A bored delinquent and an exiled prodigy. When a MyStable profile called Anon-A-Miss sabotages all of Sunset's hard work and leaves her friendless except for a chance encounter, will she come back from it?
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Well that was a roller coaster huh?
I just died, that was so intense
Can’t wait for the next chapter
WHAT CAN I SAY
I'm honestly asking cause it was an amazing chapter but now I'm terrified and about to go mad cause if Gil dies then...
Well... $#&@!!!
That was intense!!!
Dang, waiting for the next chapter is gonna be nearly unbearable!
I'm more curious to what Sci-Twi's going to tell Storm King. I mean Zee was probably at her strongest and Sunset still nearly ended her if not for sheer, dumb luck.
Storm King wants to go after Sunset, which just became a death wish. The hurting/loss of a loved one is a serious motivator and with Zee out of commission for a little while...
I love when a new chapter comes out but hate finishing it because of the 2 week wait for the next
Ah feather fall I was happy when I saw this chapter this morning, and now am sad I have to wait another two weeks to get my ff fix.
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I empathize and feel your pain.
"as the once- clear skies quickly"
"as the once-clear skies quickly"?
"the love her life"
"the love of her life"?
"inside the Twilight’s odd bauble"
"inside Twilight’s odd bauble"?
"stretched as flicked her fingers"
"stretched as she flicked her fingers"?
"that was aimed straight Gilda"
"that was aimed straight at Gilda"?
"and Sunset’s watched in horror"
"and Sunset watched in horror"?
"her fists to rip the ground up around as she"
"her fists to rip the ground up around her as she"?
"Gilda lets go!” Sunset"
"Gilda let's go!” Sunset"?
"wordless yell of age as she"
"wordless yell of rage as she"?
"chaotic pattern that Gilda’s couldn’t read"
"chaotic pattern that Gilda couldn’t read"?
"her neck sent of a jolt through"
"her neck sent a jolt through"?
"like the smile of a headsman’s"
I'm not sure, but was that meant to be "smite"?
"later and Twilight it as she fell on"
"later and Twilight with it as she fell on"?
"dozen feet away, Sunset had"
"dozen feet away; Sunset had"?
I wonder what Sci-Twi is gonna be thinking about regarding Zee’s change of character, her fight and apparent killing of Gilda, and later ass whooping by Sunset. Im not going to lie, I sorta wanna see Sunset in her badass fiery “Hulk Mode” or Demon/ Daydream Shimmer Form and beat some sense into Zee as well as maybe at least scold berate her and Twi about the reprocussions that their actions have caused respectively.
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Honestly I feel like Ol’ Stormie is just play her like a fiddle and everything thing that will lead up to the climax will just have been him lying to her about everything. How much he trusts her, loves her like a daughter, is going to protect her no matter what, those are all lies he’s selling her and Twilight. Gilda, Sunset, Tempest and the others know this to be true. Only time will tell how Zee and Twilight will come to realize this and what will happen when they finally do.
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Oh he's definitely playing them considering he's never tried to use the items himself. The two of them are just a means to an end. He'll let them do all the heavy lifting, while he reaps all the benefits and eventually leaves them hanging.
Jesus Christ.... Everything from beginning to end of that sibling battle of the century, just left me speechless... So while everyone heals up & try to figure out their (new) powers, where do they go from here?
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Corrections made, and thanks again for your help.
For clarity, the smile of a headsman's ax refers literally to the curved piece of metal that makes up the blade edge of an ax.
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You're welcome. :)
Ah, thanks! I did not know that.
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Its nice and feelsy so far also i thank you for the story its really good im actually reading through it a second time
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You can't imagine how flattering it is to know someone read my story more than once
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Its a good read soooo yeah you desrve the praise
At this rate I'm expecting score and hoops to hook up. :P
Well shit that was one fucking hell of a boss battle
That... was an emotional gut punch and trainwreck...
Feels like someone threw an incinerator in my gut IRL. Genuinely feels like my stomach is burning right now. Thanks, I-A-M.
The ending part of this chapter read to me like The Iron Giant; I'm talking about the scene where the Giant goes ballistic after he believes Hogarth has been killed. For some reason Sunset's power-form reminds me of the Giant's battle-form.