A bored delinquent and an exiled prodigy. When a MyStable profile called Anon-A-Miss sabotages all of Sunset's hard work and leaves her friendless except for a chance encounter, will she come back from it?
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A sweet chapter but I wonder what comes next for them all. U seem to pair Sunset with badgirls who have hearts of gold.
If it's a complete reset, does she really have to permanently leave? Can she not just go trough the portal and immediately come back perfectly healed?
Okay, color me intrigued. This just keeps on getting more and more interestin'...
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Seems a bit of a copout if you ask me, a deus ex machina. It'd just be a little too easy for Sunset to just go through the portal, and come back out completely fine and dandy.
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Her human form would be saved as the new ‘template’ remember? So she would come back in her human state because the portal remembers her. It’s like a save state that only gets cleared after enough time.
Edit: to clarify, there are two templates; a human one and a pony one. So the portal remembers her last ‘pony template’ as being the one that passed through during the fall formal, but if she goes through now the portal will ‘save over’ her last human template with her new updated state; her crippled state. She’s have to wait years for that human template to fade if she wanted to come back with her legs working.
Think of it like a forced auto save function.
Well this is both devastating and freaking adorable. I'm kind of surprised Sunset hasn't seen the obvious solution here, though. I mean, unless there are some inter-dimensional laws we aren't aware of, nothing's stopping Gilda from going with Sunset to Equestria, right? And it's not like Gilda has any real attachments to this world other than Sunset, so she's pretty much guaranteed to follow her, so what's the big deal?
Edit: Also, I love the song title/chapter title thing. Now I'm trying to guess what songs might come up next. I figure Everlong is a possibility at some point, put I may be biased.
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Ah, I see.
Is there any reason GIlda couldn't just, you know, go through the portal with Sunset? If she'll reset to her healthy fully-functional "save-sate", and Gilda really doesn't have anything tying her down to the world, wouldn't the pair of them going to Equestria be a win-win?
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Eh, Twilight might get uppity at the possibility of two Gilda's meeting ripping apart the fabric of space-time or something like that. Personally I'd love for them both to move to Equestria for a few years until Sunset's human template is reconstructed
The attackers have been arrested, the Rainbooms are obsolete, Sunset's found true love. How much better can this story get?
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Have Princess Twilight and Sci-Twi met yet? Cause I think that would be the test scenario. Probably won't be a problem.
Another John Denver reference? You are officially my favorite author on this site.
thaumaturgical
common mistake in term
thamaturgy isn't a form of magic, it goes farther then that, it manipulating the energies that form the universe, pretty much alchemy's bigger more badass brother. the only problem is the more powerful you get the more eldritch beings well want to consume you.
but yeah not magic.
if twilight where capable of thaumaturgy, she could easily reduce the fragments into energy and remove them before healing any and all damage without there being any sign it ever happened.
I'm really enjoying this story, though I have to wonder with Gilda's love of flying if she would insist on both of then going through the portal.
I wanna see a fic where Sunset gets rescued by Fluffle Puff and EQG Chrysalis.
Yay. Reading at work!
Hm. Not Spanish. Consider: Niña. Chica. Chava. Amor. Cariño. (Although it ends with an o, it's technically usable for either sex)
This makes so sad and so happy at the same time.
It's been a long time since I've checked my updates so often just for one story that I forgot just how good it can feel when the update actually comes. This story is honestly just so damn good, from the pairing itself to small things like Luna's reaction to losing a bet. It gives me the warm-fuzzies without just being a fluff piece.
Thanks for getting me excited over a fanfic again, it's something I didn't know I missed so much.
yes
i really want to see what happens next
the fallout
seeing if she will be able to walk againand
the sex WHEN WILL THAT HAPPEN!?
also i REALLY want to see the artists page now XD
I seriously don't see how gilda can't go to equestria with sunset. I figure if she loves her enough then a jaunt to another world is nothing.
You are going to make a lot of readers cry if these two have a fight over Sunset's possible return to Equestria.
And I hope the Rainbooms and a certain terrible trip never live down what their actions caused.
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Since I'm not sure about your sources, I'll just say that yes you are correct on a technical level. The word is actually cariño but is really not used for women to be honest. That being said I can confirm that it is used colloquially as slang, essentially, because Crankshaft is almost literally just my uncle. I love my uncle to death and he talks exactly like that, including his use of the word cariña. It's not actually correct but a lot of spanish slang, especially state-side slang rather than central american mexican slang varies wildly.
I'm not certain how common it is in other areas but I can at least say among my family and friends it's a pretty well understood word.
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This potentiality will be addressed in a future chapter.
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Thaumaturgy has a variety of definitions depending on what you're reading. In Urban Fantasy novels like The Dresden Files, it's used to define a certain form of long-winded ritual magic, in Dungeons and Dragons it's used almost interchangeably with and form of spellcasting, and even in other fimfic's like iisaw's Alicorn Mystery Series thaumaturgy is literally just unicorn magic.
9025773 Might be localized. In over 20 years of living in Mexico and interacting with most of South America I've never, ever, heard cariña. Even the RAE doesn't recognize the word, so as a Spanish speaker, it really threw me off.
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Oh, okay, yeah state-side hispanic slang is waaaaay different than actual mexico mexican slang. At least in my experience it has been.
I grew up in a small tight-knit Mexican community so it might also just be local slang too.
9025816 Well, other than jumping out at me in confusion... it didn't take anything from the chapter loved it
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I'm really glad you enjoy it so far, thanks for checking in on that though, I appreciate the effort and time you took.
God damn this was a amazing chapter
Their love for each other, really holds no boundaries. Despite Sunset now being a cripple, this new roadblock will never stop Gilda from loving her less.
P.S. I can get a shorter & simple explanation to what Twilight said to Sunset?
"She just liked reminded herself that the girl that had"
"She just liked reminding herself that the girl that had"?
"with some paper cups sticking out a dispenser"
"with some paper cups sticking out of a dispenser"?
"for breath as soon as soon as she pulled the cup"
"for breath as soon as she pulled the cup"?
"I have ask, are you alright"
"I have to ask, are you alright"?
"from whole cloth far as the system"
"from whole cloth as far as the system"?
"murmured against Sunset neck"
"murmured against Sunset's neck"?
"laughed as Sunset eyes went wide"
"laughed as Sunset's eyes went wide"?
"Crankshaft crooked and eyebrow up"
"Crankshaft crooked an eyebrow up"?
"the part of brain that liked"
"the part of her brain that liked"?
"Archmaga of Canterlot"
I'm not sure whether you're just using a different word, but just in case, "Archmage"?
"Giving up Gilda."
...You know, Sunset, it's not as if Gilda has a particularly large number of firm ties to this world. You could at least look into the possibility of both of you moving.
"I’ve been going out of mind in here"
"I’ve been going out of my mind in here"?
Still enjoying this story. :D
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"This potentiality will be addressed in a future chapter."
Ah, good. :)
Aw man no bloody revenge from Gilda 😞 love the chapter though 😍
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I appreciate the corrections, seems like no matter how many rounds of edits I go through there's always at least a handful of errors left over. As for the bit about Twilight; Magus is actually a male term, like King, or Count. Maga is the feminine form of the title.
And to address the thing about Gilda and Sunset that everyone is latching onto. It is important to remember that this is Sunset we're talking about. The idea of trying to get someone to give up their entire world (literally) for her sake is asking for so much (regardless of whether or not it makes practical logistical sense) that it wouldn't, and doesn't, even occur to her as an option.
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The longer Sunset stays on "Earth", the more adapted she is to her human body, to the point that she eventually won't be compatible with a pony form at all, meaning that, should she stay longer, she would be able to go back, but then there would be a human Sunset in a wheelchair rollin' 'round, for some reason I don't think that would go over well.
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"I appreciate the corrections, seems like no matter how many rounds of edits I go through there's always at least a handful of errors left over."
I am well familiar with this phenomenon, yes (from both sides).
"As for the bit about Twilight; Magus is actually a male term, like King, or Count. Maga is the feminine form of the title."
Oh, neat; thanks.
"And to address the thing about Gilda and Sunset that everyone is latching onto. It is important to remember that this is Sunset we're talking about. The idea of trying to get someone to give up their entire world (literally) for her sake is asking for so much (regardless of whether or not it makes practical logistical sense) that it wouldn't, and doesn't, even occur to her as an option."
Sigh. Yep, sounds quite plausible; thanks. :)
I do hope someone thinks of it and mentions it to them before things get too bad, though (assuming it would work).
(Gilda might well think of it, but she'd have to know Equestria and the offer were even things first.)
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Hm. My understanding was that the mirror passage back to Equestria would always transform her into a pony, but that it's currently still using her previously saved pony form. If too much time passes, it instead generates a new pony form based on her current human form, whatever that is, and in this case would generate it complete with the pony version of Sunset's injury.
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I thought that's what it meant, I don't fuckin' know. I don't know magic talk.
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Well, I could also be wrong, but that was how I understood it.
My eyes were watery throughout this chapter. I really love this story. Each chapter seems to end in such a way that, if there was never an update, we’d still be left with a satisfying conclusion. Having read too many fics that die on cliffhangers, words can barely express my gratitude. That being said... MOAR PLS!!
I had an idea of a way to deal with the legs given the magical mechanics of the mirror as explained in the chapter though. Couldn’t the two hop through the mirror, wait an appropriate amount of time for the mirror to lose their templates, then hop back. Heck, given Gilda’s wish to fly, maybe they wouldn’t head back.
Twilight asks if sunset wants to go home, and sunset does. But home is with Gilda now, and she knows it too. I want to be like Gilda when I find my special someone. I want to make sure I give them everything that I can because giving is what i’m good at. It takes a really good and original plot to hook me in to reading the latest chapter at 4 in the morning, but i’d do it for this story over and over again because of how much I love it!
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Ohhhhhh.... Well now, that makes more sense now.... And suddenly I feel more depressed for Sunset now...
This is the first Anon-A-Miss fanfic I've read which Gilda isn't the Antagonist against Sunset, heck siding and becoming Sunset's saving grace. Very well done.
Although did Gilda even tell Sunset about who Anon-A-Miss really is or does Gila want Sunset more time off before telling the truth (unless I missed the part where Sunset knew)
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Good catch, that will be something else that comes up later.
Short of it though, Sunset does not know.
Gonna need me more of this post haste. Weekly is not okay.
I... wow, I didn't expect this at all. I figured Sunset would heal just fine because of her magic. I really like the way you're handling her losing the use of her legs and am very interested to see where this is going.
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Ah yes, Sunset Shimmer, the epitome of athleticism
I LIVED BITCHES! Perfect absolutely perfect!
That is exactly why it isn't her it is too obvious
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I'm not quite following: why who isn't who?
img.pr0gramm.com/2014/09/13/b8659074d5979aa1.jpg , cuz I removed them!
Okay..Susnet is a Vegeta fan...but she is also forgeting an option. Have Gilda go with her
ALSO I CALLED TEXT MESSAGE BEFORE SCROLLING DOWN!
ugh, these two are so adorable