A bored delinquent and an exiled prodigy. When a MyStable profile called Anon-A-Miss sabotages all of Sunset's hard work and leaves her friendless except for a chance encounter, will she come back from it?
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Well, I'm gonna need all that coffee, or at least some form of hydration for all the tears I'm gonna be spilling this act.
Well I'm glad everything worked out for Rainbow Dash.
I'm getting a feeling that maybe SciTwi won't have to wait for the Friendship Games to find Sunset. Maybe Sunset will come find her.
... I wanna kill gilda's sister for what she is doing.
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Zee is just as much a pawn as Twilight is. You wanna point fingers, point it at Storm King. He's the one that mind raping the two of them.
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You and me both brother.
Basically, if what's left of Storm King by the end of this fills more than a deal bag then I'm going to be mightily disappointed.
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didn't seem so much as mind rape for zee and more she is a spineless lap dog and using twilight like a puppet but that might just be my point of view.
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Meh I'm bad at that very bad plus i have the memory of a gold fish with short term memory loss.
I love those orenge chocolate balls use to put bits into my coffee back when I drank the stuff
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This I wholeheartedly agree. While they're the ones being effected by the dark magic, he's just standing around watching it happen and giving orders.
Wish I could add pics to the comments atm.
But the end of this is going to be awesome.
Magick (yes I spelled it that way in purpose) is a wonderful thing capable of doing anything, but just because it can do anything doesn't mean the one using it can do everything.
What so few people realize, however, is that magick is as much a living entity as it is a force of nature. It WANTS to be used, but if you're not careful with that use, then it is going to use you just as much as you use it. Twilight, the human version of her, hasn't yet realized this.
Can't wait to see more of this!
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Zee and SciTwi both are kind of toxic people. SciTwi's skewed view of love and relationships from her sheltered life has essentially turned her into Zee's enabler. Storm is now taking advantage of a toxic, codependent relationship for his own ends because it's easy.
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... Ok yeah that makes sense
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In my settings I always treat magic the same way: there's Pure Magic and Dark magic. I'll let King Sombra speak for me:
"...Dark magic is alive after a fashion in a way that pure magic is not. Pure magic is just that, pure; no more or less than energy at its most absolute. Dark magic is contaminated by mortality. It contains traces of emotional wavelengths that take root in practitioners. That is why many sorcerers find their worst traits amplified, you see. Whatever emotion most strongly resonates with them becomes exacerbated to an extreme degree... ...Dark magic is a guardless blade, sharp on both sides; do not mistake it for anything but a weapon.”
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Not that you need it, but I wholeheartedly approve of this explanation
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That line is from Sombra instructing Fluttershy on the nuances of dark magic in my story King & Shy.
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I kinda see it, and Twilight has definitely earned some fault recently, but the majority of it by far falls directly on Zee's shoulders. Love or not, Zee had a heavy hand in manipulating Twilight into falling for her and even admitted it through her own words. Storm King may be the primary villain, but Zee is right there next to him in terms of assery.
Ugh just binge read this in a day keep up the good work. Oh and please don't kill off the good characters. Please? 😢
"to do, seeing the little motes"
"to do; seeing the little motes"?
"dreams?” Her companion"
"dreams?” her companion"?
"few moments and grumbling wordlessly."
"few moments and grumbled wordlessly."?
"but it’s the always same place"
"but it’s always the same place"?
"a part her knew she was looking"
"a part of her knowing she was looking"?
"from Sunset, and who had long since gotten used"
Did something go wrong there?
"closer to Sunset and fitting an arm around her pulling her"
"closer to Sunset, fitting an arm around her and pulling her"?
"the apartment from what amounted"
"the apartment from being what amounted"?
"only be Lightning grandmother"
"only be Lightning's grandmother"?
"and Rainbow Dash hack and choked"
"and Rainbow Dash hacked and choked"?
"at the table and and leaning on"
"at the table and leaning on"?
"the table and rest her head on her"
"the table and resting her head on her"?
"she could forgiven for the next"
"she could be forgiven for the next"?
"to the Mayor of Canterlot itself, Erebos"
"to the Mayor of Canterlot himself, Erebos"?
Though "itself" could probably work there; I thought I'd point this out just in case.
"was rumored to be up to senatorship next"
"was rumored to be up for senatorship next"?
"an editor renown within literary"
"an editor renowned within literary"?
"Light, a extremely successful"
"Light, an extremely successful"?
"according the records which"
"according to the records which"?
"that this papers were filed"
"that these papers were filed"?
"part,” Twilight firmly. “My"
"part,” Twilight said firmly. “My"?
"cheeks and vicious, snarling expression"
"cheeks and a vicious, snarling expression"?
"mind there was a bell was tolling thunderously; but rather"
"mind a bell was tolling thunderously, but rather"?
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I mean... good characters is subjective right?
Just kidding, this isn't one of my darkfics, I'm not planning on having a surfeit of character death or anything. That being said, I try to make all of my characters 'good characters'. Not necessarily 'good people', but good 'characters'.
A little tribute to Adam West's Batman (R.I.P.) & here we go, Act 3 under way with Princess Twilight to explaining to Sunset a new form, Rainbow & Lightning's background stories, & Twilight entering the friendship games just to find Sunset! Let the games begin!
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So glad someone mentioned that, I was hoping people would notice.
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Well it is one of Adam West's most iconic lines & I love his version of Batman. Kinda shocked, no one else spotted this reference.
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Oh I'm sure there were a few that did, I'm just happy someone pointed it out
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Well then, I'm glad I was the first
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This is a very accurate take on Sunset's reasoning, and I appreciate the fact that you acknowledge it's not fully logical because you're right, it's not. Sunset even acknowledges that it's not entirely rational, but that she's making the decision because she knows herself well enough to know that she'd regret the decision if she left.
Your reasoning in all three points are all very well thought out and accurate. I hope you're enjoying the story thus far.
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Sorry for the delay on the fixes, and thanks again for all the help
So, was the that reference to Fluttershy knowing more about Dream magic, in close proximity to a reference to Sombra, a confirmation that King & Shy is somewhat canon to this setting?
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MMmmmaybe, partially it was a nod to that story, though
This example I could put is rainbow Dash and Applejack the way those to fight you would think they hate each other however rainbow dash had stated before that they get into so many competitions because they love each other any sisterly love kind of way that's the best example I can think of
I'll say that old flighter jock's definitely get some tude (fighter jock is a old military term for air Force)
It is joever... Sci-Twi is dead.
May the world welcome Twilight Sparkle...
and a certain entity named at the darkest hour.