I am pleased to see this story continuing after a long time, hope you have intentions of writing more sooner rather than later. :P

our sister to pick you ok, ok?"

up, ok?"

Anon chuckles. Appleblooms makes her way over to the door.

Applebloom (Without the 'S')

I'm happy to see the story has returned! I hope to see many more chapters from you, good sir.

I thought this is Cancelled but Nope!

We've been sorely lacking in human X pony foalcon lately. I'm glad you picked this up again! Keep it up!

Heh, almost as if she's not quite ripe yet. I see what ya did there

Nobody told me this updated . I'm glad it did though. I'll comment again with some corrections later, but for now I'll just say this was a pleasure and I'll patiently wait another 2 years for an update. And even if that never comes, this is still a fine ending to this story. All I ask is that you remember to mark it as "completed" if it comes to that.

This was really great. Cheers!

Just found and read this story for the first time.
Very nice story, i love the idea. Hope this continues!

nice, and its not even done in a creepy tone, so even better

will it continue soon?