Twilight and her friends are gathered together at the Friendship Rainbow castle. They are there because they all have nothing to do so they wanted to meet up. Once they were all there Pinkie got a really stupid idea. She suggested that they should try and take over Equestria. At first everyone in the room looked at her in like she was crazy and they made sure to voice it, but not twilight she actually agreed. At first everybody looked at her like she went completely insane, but after she explained her thought process they agreed. Now we follow the background mane six as they try to "rescue" the mane six and to restore balance to Equestria.
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Usually a "WHAT??!" would follow after a line like that from Pinkie. Also, I believe it's quote, unquote
Overall, this is a rather interesting beginning so far. The princesses are on holiday and the Mane Six are having a blast being the villains for once. This should be fun.
Well, this seems pretty interesting, so far. It's a concept that I haven't seen very often, and executed in a creative way. There's some grammatical and punctuation issues throughout the story, but besides that, I feel it's off to a good start. I look forward to seeing the next chapter!
7990159 Yeah it would, but it was such a slow day that they didn't even bother.
Love this story can't wait for the next chapter! ^w^
8013726 Why thank you I'll try not to disapoint.
I love how Octavia can use magic from her element!
Guess they were "board" alright.
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GOOD JOB SPORE
were my thax for helping lol :D