A bored delinquent and an exiled prodigy. When a MyStable profile called Anon-A-Miss sabotages all of Sunset's hard work and leaves her friendless except for a chance encounter, will she come back from it?
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I hope the "old goat" isn't who I think it is. Because if it is, things will go south, FAST.
Not surprised Storm King was keeping tabs on human Gilda in the hospital. The only surprise is that he did it in person.
That tongue lashing from griffin Gilda is exactly what human Gilda needed to hear to get her ass moving
In any case another great chapter delivered.
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Well the equestrian Storm King was a satyr so...On second thought scratch that because I'm actually forgetting someone. Man I wonder if it really is him.
Regardless however I agree with you on the direction and velocity of the situation 100%.
This story was already great but the retrospective foreshadowing makes it even more so.
Is... is that Grogar, The Black King of Tambelon? That makes too much sense. Holy fuck shit's getting real.
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You said it.
Worse part is, he isn't alone.
me @ Storm King
Oh no....
If Storm is talking to who I think he's talking to.....
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Wait, what? Who the fuck else could there be?
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He probably is and from what I can tell they just finished putting a barrier around the statue to prevent Celestia from coming and opening a can of whoop ass on them.
So Storm King is possessed by Grogar and Zee is possessed by Arabus the Shadow Eater. Damn Sunset and the others are gonna have one serious fight on their hands.
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Read chapter 22 again. Sunset said his name
"head has been entirely"
"head had been entirely"?
"looking up her sister with a"
"looking up at her sister with a"?
"simply, on eyebrow raised"
"simply, one eyebrow raised"?
"thought it as a costume"
"thought it was a costume"?
"tail of hair as tied up in a"
"tail of hair was tied up in a"?
"bringing a hand up to, “you"
Missing word(s)?
"nervously before say: “Uhm… why"
"nervously before saying: “Uhm… why"?
"patient, performed his examination with"
"patient, performing his examination with"?
"is the hardly a drop in the"
"is hardly a drop in the"?
"her bed a reached out"
"her bed and reached out"?
"stared up a Raven for a"
"stared up at Raven for a"?
"there was multiple straps and bolts that"
"there were multiple straps and bolts that"?
"Sunset laughed she pulled back"
"Sunset laughed as she pulled back"?
"before snapping head back around"
"before snapping her head back around"?
"twin turned fix her with"
"twin turned to fix her with"?
"to have a lot similarities"
"to have a lot of similarities"?
"Twilight face turned bright"
"Twilight's face turned bright"?
"I mostly asking out"
"I mostly asked out"?
"and nodded for Twilight continue"
"and nodded for Twilight to continue"?
"of elder dragons, she might"
"of the elder dragons, she might"?
"was not point and laughing before"
"was not pointing and laughing before"?
"Twilight stood stretched, her"
"Twilight stood and stretched, her"?
"to the floor and entering the small"
"to the floor and entered the small"?
"Keep on eye out here"
"Keep an eye out here"?
"leaned in a brush her lips"
"leaned in to brush her lips"?
It was so obvious that sometime, this joke was going to come.
There is no escape from it
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Gilda is established as definitely having a garbage sense of humor.
Hmm, if I remember correctly Storm King told SciTwi he wanted to find the "gate" to another world and open/enter it. However it seems he already had a general idea about where the portal was as well as his inability to pass through it via the voice in his head.
If his intentions were to simply prevent reinforcements from interfering then it begs the question, what's his real endgame?
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That is a super good question
He definitely didn't tell Twi and Zee everything.
Damn, I don't know what was more shocking? Twilight & her Gilda are a couple or the fact Twilight & her Gilda fell in love & had sex faster than Sunset & her Gilda!? Either way, this was an amazing job with this chapter & that pep talk Twilight's Gilda gave to Sunset's Gilda was just what the doctor ordered.... But King now knows the portal.... God help them....
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Twilight and Gilda's thing was sort of a nod to my belief that how a relationship starts has no bearing on whether it's capable of being good or not. Whether it starts on a blind date, out of a ten-year friendship, or a drunken one-night stand; you never know how you're going to meet someone who will be important to you.
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I couldn't have say it, better myself on how true that statement is.
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I think the worst part about this is that it fits totally in line with her character. Both her and Spike have such a terrible habit of having their episodes and 'lessons learned' get rehashed over and over, so I totally get it being the same here, but... Holy fuck, this is frustrating on an entirely different level. I'm pretty certain that Rainbow should know about some shit going down, but she just doesn't use her head for anything more than a hat rack and she doesn't even wear hats.
It huuuuuuuuuuuuuuurts.
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I'd almost say it's a shame Rainbow Dash chose now of all times to learn blind loyalty.
When the 'ish hits the fan, hopefully she won't be standing too close. It's gonna splatter on her, that's not a question. The question is how much?
Man poor Lightning Dust probably has no idea what she's gotten herself into.
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took me a while but it's finally corrected, as before thanks again
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Ah, hope the settling in went well, you're welcome, and thanks. :)
I always did find it interesting watching two Griffins lock claws like that always reminded me of the gladiator fights of Rome
Shrek reference
So grogar's still alive huh talk about a major mind fuck
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Pray she never meets Yang Xiao-long from RWBY… this world doesn’t need or deserve a pun-pocalypse…