A bored delinquent and an exiled prodigy. When a MyStable profile called Anon-A-Miss sabotages all of Sunset's hard work and leaves her friendless except for a chance encounter, will she come back from it?
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Like I said, Zee only survived by sheer, dumb luck.
I wonder how the others are going to react when Rainbow and Lightning's allegiance is revealed. I'm equally curious to know what and how they intend to use their newfound powers.
As usual another outstanding chapter. It's almost like dare I say an addiction. I gotta keep coming back for my fix.
Well done I-A-M
FULLMETAL GILDA
Awesome chapter!
Man you have no idea how hard it was for me not to write. Post wig a bunch of arm and fire puns. Like I had a lot anyways great chapter and man things are heating up. Also really rainbow you got to realize this is going to be bad and blow up.
I think this is the only story I’ve read on this site that has actual consequences to character decisions and actions, portrays relationships as realistic and keeps even the almost god level magic grounded in some sort of reality.
Good show, good show indeed
I can tell you this, I'm so damn glad the cliffhanger wait is over.
"but rather than coxing her deeper"
"but rather than coaxing her deeper"?
"came to rest of Sunset’s cheek"
"came to rest on Sunset’s cheek"?
"was not small matter even in"
"was not a small matter even in"?
"no matter hard she pushed"
"no matter how hard she pushed"?
"she knew it would pointless to"
"she knew it would be pointless to"?
"reached the end of rant she"
"reached the end of her rant she"?
"hiccup of laughter of Sunset"
"hiccup of laughter from Sunset"?
"Sonata replied with quietly, only"
"Sonata replied quietly, only"?
"smelled like a someone dumped"
"smelled like someone dumped"?
"Ye’ll ‘ave it, our"
""Ye’ll ‘ave it, our"?
"even I know what to slow it down and"
"even I know to slow it down and"?
"against it every soften that made"
"against it every so often that made"?
"and mind-boggling complex"
"and mind-bogglingly complex"?
"the heels of her palms against"
"the heels of his palms against"?
"image was lost Zee spasmed violently"
Missing word(s)?
"eyes widened as his use of the"
"eyes widened at his use of the"?
"All three to them had agreed"
"All three of them had agreed"?
"And she would, because Storm"
"And she wouldn't, because Storm"?
"but I supposed I can’t judge"
"but I suppose I can’t judge"?
"Principal Celestia herself couldn’t come"
"Princess Celestia herself couldn’t come"?
"and a wine-wed ruffled"
"and a wine-red ruffled"?
"Sunset said a smirk"
"Sunset said with a smirk"?
"voice as she put and a hand"
"voice as she put a hand"?
My God, this was so much to take in, from how long Sunset & Gilda were out cold to Gilda being disarmed to how Zee was "recovering", we've officially entered new territory
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Luck and horrifying dark magic
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of course it's going to blow up, most of Rainbow's decisions are bad, but she means well.
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That's high praise, although if you're looking I'd point you toward anything written by Albinocorn or Chengar Qordath, Albinocorn's 'Long Road to Friendship' is an iconic Sunset fic, and all of Chengar's stuff is very well founded in realism.
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I aim to please (sort of)
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That you did... Sort of
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Magic that she's lucky to have been channeling or should I say she and others were channeling.
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I’ll definitely have to look into them, thank you for the recommendations
Gonna call it and say its a prosthetic arm with a magic infusion able to function like a regular arm and still loving this story thank you
Did the doctors at least save the jewelry that was on her wrist, assuming they were able to get it off that is.
Man, I didn't think Rainbow could fuck shit up any further, but here we are. You'd think she'd learn, after every time something's gone wrong with bad magic, but here we are. Loyalty or not, it should have been obvious that she should say something, especially considering her past with Gilda, but here we are. So I sound salty over Rainbow being a fucking shitcunt? Good. Because here we are.
A shame that the old goat magic worked. Would've liked to see Zee down for the count, but then there'd be less conflict considering Storm is way too smart to use the gauntlets himself. His manipulation is on fucking point.
Onwards to the next.
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Rainbow has not yet begun to fuck up.
I should clarify. I love Rainbow Dash as a character, she is easily one of my favorites. I love perennial fuckups, I love characters that create conflict but mean well, because they make for great stories. So don't think I'm just hammering on her because I hate her, I love that idiot.
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took me a bit due to settling into a new job, but as always I appreciate your dedication my friend.
Sooooo many things to talk about! But I don't feel like backtracking too hard so I'll just settle on the end bit, was very interested in the introduction of Raven and subsequent reconcilation of sorts.
Truly as shameless as her sister
So that is grogar's bell, which only leaves the question how the bloody fucking hell did Storm King figure out how to use it
Gilda Griffin > Yang Xiao Long
WHY IS UNLEASH THE MAGIC GETTING LOUDER