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Super damn excited to see this! So glad I checked! Keep it up this is one of my top favorite stories right nowđ.
Long chapter. Disappointed that Ari didn't talk to Echo yet, I'd love to see his reaction to being called a 'Changeling King'
a vary good chapter and a good way to close this story ark.
what will our now large group of pony's get in to next?
Woo! Long chapter! The wait was well worth it.
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Tell me about it, in fact I rewrote it several times till I settled with this. Glad to hear you enjoyed it!
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Thank you! Hope to have it up in around three days or so.
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Yes, I was debating chopping in half to make it two chapters but I couldn't find the right moment. Don't worry Moonlit Echo will be getting a earful next chapter.
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Thank you so much, I'm very glad to hear that, Arc 3 starts in around three days. Hope to see you there.
This is a cool story and I have been following it since day 1. But I think you need to clean up the story. You are adding way to many characters and you are side tracking the main story. Don't get me wrong this is a vary good read and quite original at that. I cannot wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work!
I'm actually glad it wasn't a fellow homo sapiens, it would've been a disgrace to see one of our own reduced to a villain.
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Glad to hear you have been in for the long haul!
I completely agree with you, while I was unsure if the story was too crowded plot wise I am in a weird way glad to hear that confirmed, it will help the arc planning for the story I'm working on. I always appreciate any feedback I can get.
Regarding the characters, here is some good news and spoilers ahead. The Princess arc , Arc 3, is where the bulk of the plot happens, the main traveling party is shrunk down again, possible waifus confirmed...Of I'm not writing down who. But it will be down to six in the party, then that gets shrinked further as the arc goes on. Arc 4, The Epilogue arc, is where all the fluff ties together (read: foals).
Thank you, see you in three days
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That sounds good! Thank you for the good feed back!
I really like this story and hope it doesn't get discontinued before it reaches it's due conclusion, whatever that may be
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I don't see why, the gods aren't above tossing random person into a living hell on a whim. Whos to say some jackass didn't piss of a god and got smited to a land of pastel color horses. A villain is a character that drives the conflict in the story. having him be Human opens the doors for unique story elements. Like shared pop culture references, and human innovations. I'm glad the author chose to play off our expectations though it was a nice twist. But I wouldn't have minded if it was Ari's ex, or some jackass that she beat up in the past.
Humans are complex and diverse people and a good villain is more about how they are presented than who or what they are. It shouldn't matter if he was human or Caesar from planet of the apes.
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I can assure you since I have already written the ending that it exists and I have no plans to stop till I finish it...Then start the next story.
Thank you for following the story so far.
Whew, that was close.
Jeez, that foal is really pulling a number on Chryssie. Hopefully, she'll get better. And maybe get her seeing wing fixed.
They just won't let him rest, will they?
Quoting from the Super Mario Bros movie: "A monkey!"
Monkey wants a banana?
Cya
Raziel-chan
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I'm aware now, many of those chapters still need editing. It gets better, although the release schedule is not everyday as a result. Thank you
8700245 Good to know.
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That isn't a error, Chrissy made some 'minor' tweaks to his words...He is unable to check the letter, so that will be interesting to say the least.
Stumbled across your story and I have to say that I loved it! I cant wait to read some more!
So have some fan art!
i.imgur.com/FIysAEm.jpg
Ari trying to look all stoic.
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WOW! Thank you! That is really awesome, I am super psyched to see Ari get his own fanart! Excuse me while I squee
I hope you continue to enjoy his journey
This chapter was a bit hard to follow... not unreadable or anything just had to repeat some parts for it all to click, could need some more details/ being more fleshed out... I really like this story but you are a bit weak in fight scenes dear Author . Keep up the good work
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It's good that it wasn't a human because it'd be sad that, in a world that's being fucked over by the equivalent of overpowered, magical hippies, that they'd break and become another monster that contributes to the steadily growing mountain of bullshit that Ari plans to deal with. Even more so that, with Ari being ripped from her home, change both in gender and species, the workload offloaded on her, relationships with two aliens that are now preggers with her children. What other way to say "Fuck you" to her life, than to have her slay another of her previous kind? Writing-wise it'd be interesting but for Ari, who as depicted, isn't following the typical edgelord character trope, is a normal person. It's not even a month into this journey, everything is still fresh, every tragedy, every murder, killing the PK were he human, could very well break the precarious emotional dam that until now has been kept under wraps.
Wow! x10
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Needs more bandages... also, dat changeling tail! He's da Changebug King fer shaw nowz!
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Except he has already made the subconscious and emotion connections that 'these species are people too'. Otherwise he wouldn't be able to form deep emotional and romantic ties to Chrissy and Lyric like he has... So if he was going to break from that he would have already done it. Plus people need to quit prioritizing the lives of monsters over their victims; you don't kill scum like that to punish them for their past actions, you do it to save their future victims.
I want to See more of this story. It's getting interesting!
idolize
Not that I didn't find
Damn! This arc had me on the edge. I am very glad itâs over and mostly happily ended.