A bored delinquent and an exiled prodigy. When a MyStable profile called Anon-A-Miss sabotages all of Sunset's hard work and leaves her friendless except for a chance encounter, will she come back from it?
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I am worried about Twilight. Zee is rubbing off on her.
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Legitimately? Twi ain't the healthiest person either. It's her first relationship, it's really intense, and she's kind of... Obsessive. She had none of the emotional growth her counterpart got.
Huh, so there is a sane reason for Sunset not to use magic to help with the little things from the legs. But it won't take more than a couple of years for her to be able to.
Also that "never" might just as well be done fifteen years at most, considering what she could do combining both modern science, magic and the bleeding edge advances of today. I bet she'll be waking again in less than twenty years, most likely less than ten. Hell, it wouldn't surprise me if she did before the end of college time.
That doesn't include physical aggression, Twilight. Let's just hope you don't get too broken by it at the end.
I really do hope things work out for Twi and Zee by the end of it all.
"much of it laying on the couch with"
"much of it lying on the couch with"?
"terrible sounding things; running from"
"terrible sounding things: running from"?
"Sunset remember Tempest admiring"
"Sunset remembered Tempest admiring"?
"thought, laying in bed beside her snoozing girlfriend who was laying shirtless"
"thought, lying in bed beside her snoozing girlfriend who was lying shirtless"?
"less trouble that normal"
"less trouble than normal"?
"Maybe they I should give them a"
"Maybe I should give them a"?
"carefully down the the steps"
"carefully down the steps"?
"her a few cans of pain."
"her a few cans of paint."?
"house, checking every room checking every room on"
"house, checking every room on"?
"causing her stagger back"
"causing her to stagger back"?
"go!” Gilda voice sounded"
"go!” Gilda's voice sounded"?
"It was a several inches too"
"It was several inches too"?
"Sunset laying still, bleeding out"
"Sunset lying still, bleeding out"?
"retching into it as she body violently"
"retching into it as her body violently"?
"before stepping out of shower"
"before stepping out of the shower"?
"bottom step and starting pulling on her"
"bottom step and started pulling on her"?
"where she knew Sunset she suddenly"
"where she knew Sunset was she suddenly"?
"laughed as her turned to walk"
"laughed as he turned to walk"?
"nudging her shoulder against hers"
"nudging his shoulder against hers"?
"and cigarette hung, smoldering"
"and a cigarette hung, smoldering"?
"at the messenger back at her"
"at the messenger bag at her"?
"Sunset’s returned the embrace"
"Sunset returned the embrace"?
"resting on on Sunset’s shoulder"
"resting on Sunset’s shoulder"?
"Woke up oday and"
"Woke up today and"?
"Sunset eyes widened and Gilda"
"Sunset's eyes widened and Gilda"?
"buried her face her hands and shook"
"buried her face in her hands and shook"?
"reaching out of tangle her fingers"
"reaching out to tangle her fingers"?
"together as he tried to work through"
"together as she tried to work through"?
"her words “You said you"
"her words. “You said you"?
"asking you too,” Sunset responding, rolling"
"asking you to,” Sunset responded, rolling"?
"dug around until inside it until she"
"dug around inside it until she"?
"was give you face full of paint"
"was give you a face full of paint"?
"just as Sunset finger settled on"
"just as Sunset's finger settled on"?
"made several sharp movement as she paint emerged"
"made several sharp movements as the paint emerged"?
"Sunset said with laugh as she tucked"
"Sunset said with a laugh as she tucked"?
"at Zee’s blithe, commentary."
"at Zee’s blithe commentary."?
"in anger as her eyes blazing"
"in anger and her eyes blazing"?
"crossed her cheek, an instant later"
"crossed her cheek; an instant later"?
"snapped across Twilight eyes"
"snapped across Twilight's eyes"?
"funeral pall over over the trashed"
"funeral pall over the trashed"?
"mean it lass.. Swear I"
"mean it lass... Swear I"?
"Twilight turned back to readout"
"Twilight turned back to the readout"?
"you think about it was kind of inevitable"
"you think about it it was kind of inevitable"?
"If he small windows near"
"If the small windows near"?
"There were not cracked windows"
"There were no cracked windows"?
"hired out to do it; constantly"
"hired out to do it, constantly"?
"you don’t care about cares, honey"
"you don’t care about cars, honey"?
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oh shit how did i skim over THAT Part holy shiiitttt
Me thinks the dark magic is lending a hand to the worst in our two favorite negatives here. Mayhaps some daydream vs midnight by the end here hmm?
Ha! Dude, hearing that from a former gang member cracks me up. Down in Mexico City that's something you'd hear from fresas, savvy?
Mmm, I don't know. In a relationship 'if I gotta hit ya I gotta quit ya' magical influence or not. I understand they have feelings for each other and all but the fact that SciTwi has to prep defensive counter-measures beforehand is full blown proof of unhealthy.
Honestly, although I get the feeling Twilight isn't the most emotionally stable person either, I wouldn't stay in that relationship of hers with Zee much longer. I can only guess how this ends, but none of those outcomes seem particularly positive.
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That's hilarious, I didn't know that actually, I can think of a few of my younger cousins I could make fun of for that. In my neighborhood it was kind of like a short, cocky way to say 'bye'. It always sounded a little rude to me, though, so I never really started saying it but I have a cousin who actually kind reminds of Gilda pre-Sunset who says it all the time.
Imagine all of the posturing and aggression of Gilda from the beginning of Featherfall packed into the body of a 5'1" latina.
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I like her already
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I'm just going to promptly nope on out of here.
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It's I-A-M, he'll give us what looks like a promising change of pace to the story, only for it to culminate with a far greater, even more depressing event that will end up tying into a far darker sequel.
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I can guarantee this particular fic is getting a happy ending, I promise. This isn't a dark fic, but that doesn't mean it ain't gonna get dark in spots. This is definitely one of the darker portions, but we're reaching the endgame of arc II, so that's why it's diving. Has to go down to come up.
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The end game of arc II is gonna have a really high contrast and, spoiler; next chapter is the end of Arc II, then I'll be starting the third and final arc of Featherfall. So you are right about it eventually working out, but this chapter is dark, the next will be... wild.
Now the question on my mind is "Does Shining think Zee looks familiar because he encountered Gilda many many chapters ago? Or because he's seen her in a criminal database somewhere?"
Probably the former is more likely than the latter.
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As always you're a saint, thanks so much for your corrections.
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Heh, thanks, and you're welcome. :)
Twilight & Zee have a weird, kinky relationship, don't they
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they have a weird, kinky, and toxic relationship
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Indeed they do
Hmmm
I. Wondering the scene with twilight and zee fighting that was influenced by magic correct?
That green stuff made me think so.
If not then holy shit I do not support this ship anymore.
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So, there's a fine line between 'influenced by' and 'caused by'... influenced by? Yes...
Caused by? ...er, no. Even without the dark magic they both have very abusive, possessive tendencies.
I always use the same interpretation of dark magic: it doesn't 'make you evil', it just sort of amplifies what's already there. Twi and Zee aren't very healthy people, socially and mentally speaking, but they're also very compatible. It's just important to note that people can be compatible and still be terrible together. To reiterate a point; Twilight and Zee are not healthy, I don't condone the way their relationship plays out, and I wrote a whole blog post about my feelings on whether or not I should even include the scenes. I ended up doing so because I prefer to write real relationships, I've seen great relationships like Gilda and Sunset's, and I've seen awful ones like Twi and Zee. The funny thing is, I've also seen the former fail and the latter endure and I can't really account for why that is... I just chalk it up to human nature.
Clearly Exe is influenced by magic
Too real, too soon, too close to home.
This story is great, I have a lot of respect for it, but the heart is weak.
I’ll finish it another time, but right now, too soon.
Okay, having the courage to read the chapter, less bad than I thought.
Whew~
Continuing.
Uuuhhggg, this is so terribly worded. I get that it has to happen for the story but I'm really hating how Twilight's family is so supportive in all the wrong ways. I was praying Cadence would be a little suspicious and maybe try to pump the breaks a little for Twilight but she just hopped on the slowmotion trainwreck too it seems.
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That was definitely the point, and also Twilight's family was never meant to be perfect or even super good at what they do. They're a well-off family with a lot of privilege and very little experience in having things go wrong. They have, for the most part, had charmed lives, themselves, so Twilight's struggle with social anxiety and the lessons that her family has ground into her end up turning toxic.
Besides flanksy should be fine with it lord know she's done the exact same thing
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It didn't help matters when they never did anything about the fact that she never hung out with kids close to her age. They should have sent her to one those schools where genius kids go to learn and crystal prep is probably above average when it comes to education but kids need to be challenged and have people who they can talk to about their problems. And friends are some of the people who look out for you. At least at one of those genius schools she would have had to interact with kids as smart as her who were close to her age. Also I think her parents have been lacking on the what to do when your gut is saying that this is a bad idea.
Sombra...?