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Lol, i feel theres some misconceptions about estrus and menstration. Estrus usually only happens once or twice a year, while menstruation are generally fertile most of the year round. The reason for this is so foals are born in the optimal season, when things are warm and there is less demand for resourses. So estrus is spurred by the sun.
But in this story estrus supposedly happening every couple of months seems odd. Mesntration is a better system for year round fertility. I wonder if the original motivation for manipulating the sun was to increse the instances of estrus. A forager race suddenly becoming the dominant species might needs some forced evolution to help it conform with its changing status.
Also im surprised Ari doesnt know the difference between Estrus and Menstration. Being polar opposite of mammalian reproduction. The period is a time of perging while estrus is a time of receptivity. Human woman also have a time of hightened receptivity that is barly noticable in the week to week changes the human body naturally goes through. But I guess since she never seriously considered having a child she wouldent have bothered to look into it.
I don't know what timezone you are posting from, but this story has spent the last week up there with Folgers as the best part of waking up.
If it's like this story needs to be a little bit longer when I say that I mean the chapters and maybe sometime can pass in the next chapter 2 like maybe a week
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Don't worry some speed is going to be added this was necessary to drop some hints.
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Correct.
Correct. Lyric's memory of mare's going into heat every three months is a very old one, now it is every six to eight months.
And correct, at thirty two Ari was more the babysitter in her group of friends not really thinking of motherhood or the sexual reproductions of other species.
Excuse while I try to hide my script.
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Lol, sorry if I'm guessing close to the mark. The flow of the story is really good and I really dig the direction your going here. Im really looking forward to see what else happens.
Huh... Why do I have the feeling that Chryssie needs more energy than for one now?
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That statement could hardly be more wrong. Estrus is NOT a menstruation period. Menstruation is when a woman's body discharges the linning of her uterus in preparation for ovulation because she did not become pregnant during her previous ovulation.
Estrus or heat, is a significant chemical reaction which is the only time an animal may become pregnant. The blood associated with a menstruation period is not the same as estrus blood. In truth, estrus blood is an animal's natural lubricant and an intense pheremone which hoth allows for successful mating (as animals's vaginas do not excrete natural lubrication the same way a Human's does) and provides a male with heightened interest in the female.
To clarify what I said earlier, I do not dislike Chrysalis because she had a reason for doing what she did. The Siren never displayed any reason for working with the slavers, ESPECIALLY when she could have sang a bit and been away from them, meaning she was fine with enslaving and outright murdering innocents.
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It is meant to be wrong, Ari has not quite thought of how to breach the whole 'I'm not a horse' part, and also possess little to no idea about animal reproductive cycles.
Also, thank for catching the other typos and the feedback.
Have a great evening.
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(Wrong.)
That varies by species. Equines and most other mammals don't bleed during the estrus cycle, and do produce „natural lubricant”. What species was your source of reference?
I had to wiki this last part:
Some animals may display bloody vaginal discharge, often mistaken for menstruation.
Shrews, bats and apes tend to have menstruation cycles.
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