A bored delinquent and an exiled prodigy. When a MyStable profile called Anon-A-Miss sabotages all of Sunset's hard work and leaves her friendless except for a chance encounter, will she come back from it?
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So, the forgiving starts, and the healing. Least I hope so, but given this is a two parter, things have a very good chance of going to shit very soon and knowing this story they probably will.
Every time this updates my damn allergies pop up. (this is your fault)
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*looks at the part 2 document nervously*
I have no idea what you're talking about.
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And that basically just confirmed things for me.
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well it's not like I can go: end of arc II, onto arc III, but everything is resolved, now can I?
Life is an uphill battle, it seems the next battle is about to get started.
Good 1st partš
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Technically you could... but that'd turn this into a very different story. Like running headfirst into a shoggoth in the very last chapter of At The Mountains of Madness only to be offered tea, crumpets and a esoteric discussion on non-Euclidean embroidery.
damn it Dashie you're always the petty stubborn one in these fics - loyalty my ass
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That's the thing, she is loyal... But also a teenager without a lick of forethoughtfullnes in her entire being. She felt she and her friends, the ones she's most loyal to, were betrayed - what would be the most grievous crime one can commit, to her - and she reacted accordingly. Then she found that she screwed up, but she doesn't know how to do anything about it, because again moronic teenager.
Then she goes and screwed up with Gilda, because she's a teenager that has no idea how to talk about her feelings and so she fucked up.
Now she tried... But she's not one that can simply accept losing what made her special to the friend that was her first love and rejected her. Forever. And then took her magic. How can a somewhat blind Loyalty forgive that?
See, Rainbow is a child. Hell, they all are, on different levels. A responsible and sensible adult would see that she's the most fragile one right now, the one that needs help not to make HORRIBLE decisions, for such their duty. But there's none that knows what's happening, and the teenagers that do have no real interest in doing it/don't realize how perilous things are right now.
Rainbow is not going to accept losing everything, specially magic. Not to her stupidity. She's most likely going to find new magic the worst possible way, and have to be defeated... But will Sunset be able to offer her hand in friendship, knowing she's the source of the hate? Knowing why it happened?
Knowing that if she doesn't it will all be for naught?
If there's a fourth Arc or a sequel I'd say it'll be about Rainbow.
Either that or she'll grow up in one of the most painful ways, discovering that you can and do lose things forever due to your actions, even when you didn't know about that, and that there's no one that's responsible for it but yourself.
And that others can choose to abandon you too, and Loyalty is not endless. Not even for the bearer.
Aside from some syntax errors, this a FANTASTIC character. I'm eagerly waiting to see what happens next. KEEP IT UP!!!
"darting back and force as"
"darting back and forth as"?
"she muttered Coltantian curses"
"she muttered Coltlantian curses"?
(I'm not sure about that one; I didn't find or remember a previous use in this story, but I might have missed one. Still, though I'd point it out just in case.)
"up into a bright bouncy curls"
"up into bright bouncy curls"?
"high pitched, shriek of laughter"
"high pitched shriek of laughter"?
"come to life as as face contorted"
"come to life as her face contorted"?
"Rainbowās gut like cold ball of iron"
"Rainbowās gut like a cold ball of iron"?
"word out as Gilda hand shot out"
"word out as Gilda's hand shot out"?
"moment she got to to Sunset"
"moment she got to Sunset"?
"She never wanted to happen again"
"She never wanted it to happen again"?
"shaking the sow of her jeans and"
The sow of her jeans? What does that mean? It doesn't make sense to me, nor did I find some suitable-seeming meaning in a dictionary, but I'm not sure what it'd be a typo of, either.
"before look pensive and amending"
"before looking pensive and amending"?
"stared silently as Sunset for several"
"stared silently at Sunset for several"?
"Iām actually a equine-like quadruped"
"Iām actually an equine-like quadruped"?
"frowned as he remembered"
"frowned as she remembered"?
"as a powerful but calming seemed to"
A powerful but calming what?
"pale hands on the grey cellists cheeks"
"pale hands on the grey cellist's cheeks"?
"and turning the blondes face to"
"and turning the blonde's face to"?
"Iām hardly on to judge, donāt"
"Iām hardly one to judge, donāt"?
"Octavia raised and eyebrow and"
"Octavia raised an eyebrow and"?
"almost as suddenly as it had began. Even"
"almost as suddenly as it had begun. Even"?
"but I know that the āold meā talking"
"but I know that's the āold meā talking"?
"had to clench to her fists and"
"had to clench her fists and"?
"as she gulped in ragged, breaths"
"as she gulped in ragged breaths"?
"opened up the cover to real page."
I'm not sure what you were trying to say there, sorry.
"a redheaded girl with deliriously happy"
"a redheaded girl with a deliriously happy"?
I have to admit, from the chapter title, I was expecting a violent confrontation on Twilight's side of the plot. Certainly not complaining about what I got instead, though. :)
Of course... we'll see what Part 2 brings...
Mmm, Rainbow Dash walked away angry. That kind of reaction usually turns into a recipe for future troubles. Hopefully that won't be the case but...š¤
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Words of a hero
Makes me wonder if everyone is hooking up if princess twilight takes sunset advice about getting some Griffon action~
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Let the gay flow my friend, let it flow free.
C'mon Dash. I believe in you. Sure, you've been well and truly rejected by Gilda now even as a potential friend, sure Sunset doesn't trust you because you've been an idiot and can't control your teenage emotions, sure AJ can get away with Makin' it about herself after you just got confronted and shit on for doing the same. But it's okay girl, you just need a Big Damn Hero moment! (Though I'm certain you'd muck that up too, sadly.) Even so, you've got me in your corner still. Show em what for RD!
So the unthinkable has happened... Sunset & The Humane 5 (minus Dash) are back together again.... But what now?
Great chapter.
I see the sirens arguing over who gets to try it on lol
Screw you RD. Just screw you.
I swear if Penny starts using a massive hammer.... It will make too much sense.
Ummm what about the new danger!? XD
Also I'm shocked rarity didn't just start making Gildas dress right then and there.
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Thanks again for your corrections, sorry for not fixing them earlier but I came down with a cold again. As always, you're a gift
Kinda bummed the girls lost the EOH.
Fluttershy giggled lightly. āNo, no hard feelings at all,ā she replied. āHonestly Iād trade the Element away a hundred times if it meant being friends with Sunset again, besidesā¦ I donāt need a magical artifact to be kind, right?ā
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Hmm, i see. But what about to 101st time eh?
Euch, I'm enjoying this story enough for the most part, but as in almost every Anon-a-miss story the mane six get way more crap then they should. And now the elements thing again, because of course it has to be in an anon-a-miss story.
And as in every anon-a-miss story, the mane six just take it because they deserve it, even though they don't. Sunset finds a new group of friends who immediately hate the mane six without really knowing them because Sunset is so amazing and how dare they. Kudos for going a different route with Rainbow. Although I personally feel it's really out of character for her to be this stupid for this long. She usually is quicker on the uptake and when she realises she's being an idiot she tries to fix things right away.
What is it in the anon-a-miss story that makes so many authors want to follow this pattern? I feel I've read this story ten times over by now, and it stretches my disbelief way too much every time.
The rest of the story is interesting and entertaining. The Storm King, Gilda's past, Zee and Twilight, Sunset's struggle with her new life. I'm gladly going to finish reading it because of that. Those done-to-death anon-a-miss cliches just really take me out of the story whenever they happen, which is a shame.
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I'm genuinely confused when you say the dont actually deserve it. They did a terrible thing to Sunset, and were utterly unrepentant until the dirty laundry that their own siblings did it aired and they felt like the assholes they were.
Man, I don't know whether to call it cruel or kind to have the new Element Holders meet the old and show off the transfer. But I do know it was honest and allowed for some form of closure.
Nah that's adagio's job now ;)
Gilda's there to male sure ya stay loyal :P
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Well some of them hate them because they hurt sunset. Penny didn't hate them because she didn't know their history together and only knew there was bad blood between the two groups. She decided to give them a chance because she wanted to make a friend.
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She have to learn to slow down that brain of hers for her to actually learn her lessons. She won't get far in life if she doesn't learn to think before acting. Kissing a girl who taken how stupid do you want to be especially when it someone's girlfriend who you want to make up with.
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The problem is growing up is about learning from your mistakes and she doesn't learn. Instead talking with her friends she loses them to a petty fight that didn't need to happen and when sunset was looking bad before they had even talked with her they had all but decided she was guilty and the lack of a missing phone just proved it in their mind. She found out sunset wasn't guilty and decided to go after her girlfriend despite wanting to make peace with her and knowing that gilda had already pushed her away from any kind of relationship with her. Loyalty would have accepted that Gilda was sunset's girlfriend and she had to move on to someone else who wanted her in every way.