A bored delinquent and an exiled prodigy. When a MyStable profile called Anon-A-Miss sabotages all of Sunset's hard work and leaves her friendless except for a chance encounter, will she come back from it?
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i regret reading this on my phone should have read it at home
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You really should have
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im just glad my phone is waterproof that lake wasent there before
The set up in this chapter was very well paced. Keep up the good work.
I see that Warframe reference you did there
I also look forward to seeing what happens to the Storm King, my personal bet is caught in magic reactor explosion
P.S link for anyone who wants to see the title source
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mPTCq3LiZSE
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Warframe fan are you? All of my chapter titles are a single line from a song.
"thought, firmly as she smiled"
"thought firmly as she smiled"?
"Sunset said with dark laugh"
"Sunset said with a dark laugh"?
"strain showing her face as"
"strain showing on her face as"?
"slipping down Gilda cheeks as she"
"slipping down Gilda's cheeks as she"?
"turning to stare down at Sunshine who felt her"
"turning to stare down at Sunset who felt her"?
"keep herself to hiccuping a"
"keep herself from hiccuping a"?
"Gilda said the lowest, most gentle"
"Gilda said in the lowest, most gentle"?
"cloudy afternoon, held a pleasing contrast"
"cloudy afternoon held a pleasing contrast"?
"outwards towards nothin. No"
"outwards towards nothing. No"?
"And I’m lost on what do about it"
"And I’m lost on what to do about it"?
"chair and tried to relax as she considered"
"chair and trying to relax as she considered"?
"Over a millennia on this world had"
"Over a millennium on this world had"?
"Adagio face fell. “This"
"Adagio's face fell. “This"?
"Sonata slumbed. “I have"
"Sonata slumped. “I have"?
"stared defectedly at the three"
"stared dejectedly at the three"?
"and raised on hand in"
"and raised one hand in"?
"the driver’s seat of her, she wrinkled"
Missing word(s)?
"grinned as got out of the driveway"
"grinned as she got out of the driveway"?
"briefly of a her old home"
"briefly of her old home"?
"It was squat, two-story building"
"It was a squat, two-story building"?
"wasn’t likely already sinking his claws into Canterlot’s underbelly already."
One too many "already"s?
"rested easy over her her shoulders and"
"rested easy over her shoulders and"?
"It was basic hairpin"
"It was a basic hairpin"?
"days to passive restore itself"
"days to passively restore itself"?
"working in a tunic funnel that"
"working in a thaumic funnel that"?
"actively collect particles in the"
"actively collected particles in the"?
"Gilda kisses trailed down Sunset’s"
"Gilda's kisses trailed down Sunset’s"?
"being in love in Sunset, realised"
"being in love with Sunset, realised"?
"tugged the sheets over to two"
"tugged the sheets over the two"?
Good luck with the end-of-year work and family stuff!
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Edits get! Thanks again for your attentiveness, and happy hearth's warming
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very big fan, clocked bout 1.7k hours in service to the Lotus
also I've just know realized that about the chapter titles, not a very big music buff so it slipped under my radar
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No problem, and you're welcome. :)
And a happy hearth's warming to you as well!
While Sunset & Glida had a more emotional moment (and some sweet love makin') in this chapter, it was to see that heartwarming scene with Adagio & Aria... Also it was so weird & shocking to read that flashback of Sunset being a bitch... Time sure can change people...
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I mean, it's her pre-EQG first movie, she was a real bitch back then.
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Yeah, but still even though it was in a flashback, to see Sunset in her old ways is so shocking.
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true, I also think it's really important to show it though, because a big part of this story is her growth, and how much Sunset herself has changed from the person she used to be. I mean, that's sort of her whole thing in canon too, the idea that just because you were a monster once doesn't mean you have to be that forever, and that you could look back on yourself in a years time, or less, and not even recognise that person.
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Amen to that, my wise friend. Sunset has come so far & grown so much since then...
It's like that saying from Thomas Jefferson: "those who do not study the past are doomed to repeat it" to that I'd like to add; regardless history has a tendency to repeat itself whether you realize it or not