.

I have a tip for you vaththecat, there is pointing at a specific place: It is right there on the tablet.
You use their if something belongs to someone: Their cat is stuck in the tree.
They're is actually short for they are: They're in the in.
I hope to have been of help and so far like the story and have read (and liked) the manga. ;)

More chapters please !!!

pretty good story man

7997477 I'm actually in the process of "dont know what to do " on one hand I'm thinking of changing it so when he comes over he gets turned into button mash ( buttons a gamer and the manga is called the gamer and button is my fav back ground character ) and in the other I suck with intros I know what to do for future chap's but I just dont know how to get the intro to head in the direction that I want

7997486 imagine yourself as the character what do you think would happen

Before I read this, what is the Dark and Gore tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?

8000607 the story is being re written due to some issues.

But I put it there because I have some plans for some gore and dark scenes later in future chapters but it wont be like too bad.

I wont lie they will be a few scenes like that but I will have a warning for it.

When is the next update?

8436463
due to work and all the shit going on. I can't say to be honest.

8436521
Well 💩 poop 💩

8584904
No just too busy with work. I currently work grave yard right now and its be bizzy. I working double shifts because were so understaffed

So I short not dead just taking allot longer then i want to

Graveyard shift?! Ouch..... I know the feeling bro, cest levie

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Updates are going to be a while due to my job don't worry not dead

9596968
To be honest. Now I’m too busy with my two jobs I can’t even think about how to go with this story at the moment

9597909
Least we can look on the bright side. If the story died that usually means it was a good fic.

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