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this is interesting world building is good.
I'm already trying to fill in the blanks, which is a good sign of a good story.
Are the other sirens going to join? This story is becoming more interesting. How about a Kirin next?
Things are starting to get interesting. Hopefully Lyric can find another mate cause I sure doubt Chrysalis is willing to share Ari.
i can say this is a interesting story, fast paced and a easy read.
i will be reading more as the chapters come out.
I can't wait until Ari reaches Canterlot to talk to the Princesses
Mare battle!
This is surprisingly entertaining. I guess it's another proof, that ratings are more or less useless.
Pretty decent story so far, but the avalanche of plot holes and weird turns is making it difficult to enjoy.
Capitalize "I" and "seeing" not "seeming"
Her
his
what does it mean to "pin" your ears at someone?
"despite" and you have an extra space here.
What
to mention
capitalization
GET OUT YOUR ESCALATION SHOTGUNS, YOUR GOLDEN GUN SUPERS (with bonus Celestial Nighthawk!), AND YOUR LAMENT, BECAUSE IT IS HOMICIDE TIME! Or would it be equicide?
I did probably get dropped on my head one too many times.
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Don't forget to wear your sunbracers and run well, warlocks.