Wow, guess these people have never seen a foalcon fic before. Ah well, it’s written pretty well, so the likes will outstrip the dislikes soon. Don’t let that jackass first comment discourage you from going on, far too little quality foalcon fics coming out these days.
Ehhhh.... not bad .... At least it's consensual ..... would they rather have another CMC rape fic. God I hate those and vore ..... But to each their porn .... get it instead of own ... *cricket chirping* ... ah shut up. Writing wise hymn .... clop seemed a little rushed ... not saying you need 2k words for the scene but it's like ... Let's bang ... drops pants .... lasts 1 minute then rolls over and goes to sleep ..... like that him and AJ have a history instead of here's my sister now bang her.
This story was alright. Personally, I think it should have ended when Applebloom fell asleep. Her suddenly waking up and asking her to fuck him was a little abrupt. And the ending was very abrupt. Don't wanna sound mean, but should've quit while you were ahead.
This was a lovely read. I expected to have to deal with some small dick degradation but this was actually quite empowering and wholesome. I know it's been a while but I hope you continue this.
please kill yourself and take your pedo ass out of the gene pool.
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I mean, part 2 accomplished. :/
8902119
Boi your getting mad over cartoon horse porn, just stop
not as good as the magnum opus Deathly Bloodblade, but i'll rate this a solid car crash out of an international tragedy
Wow, guess these people have never seen a foalcon fic before. Ah well, it’s written pretty well, so the likes will outstrip the dislikes soon. Don’t let that jackass first comment discourage you from going on, far too little quality foalcon fics coming out these days.
Ehhhh.... not bad .... At least it's consensual ..... would they rather have another CMC rape fic. God I hate those and vore ..... But to each their porn .... get it instead of own ... *cricket chirping* ... ah shut up. Writing wise hymn .... clop seemed a little rushed ... not saying you need 2k words for the scene but it's like ... Let's bang ... drops pants .... lasts 1 minute then rolls over and goes to sleep ..... like that him and AJ have a history instead of here's my sister now bang her.
YIKES!
Better than futa. Upvoted.
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I know, right
Biggest reason I downvoted: Would prefer if his sperm did not enter egg but still quenched heat.
moar please :)
This story was alright. Personally, I think it should have ended when Applebloom fell asleep. Her suddenly waking up and asking her to fuck him was a little abrupt. And the ending was very abrupt. Don't wanna sound mean, but should've quit while you were ahead.
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JESUS PONY FUCKING CRIST PUT A WARNING ON THAT LINK OR SOMETHING FOR FUCKS SAKE THAT'S CREEPY!
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I believe that that to be WAFF, but i'm not willing to click on that in case i'm wrong.
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Thank you.
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W.A.F.F: "Warm and fuzzy/fluffy feelings".
good clop. me enjoy
p.s It's not a second person story, so it would be wise to remove the tag.
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Thank you. There was a time where it was, and I never changed it
Keep up the good work, would love to see more...
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69th dislike!
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Congrats'!
It’s almost been a year
This was a lovely read. I expected to have to deal with some small dick degradation but this was actually quite empowering and wholesome. I know it's been a while but I hope you continue this.
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Ughh! Never mind! Boy you look a lot better from the back!
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You jerk!
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Ah hey baby you wanna go somewhere... (incoherent stuttering) wait, wait Quagmire, remember what's on the other side!
LOVE YOUR PROFILE PICTURE KINKY AS HELL