A bored delinquent and an exiled prodigy. When a MyStable profile called Anon-A-Miss sabotages all of Sunset's hard work and leaves her friendless except for a chance encounter, will she come back from it?
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Okay, that was hot. And then it quickly became sweet with this one line and the conversation that ensued.
...but if she's paralyzed, how's she feeling anything?
Damn...ok um, honestly despite how descriptive this chapter was it felt more romantic than sexual if that makes any sense.
I didn't get a 'two horny people going at it' vibe I got a 'two people loving each other' vibe.
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Paralysis isn’t a half and half thing. For Sunset, her paralysis begins part way down her thigh to her feet, which is a relatively common result of spinal damage, nerve damage in the spine is spectrum. Only in more extreme cases like spinal severing or severe nerve damage is the fee full cut off at the waist. Sunset spinal damage is relatively moderate for a back injury so the most distal extremities are numb, but she has feeling closer to her trunk. Most wheelchair bound people are perfectly capable of sexual activity.
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That was on purpose. This is a romance story, not erotica, so I wanted it be a tonal match to the rest of Featherfall.
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I wasn't complaining just saying
Ok good times........
But where’s Sunset and Tempest?
trust you to make me enjoy a sex scene, like legitemetaly i cant get over how well this is written. i feel that the characters anrt just part of a show but are there own and its just wow.
Damn that was um idd I'm not used to reading that kind of thing not that it was bad I kinda liked it
Oh mamacita, this lived up to sexual tension that was building for over a month & now I'm aroused for more.
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Good to know I contributed to some kind of sexual awakening, lol. Sorry about that.
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Really glad you enjoyed it, the goal was to make it feel like an organic part of the story, not just a gratuitous indulgence chapter.
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No it's all good like i said i kinda liked it it's just for me that it was hinted at but i may have missed something well reading if it's brought to our attention so for me it was just like bam
"and pulled herself free of the little nest of that she’d swaddled her"
Nest of what? Blankets?
"Sunset thoughts erupted into dread"
"Sunset's thoughts erupted into dread"?
"leaning back further and further and Gilda got closer and closer"
That could work, but did you mean "leaning back further and further as Gilda got closer and closer"?
"the soaked fabric of Sunset panties, pressing"
"the soaked fabric of Sunset's panties, pressing"?
"a moment of silence Sunset to look up at Gilda to"
"a moment of silence Sunset looked up at Gilda to"?
"the panties away, exposing Sunset dripping"
"the panties away, exposing Sunset's dripping"?
"Sunset’s breathed hard"
"Sunset breathed hard"?
"up at the sight before her, Gilda smiled lazily down at"
"up at the sight before her; Gilda smiled lazily down at"?
"lick me…”
Sunset did exactly that"
Extra line break?
Perfect blend of romance and smut. Nicely done
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yea like i was apprehensive i thought it would take away from it but much rather it feels like it belongs, its still filled with emotional. the whole book is just fantastic for real i never really exspect this level of quality so im really happily suprised.
Yes!
Finally! XD
I loved this chapter. It was hot and romantic.
I love how these 2 are and I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Thanks again for the corrections!
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You're welcome. :)
"Also, yes, the walk back was just quiet."
Thanks.
This chapter is genuine romance. This is what love truly is: doubt, fear, empathy, joy, exhilaration, and compassion between partners.