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Red_Beard


I don't write much, but it's a nice past-time. I'm not committed to what i write much, often taking months long hiatus.

Comments ( 46 )

please kill yourself and take your pedo ass out of the gene pool.

8902119
I mean, part 2 accomplished. :/

8902119
Boi your getting mad over cartoon horse porn, just stop

not as good as the magnum opus Deathly Bloodblade, but i'll rate this a solid car crash out of an international tragedy

Wow, guess these people have never seen a foalcon fic before. Ah well, it’s written pretty well, so the likes will outstrip the dislikes soon. Don’t let that jackass first comment discourage you from going on, far too little quality foalcon fics coming out these days.

Ehhhh.... not bad .... At least it's consensual ..... would they rather have another CMC rape fic. God I hate those and vore ..... But to each their porn .... get it instead of own ... *cricket chirping* ... ah shut up. Writing wise hymn .... clop seemed a little rushed ... not saying you need 2k words for the scene but it's like ... Let's bang ... drops pants .... lasts 1 minute then rolls over and goes to sleep ..... like that him and AJ have a history instead of here's my sister now bang her.

Better than futa. Upvoted.

there aren't any limits to whwhat makes a whipat you can say

Wut?

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I swear you go over these things like 8 times and still miss the most obvious shit. Thanks friend.

Fire Extinguisher

I immediately pictured Starlight using Anon to extinguish a fire, using him like a broom.
I cant stop laughing

Biggest reason I downvoted: Would prefer if his sperm did not enter egg but still quenched heat.

Alright then. Interesting enough premise. Onwards to see what else you have to offer.

This story was alright. Personally, I think it should have ended when Applebloom fell asleep. Her suddenly waking up and asking her to fuck him was a little abrupt. And the ending was very abrupt. Don't wanna sound mean, but should've quit while you were ahead.

Mature, professional, fun and sexy! Good job!:moustache:

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JESUS PONY FUCKING CRIST PUT A WARNING ON THAT LINK OR SOMETHING FOR FUCKS SAKE THAT'S CREEPY!

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I believe that that to be WAFF, but i'm not willing to click on that in case i'm wrong.

causes her to shudder

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W.A.F.F: "Warm and fuzzy/fluffy feelings".

good clop. me enjoy:rainbowwild:

p.s It's not a second person story, so it would be wise to remove the tag.

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Thank you. There was a time where it was, and I never changed it

Keep up the good work, would love to see more...

I wish our sex-ed was like that!

Maybe we'd learn a little bit more than just the basics.

It’s almost been a year

This was a lovely read. I expected to have to deal with some small dick degradation but this was actually quite empowering and wholesome. I know it's been a while but I hope you continue this.

V8

How would you like to share a pair of skates?

V8

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Ughh! Never mind! Boy you look a lot better from the back!

V8

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Ah hey baby you wanna go somewhere... (incoherent stuttering) wait, wait Quagmire, remember what's on the other side!

V8

LOVE YOUR PROFILE PICTURE KINKY AS HELL

I am pleased to see this story continuing after a long time, hope you have intentions of writing more sooner rather than later. :P

our sister to pick you ok, ok?"

up, ok?"


Anon chuckles. Appleblooms makes her way over to the door.

Applebloom (Without the 'S')



I'm happy to see the story has returned! I hope to see many more chapters from you,:pinkiehappy: good sir.

I thought this is Cancelled but Nope!

We've been sorely lacking in human X pony foalcon lately. I'm glad you picked this up again! Keep it up! :rainbowkiss:

Heh, almost as if she's not quite ripe yet. I see what ya did there

Nobody told me this updated :raritydespair:. I'm glad it did though. I'll comment again with some corrections later, but for now I'll just say this was a pleasure and I'll patiently wait another 2 years for an update. And even if that never comes, this is still a fine ending to this story. All I ask is that you remember to mark it as "completed" if it comes to that:raritywink:.

This was really great. Cheers!

Just found and read this story for the first time.
Very nice story, i love the idea. Hope this continues!

nice, and its not even done in a creepy tone, so even better

will it continue soon?

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