A bored delinquent and an exiled prodigy. When a MyStable profile called Anon-A-Miss sabotages all of Sunset's hard work and leaves her friendless except for a chance encounter, will she come back from it?
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God, I wanted to hug Gilda here. I've been there, I have. Maybe not to her extreme, but I have. There's a reason I'm 20 and yet I still don't have a high-school degree.
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Gilda displays almost all of the biggest signs of undiagnosed Dyslexia, it's hard when you feel like you're just bad at normal stuff and it's even harder not to be angry at that. It's part of why I wanted her to be this way, that anger and how she grows past it is part of who she is intrinsically.
A few things:
1) I'm 97% sure this story is going to end on a wedding scene.
2) I'm 91.37% sure that at some point towards the climax, Gilda is going to be fighting someone from her past, and that person is going to call her stupid. Gilda is going to proceed to beat the shit out of them, ending the fight by saying "I'm not stupid. I'm dyslexic."
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Really glad to hear it, I love it when my readers are wrapped up in a story.
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I can’t say
“She was a real nightmare,”
I see what you did there.
You're killing me, smalls!
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This has by and far been one of my favorite chapters to write. Gilda’s first sight of Sunset was a story I’ve been waiting to tell forever.
Oh man that chapter touched my soul
OHMAHGERD! So beautiful! I swear I was close to tears when Gilda showed the ring and proposed for real!
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it explains her talent with engines and engineering here, dyslexia as i understand it is like seeing the world in three dimensions, thats the reason reading is hard because the dyslexic mind is attempting to perceive two dimensions on three.
This is one of the best chapters in any fic that I have ever read by a huge margin.
There isn't a gif to properly express the level of feelings this chapter gave me.
At the risk of sounding like a corny dope, this story is truly beautiful.
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Really glad you folks loved this chapter. It was one of my favorite chapters to write.
"The voice roars and my world goes white as the lightning and thunder crashes around me."
"The voice roars and my world goes white as the lightning and thunder crash around me."?
"Luna said, looked torn and not a little embarrassed."
"Luna said, looking torn and not a little embarrassed."?
"think of you as a part my family."
"think of you as a part of my family."?
"Gilda pulled away settled back into the couch"
"Gilda pulled away and settled back into the couch"?
"Tossing the wrapped paper aside"
"Tossing the wrapping paper aside"?
"small chipping near on end of the bar"
"small chipping near one end of the bar"?
"“But this one?” Luna gestures to the"
"“But this one?” Luna gestured to the"?
"that only grew as her girlfriend glare at her."
"that only grew as her girlfriend glared at her."?
"was no lack of passion from young Marexican woman as she looped"
"was no lack of passion from the young Marexican woman as she looped"?
"her eyes widening as reached the end"
"her eyes widening as she reached the end"?
"and it couldn’t have happened to nicer pair of mutinous traitors"
"and it couldn’t have happened to a nicer pair of mutinous traitors"?
"and laid her hand on smooth plastic of the headset Vinyl had given"
"and laid her hand on the smooth plastic of the headset Vinyl had given"?
"Oh come on! That’s actually a phrase here!” Sunset shouts, throwing her"
"Oh come on! That’s actually a phrase here!” Sunset shouted, throwing her"?
"main streets and sidewalks of the city has been kept open and free of sleet."
"main streets and sidewalks of the city had been kept open and free of sleet."?
"I was sorta always a little in love you, savvy?"
"I was sorta always a little in love with you, savvy?"?
"grimacing as felt the unfamiliar and unwelcome nausea"
"grimacing as she felt the unfamiliar and unwelcome nausea"?
"clocks began counting down to to midnight."
"clocks began counting down to midnight."?
"Sunset eyes widened as she watched her girlfriend wing through the sky, spiraling around and around, clouds and ice particles formed in the center of the space Gilda was circling until finally the winged girl stopped and held out her hands."
"Sunset's eyes widened as she watched her girlfriend wing through the sky, spiraling around and around, clouds and ice particles forming in the center of the space Gilda was circling until finally the winged girl stopped and held out her hands."?
"Flapping upwards, Gilda shot forward and then pitched down, flaring her wings once she got to the edge of the roof and ran to Sunset’s side and dropping to her knees panting heavily."
"Flapping upwards, Gilda shot forward and then pitched down, flaring her wings once she got to the edge of the roof, then running to Sunset’s side and dropping to her knees panting heavily."?
Not sure about my proposal there, sorry, but it seemed like something should change.
Another excellent one. :)
So beautiful
I swear to God that If this has a sad ending I will sneak into your house and cry angry tears over everything you own! XD
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Don't worry, my best girls are getting their happy ending eventually. It's gonna be a rough road though.
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Would you say it's going to be a... Long Road To Friendship?
Whoops, wrong author!
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then your things are safe form my tears of rage.
So Gilda now has weapons that make her Thor & she's getting the hang of her powers as well as giving Sunset a promise ring.... What a way to end the year! Also...
Deadpool 2 reference!
Gonna be a bit of a nerd here for a sec:
I'm really getting a sort of super-person feeling here. I mean come on! Gilda's learning to control her powers and has a magical spear which makes her Thor. And then I'm almost thinking Sunset as Oracle, for those who know who that is. Y'know, Gilda going to Las Pegasus (or whereever it was) and going after some of the gang, Susnet acting behind the scenes and such.
If I'm honest, I know the chances of that actually happening is probably quite low, but for some super nerd like me, it's a nice thought.
Either way, what I'm looking forward to the most on this fic is everyone's reactions when Sunset goes back to school. She's in a wheelchair, and is being really affectionate to Gilda, who is also going to school much more (probably).
And the ring. Ohohoho, the ring! That's gonna be good, if it actually gets noticed.
Anyway, I just got back from holiday, and was reading this fic throughtout. Keep up the good work, it's nice to see Gilda in a good manner for once. Almost makes me feel guilty of how I usually think of her in the EG universe.
Oh, and perhaps a bit of a personal request? Try to make Sunset a little bit more badass. I can understand why you keep giving her all these breakdowns, but they should start to die down, and, no offence, but it's getting a little repetitive. So far, Gilda has only influenced Sunset in a few ways: smoking, swearing and 'savvy'. Just doesn't seem right, given how much Sunset has influenced Gilda.
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There's gonna be a rough couple of chapters incoming, but this is the tail end where Sunset starts getting a tougher skin. Being that she's lost so much all at once she's pretty emotionally fragile. I also kind of dislike how a lot of stories just gloss over her massive self-esteem issues (in canon) and the kind of serious blow to her mental fortitude losing her entire social circle and becoming a pariah at the same time would be.
The point is to show how much this kind of thing can hurt, both in public and behind closed doors. But I do understand where you're coming from and, Sunset starts to build herself back up right better than ever, she just needs a little more time. Getting back to school is gonna be the big hurdle though, as you'll see in next week's chapter.
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I understand all those reasons, and I honestly agree with you, and I also applaud you for being able to write it in such an emotional way, something it seems many authors can't do, for what I suppose are good reasons.
All I'm saying that after the, say, twentieth time, it sorta becoming predictable.
That, and it's just nice to see the story progressing some more.
Something I forgot to mention in my last comment: the dream Sunset keeps having has a storm in it. Gilda used to know someone called Storm. That's gotta be connected somehow, right?
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Thanks again, very much. sorry it took so long to correct, my week has been pretty busy. I rewrote the last sentence you remarked on, let me know what you think if you get a minute.
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Mm... yes and no. Trust me, you'll know it when you see it.
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"Thanks again, very much. sorry it took so long to correct, my week has been pretty busy."
You're welcome, and no problem. :)
And I hope it was at least good busyness.
"I rewrote the last sentence you remarked on, let me know what you think if you get a minute."
Let's see, then...
[checks]
Yep, that's much better; thanks!
Because both time you ponyed up it was to save sunset. The first time she ponyed up she flew sunset to the hospital saving her life. And the second time was when tempest pointed a gun a sunset also saving sunset
I've gotta be honest, all of the stuff about the gang Gilda used to be in and the foreshadowing about the future magical action-adventure stuff is just not doing it for me at all. It feels like it was taken from a completely different fic, one I wasn't really planning on reading. It's fine, but just not my taste, so I think I might have to drop this story. Which is a shame, since there was a lot about it that I loved, but I'm not about to tell an author what they should or shouldn't write. Keep doing you.
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That's unfortunate, sorry to hear that.
[STRANGLED SQUEAKING HELL-NOISE]
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Isn't it disgustingly cute?
First of all shouldn't that be the other way around and second I can see her point cuz even for me even though I by far am not a morning person as a teenager I could never sleep past 6 in the morning cuz usually I'd wind up being waking up by 5 thumping feet
Deadpool 2 reference?
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Personally I agree with sunset pounding the daylights out the little idiot who thought he had the right to touch her butt without her okay. Besides who knows how much worse he would have gotten if she didn't knock some sense into him before he ended up trying to get into someone pants.
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When it comes to special education help in public schools it needs a ton of work in order to help the kids the most.
pitch-shifted upwards Scootaloo squee