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Ringtael


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Life is worthless, chaos is progress and plans are an invitation to disappointment.
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WING IT!!!

This is bucking amaizing. I love this story

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Welcome to the story. Here's hoping it keeps being good, eh?

The song is mine, but I guess there’s more to it than I really considered.

At that particular prime point in time you made a mirror of my soul sweat salty streams of saddening sympathy solution. That was a heavy hook right under my fumbly feelings, an impossible impassable impasse! How could you! I'll bucking hug you if I find you and I'll do if I bucking do! And then I'll do it again.

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Here's hoping.

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Don't get bucking hugged, bruv [] :twilightangry2: []

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Stand still! I have one
H U G ➰ C O U P O N
and I'm going to
USE \\:pinkiecrazy:// IT!

:pinkiesad2: Right about now.

I like this story. I really like it. It makes me laugh, and at times hurt; some of it hits close to home.

Looking forward to reading more. It's damn good stuff.

Good God the story is beautiful I hope it never ends

Someone put the poor, mind-raped guy out of his misery.

Just about choked on my laughter when I spotted the rather obscure reference to another story. I truly wonder if anyone else will notice it...but I don't want to blurt it out, if perhaps you were wondering also. What must I do!? Decisions, decisions! Perhaps I'll keep a diary...lest I turn into a madman.

...this story is slowly making me hate every single pomy he interacts with in this continuity.

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I find Ponies to be generally despicable beings at their core. Yes, they try to be nice, but their brand of kindness of tends to feel false and overly dramatized to me, and a little more than hive mind-y.

Kill him with kindness, amirite?

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And it's not the first time he did so. ;)

I don't know how you made me love and hate luna so much in one chapter, But I want to see more... so much more.

I just wish this guy comes across a changeling that transforms into him and says this:

You may know what I'm going to do ...But that's not going to help you since I know everything you're going to do! Strange isn't it!

“You’re still making me do something because of your will.” I said flatly, my voice like a plateau that had been sanded down to make the bubble in a level sit exactly in the center across the entire surface. Or like Earth-chan’s chest. Whichever.

In the distance you could here a high pitch girly scream shouting "I'M NOT FLAT!!!"

loved this chapter. is that from an actual song though?

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Nah, just had to find a little tune and fill in some rhyming words

This is all build up for a monumental amount of bitching, which is what Celestia asked for in this shitty journal bullshit, so that’s what you’re gonna get you fuckin’ dirty little whore. Yeah, I’m gonna fill you up with my thick, black ink until you’re bursting with words. Slutty ass book.

Kinky on the seems like something twilight would say

If you asked instead of ordered, I’d probably do whatever it was

The only way to know if it was an order or a request is to refuse it.

JBL

This story is pretty horrifying. Favourited despite myself.

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Hey, it's my therapy story. It's not supposed to be a happy one, in all fairness

Comment posted by Dunkle Dank deleted Sep 26th, 2018

I can always appreciate an author who can write dark psychological themes well like this. Honestly, everything in this fic hits a little too close to home for comfort, but the lack of comfort is one of the many reasons I adore fics like this. Looking forward to future chapters!

I have to say, him turning about and being so lovey dovey with Luna doesn't feel right, like its an extension of her screwing with his mind. And maybe its an unpopular opinion, but I hope they don't really end up friends. They don't seem right for one another.

Also its a little dissapointing how Celestia is trying ro keep them rogether rather than taking on responsibility for Anon herself. Luna just doesn't seem capable or willing herself, and it really doesn't seem like she even wanted him in the first place. Celestia tried to make her summon a familiar via trickery, and if not for Cadance Luna would have called up ine with totally random parameters, rather than a mismatched one with one a few things set and all the rest random. Celestia pushed this on Luna in the first place, so she should take him as her familiar. They are obviously far more compatable anways, even without mental damage making him pliable.

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Thanks for the comment, and I hope to hear from you again. As for the story being dark and hitting where it hurts, I only write chapters for this when I'm deeply considering suicide or can't find another way to get the pain out. While I'm glad you enjoy it, just be sure to take care of yourself.

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I have to ask what brought you to the story since I've been getting an awful lot of notifications for something I haven't updated in a good while.
As for your comment, there's a lot of things wrong with Anon's head at this point in the story, and the Tulpa...

So you would think.

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Thank you for your concern. I do my best, but it gets hard sometimes. Reading fics like this remind me that I'm not alone in how I feel. These fics do help, and I'm thankful that you put as much effort into this fic as you do, especially if you only write for this while depressed. It takes a strong soul to take their pain and make something beautiful with it. I can't say I've succeeded at that myself, but I'm not going to stop trying.

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I'm glad I can make you feel less alone by making myself feel less... Garbagio, shall we say.
If you ever do post something, feel free to drop me a PM and I'll happily give it a read. I'm always interested in seeing what my own readers come up with.

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You know that part where is says "Similar/Also Liked"? From there. Didn't see any commonality, but I picked one and read it. *shrugs* Random chance, really.

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Three cheers for random chance doing a dance.

Aaand this chapter lost me. Bye.

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I feel it because I laughed my ass off while writing most of it and that's not the nature of this story, but this was a set up for an actual direction for the story. Something other than Luna fucks up, but it's cool. Luna fucks up, little less cool. Luna fucks up, considerably less cool. I tried to channel anger for this one, but I don't sta angry long. The next part of this will be focuusing on anxiety and paranoia

And Humans having Opioid Cm is Canon from A Thief's Tale: RTR

The plot is a dragged on pity party for an unlikable/unsympathetic audience stand-in and the dialogue sounds so forced/juvenile. The characterisation is way off and raises it's own set of questions (that I won't ask).

im straight up lost on this one.

Well that certainly took a different turn...I’m rather interested to see where this goes next, morbidly curious to be frank.

But the sheer what the fuck levels of bullshittery in this chapter had me laughing harder than I’d care to admit (having to explain to work colleagues WHY I’m laughing so hard was not so fun)

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Yeah, I had way too much fun writing this chapter for it to fit the general tone of the story, but you can't have pits of depression without a giggle every now and then.

Her familiar’s face never truly moved enough to let her know what was on his mind unless he was nearing an extreme corner of an emotion. As it was, his face was flat and he didn’t seem to care about doing the menial favor luna had asked of him, exactly as Celestia had said. She considered whether or not she should just give up and treat him like a normal stallion while she found her seat since Anon was damn near impossible to work with otherwise, and the fear of ruining his mind again was nestled deep in her heart. While Luna hated the fact that she’d Imprinted a Familiar Bond on such a troublesome character, she couldn’t help but hold the smallest, most miniscule amount of respect for Anon. After all, as long as he was petting somepony, he wasn’t being awful.

So... Luna doesn't believe that another sentient being deserves to be treated like one? And she essentially enslaved him, which would be very much illegal in the MLP-verse.

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To explain:
I have yet to write an mlp fanfic where ponies aren't at least xenophobic
She still low-key thinks of him as a wendigo
She is of the opinion that Anon's will doesn't matter because he can't make his own decisions evidenced by his mental instability.

In other words, she expected a lesser creature, so she treats Anon like one, but there's a part of Luna that knows its wrong.

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Honestly stuff like this keeps me coming back for more, regardless of what others may think of this chapter, it clearly shows a varied writing style that emulates various emotional states. And I love it.

Keep it up dude I honestly can’t wait for more!

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The answer to this chapter has been pretty clear, but I literally gave not even a fourth of a s-h-i-t about this story for the first three chapters and people liked it. More than multiple other works with actual plots in my repertoire. Low key a slap in the face.

I honestly don't know what to do with it. I'll probably write more soon because this is hella depressing

So that was a thing. Juat when it looks like Celestia is trying to fix this whole fuckup it turns out she just wants to groom him into being Luna's pet? And then fucks with his head with magic? And then her and Luna both rape him?

I'll be honest, it looks like the story has taken a turn for the stupid, with everyone being abhorrent and abusive for no explicable reason. It seems as if Celestia might just be as bad as Luna.

Edited.

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If it makes you feel any better, the abuse stops, Anon was fucking with them hardcore and got a freeJ out of it, and it's probably gonna get stupider at points. I already think that the popularity of the first few chapters is stupid.

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