A bored delinquent and an exiled prodigy. When a MyStable profile called Anon-A-Miss sabotages all of Sunset's hard work and leaves her friendless except for a chance encounter, will she come back from it?
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oh... well shit.
Oooooo I can't wait for the eventual confrontation between Zee and Gilda
Also it's good to be back, I need my fan fiction fix
P.s you have now ascended to my favourite author and im quite happy to say I've been around since the 3rd chapter of dead by sunset and have been able to see you grow more popular and even get recognition from wandererD which is amazing
Basically thank you for your hard work and I hope you have a great 2019
"a grateful look as she stepped away and gestured"
"a grateful look as he stepped away and gestured"?
"if had her guess right, and"
"if she had her guess right, and"?
"one that very near to him"
"one that was very near to him"?
"feeling a slight shiver went down her spine"
"feeling a slight shiver go down her spine"?
"then setting the cycle and turning it on."
"then set the cycle and turned it on."?
"details about case forever"
"details about that case forever"?
"B=but, ugh"
"B-but, ugh"?
"look of horror of Sunset’s"
"look of horror on Sunset’s"?
"in a strained voice, the frost in it sent"
"in a strained voice; the frost in it sent"?
"shaken her, the tail end"
"shaken her; the tail end"?
"meant she as safe for now"
"meant she was safe for now"?
"Sunset let out a laugh as she Gilda pulled her"
"Sunset let out a laugh as Gilda pulled her"?
"of the totally breathless Gilda grinned widely"
"of the totally breathless. Gilda grinned widely"?
"Gilda’s breathed slowly and"
"Gilda breathed slowly and"?
"one hand trailing up tangle into her"
"one hand trailing up to tangle into her"?
"smirking as nudged Celestia"
"smirking as she nudged Celestia"?
"a simple back jacket and gloves, over"
"a simple black jacket and gloves, over"?
"really meant to both them"
"really meant to both of them"?
"or background check you care you try"
"or background check you care to try"?
"Celestia began, look uncomfortable"
"Celestia began, looking uncomfortable"?
"Luna busted up laughed as Chrysalis"
"Luna busted up laughing as Chrysalis"?
"her hand around and her back"
"her hand around her back"?
"lightning as and arched and levered"
"lightning as she arched and levered"?
"grimacing as grip tightened on the"
"grimacing as her grip tightened on the"?
"that kind of thing this sort of restaurant"
"that kind of thing in this sort of restaurant"?
"Twilight with a chuckle, nudging"
"Twilight said with a chuckle, nudging"?
"next to meadow that leads up"
"next to a meadow that leads up"?
Ohshitnigga.API
Is it bad that I associate this Chryssi with Kazuhira Miller? She justreminds me of him.
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As always, I greatly appreciate your diligence, my friend
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Thanks. :)
Gah I swear every chapter is a rollercoaster and I don't think my heart can take it! Lol
I swear, what is up with everyone having an abusive/violent relationship!? From Celestia throwing Chrysalis to a wall & breaking her leg (which ended the relationship) to Twilight & Zee still being.... well, same old, same old... And once again, damn for cliffhangers!
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Because almost everyone will be in a toxic relationship at some point in their lives, not necessarily abusive although that's really common, too. That really is one of the main, driving reasons for me writing the relationships the way I do in Featherfall.
Every single woman I know, and most of the guys, have been in an abusive relationship, and everyone I know has had at least one relationship they looked back on and went: 'wow, that got ugly'. A lot of stories either play up and romanticize relationships or they make them doom-and-gloom horror shows. My point here is to show that there's a reason these relationships happen, and they don't have to end in tragedy. For Celestia and Chryssi, their relationship wasn't unlike Sci-Twi and Zee's; it was a 'first relationship', and it was extreme, intense, and ended up toxic, but after the dust settled and they grew up, they matured, and they stayed friends because they realised they were good for each other, just in a different way.
Relationships between passionate people are tempestuous, Gilda and Sunset are no different, they're just healthier. Not perfectly healthy, but their unhealthiness manifests is a very different fashion. I don't necessarily depict terrible relationships as I do depict passionate ones, it just so happens that this is what passionate relationships tend to look like in real time.
as a last point, could you add some spoiler tags to that post of yours?
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That was quite the mouthful, you said there I-A-M, but it need drove the message to the point & yeah, sure I'll start using the spoiler bar in the future.
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Sorry if it was an infodump, I started writing a short response and it didn't work out like that, lol
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Its fine, do what works for ya
Well, this was a hell of a place for my binge to end.
Zee's affections towards Twilight are touching...even if Twilight's turning away from her family because of See.
Storm, on the other hand, makes me think of the devil trying to woo someone into selling their soul.
I wonder what her reaction will be when she finds out that his sister is smack bang right in the middle of it
More beautiful the flower the more deadly the thorns
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They were both miserable and they were looking for anything that made things better but Glida is different because she tries to help Sunset be the best she can be and knows her limits and sunset's limits as well. Twilight would never sat no to zee and zee would never try to be better for twilight. It might take a long time to improve but putting in the effort counts in a relationship.
WHY AM I HEARING UNLEASH THE MAGIC