Both, Lumos, and his best friend, Erebus, are without a doubt, the biggest idiots in the known multiverse, as they trade their normal lives, for a displacement one, but how long will it take before they begin to regret their decisions? And how much time do they have, before they realize what they've done to the world?
First Story, so advice is appreciated. And expect the characters knowing about MLP, and light gore, with strong language.
Also, I will upload randomly, if I decide to continue, so don't expect me to be on point with updates.
Chapters (22)
Well, other than minr grammar issues and the cliche 'Suddenly I know how to use my powers easily without experimenting/practicing' bit. You've got something going, I can't comment much on the story yet as it is only chapter one at the moment.
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Good to know, and just to answer, he knows a little of how some of Nox's basic abilities work (Stopping Time/Sword). but more complex ones will take time to master, no pun intended.
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Oh, that's good. A struggling main character is more believable. ^^
8389517
True, True.
I thought this was going to start in the convention.
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No, that always happens in most Displaced Fics, so why not after.
8389528So, a flashback then?
Oh, by the way. You might wanna put it in the description if or if not you're available for cross-overs.
I'll admit. That made me laugh a little.
What are Lumos and Erebus from?
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They're just two characters I made up, but Erebus is the name of a god, and Lumos mean 'light' in Latin.
8396885 Lux is light in Latin. Lumos doesn't have a meaning aside from being a spell. In case you forgot Vitae means life in Latin.
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Noted.
Am I sensing a ship? ...Just saw the romance tag so im'ma gonna say yes.
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Took you long enough to see that, but yes.
8409421 Speaking of seeing things. Did you see the Asterus/Akame ga Kill thing I made.
You forgot the W in dwell.
Hurry up ye rat bastard. Finish the next chapter already.
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Yeah, Yeah . . . on it...
I got me a Helminth charger, thought you should know.
Good chappo as well.
Cool, you finally got space aids incarnate, if Nidus didn't already have that going for him.
And thanks.
Noice
What kind of a crossover is this? Who are these characters "copying" as? What series, so on and so on...
8503583 It's a displaced story and the main guy is Nox from Wakfu.
You spelt rune wrong, you incompetent fuck-stain. Good chapter.
I'm just going to assume Erebus turned into Luffy because no one else could have. Also be prepared for Sunday.
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Let's be honest, who would you fight. A guy with crazy powers, or a guy who can destroy a universe with a click of his fingers?
8571917 Depends on the crazy power. I'd rather be erased from existence than fight Emporio Ivankov 'cause he's one freaky bastard.
What Is Wong With This Story
I did not expect this.
Does that hint imply Erebus is going to be helpful in a genuinely productive way?
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If you mean he actually does 'something' productive, then yes, you got the third part right.
Oh boy, interesting story, but the grammar and pacing need some work, proofreading is a must....
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where's everybody? the history is actually pretty good, so... anybody out there?
What is eurobus displaced as?
So eurobus is Bill cipher
Who did eurobus turn into?
cmon i just read some than noticed the uploads...
its dead
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I apologize, my interest in writing this story had died out long ago.
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its fine
10186160
You raise a good point, one sec...
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