After discovering a way to get back to his own Universe, Doctor Whooves causes a accident trapping Derpy and his TARDIS on Earth in another dimension! With all his Time Lord knowledge, and Twilight's help, he has to find a way to save her, and get her back to Ponyville. Meanwhile, Derpy is left alone and trapped on a strange alien world, as a human of all things. While she finds some help from a few humans, some of them seem strangely familiar, but she quite can't quite put her finger on it. What's worse, there seems to be some Disharmony brewing on this Earth, and what it has teamed up with is going to make it all the more worse.
Born out of boredom and an idea while I did my main story. And well, after seeing everyone's reaction to when I submitted this.... there is only one thing I can do! ADD EVERYPONY I CAN! and still make a good story! Hopefully....
Edited by the talented Quick Fix: http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Quick%20Fix
Another Derpy-on-Earth story? Ugh, no thanks.
I can see a few spots that can be fixed, () - designates fixes
'She screamed in glee, the Doctor had come back from one his adventure(s) for a visit'
'“How did (everything) go while I was gone?”'
'A(n) amazing race they were! Sometimes I just wish I could go back there and see it all again.'
'“I'd like to not (have these kinds of questions now).” answered Sparkler'
These are only a few circumstances I could find, but this is rather hefty going through a few of the paragraphs, I would highly recommend finding an editor, there is a group you can find here on the site and you can request some help through there. Otherwise, this is a good idea that can be made, you just need to get those edits made so the fic doesn't look bad.
I'll be watching
955544 Your welcome
955551 yeah, I got a editor, I just didn't want to bother him with this one since this is a side project..... although stuff like that I do have issues with
955601 At least your honest, like I said, I'll be watching this thing over, so if you don't want to bug your other guy with it, I'm cool with doing a little editorial junk too. Shoot me a PM if you really want it.
two dislikes so far.....awe I kinda liked this one..... good thing it's a side project
Haven't read it yet, but I can already see some inaccuracies by reading the description.
uh hem...
You don't create a TARDIS. I believe you grow one. It takes time.
On my watch list. You're lucky... I normal just avoid this stuff. But I won't click on it to dislike it and not read because I'm not an ass!
956275 I'll be addressing that... I knew I goofed up on something and that was it
958254 Have you seen the Eleventh Doctor's episode, "The Doctor's Wife?" It might help you come up with ideas.
960016 ironically.... that's where I got the idea for that..... next chapter answers everything
hahaha refrence to a comment
960112 That's not what ironic means. Also, random capitalization makes me sad. And random not-capitalization.
962505 my definition of ironic may be off, and.... well, I got nothing for the capitalization
Irony is hard.
And I thought the "reference to a comment" was great!
Also, Tara and Dash... Trixie's Bar and Grill... Haha. I also find it interesting that an April (who presumably works or lives on a farm, and whose name sounds like apple) is being helped bake by a Diane... Does that mean Lou, the only other human female character thus far, is...?
And you forgot to capitalize a "Jack" in the paragraph where he walks Dash outside. Sorry if I'm being obnoxious...
964540 no no no, those comments are always appreciated. I typed that part after I sent it to my editor
They made it! Go Doctor! ... And Twilight!
I cant even read this anymore.
Its too awesome for my unawesome eyes to bear. lol
985957 well then...
Well, a few errors, but great!
Is there an emoticon, or words?
1000051 Come again? Second part, not the errors... that's my fault
1000277 I never used an emoticon before, so I didn't know if only the words that appear when you click the emoticon would appear.
Anyway, I would try to write a story like yours(cause its awesome) but my computer won't let me. Keep up the great work! I have it book marked, do when you crank out another chapter, I'll be back! 
do=*so Now I have the error!
1001154 probably be in the next day or two. I've written up to... Chapter 11... and that's just the first half. There's plenty of story coming up, just got to wait for the editor Quick Fix to work his skills.
The Doctor's reaction - it's brilliant. The whole thing is brilliant. Well done.
1019045 thanks
I called it! I totally called that his friends were alternates of the Mane Six. Although I don't think Lou is, like I first guessed.
And the plot thickens.
I seriously cracked up at the "UNIT" scene. Awesome.
Oooh. I'm thinking Celestia. And did I hear mention of Scootaloo??
Jack's reaction to discovering his girlfriend's alter made me smile.
Also, I love that the Doctor immediately tried to think of "another language that can describe this". Very in character. You've done a really good job of capturing characters so far, in my opinion. Reine's line about the "villain with poor taste" was also very well done.
First, awesome writing, as usual, some great lines in the beginning - loved the Doctor's response to the police demands.
Second, I have a feeling "Celeste" knows what's going on.
Third - No!! I can't believe Jack's dead. I've got a lump in my throat. I liked - *like* him. I refuse to accept he's dead until I have no proof. (The fact that I'm using denial/optimism on this means I like his character. So well done emotionally, I guess.)
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1070166 Gyaah! Half a dozen updates in my Notifications box! and to respond to every last comment: Thank you
and to respond to the very last one on Jack's death: I'm surprised that everyone's reaction who've I talked to that read that. Yes, here's your confirmation: He's DEAD. It's all part of the the plot
crap Discord V.S Nightmare Moon this is AWSOME
Things are definitely getting real. Whatever happens next is going to be very intense.
And even so, I can't take it lightly anymore. I'm still stuck mourning Jack. At least Nightmare Lou has a more productive reaction than me - though revenge is normally not healthy. But, however small an amount, I feel her pain. And now I know. This Discord isn't just the chaos and laughter of ours. This Discord really does fit the moniker one of the CMC gave him: Evil. And, whatever happens next - This Discord has it coming. And I want to watch him fall.
...I'm still less-than-secretly hoping Jack isn't really gone - at least not forever. At least for me, Jack's death turned a (very well-done) blend of Doctor Who and MLP episodes into something more serious, and maybe even dark. Of course, I do have a history of reacting - more emotionally than some. But if this is the tenor you want the story to take, I think it was well played. The upcoming scene will be serious, and it will also be righteous vengeance. Which I am now very invested in. As I said - well played.
1092307 biggest comment, I've ever had, in my life
Not the first time I've done something like that, but uh, someones probably going to like the upcoming chapters I can tell
“It's not like someone is writing this, Doctor,” came Twilight.
If only you knew
:
fallout reference
1110711 Yes! Someone found it! I was actually worried no one would get it.
Sweet Celestia, next chapter!
1132523 tomorrow. I like to capitalzie my views... and your only allowed on the front page once a day
amazing,
fucking amazing!
oh, and
First!
1138520 yes, yes you are first.... I can't give you much for that.... ah well
there we go, now this story could fit into doctor who, we've got everything now, doctor's intelligent rants, the doctor about to preform one of his impossible stunts, and last but not least, I've been mindfucked.
1110869 honestly. i would be surprised if nobody got that. it's been forever since i played fallout 3 and i still hear "i don't want to set the world on fire." in my head whenever fallout 3 is mentioned
1142788 yeah, but it's been years since that came out, and when I showed it to my friend, he didn't get it and he played F3 the moment it came out
DAMNIT! im caught up! why couldn't i have caught it as a finished story? a well time to move this from read later to faved
1142899 don't fret! Next chapter online!
jack is reminding me of another jack Who fans know of...
then i realized there both named jack and we haven't heard his last name...
btw i caught that starfox reference a few chapters back .
1147102 I'll be honest here, the names were completely coincidental because I thought Harkness had a different name entirely. Turns out that was his actors name so I can sorta get away with it.