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Well they are all done for.
nice start, i like how Faust is just adds a new person and sit back to watch.
how the rest of the story is like this.
I'm sorry but, I can buy that the climate control of the Ponies could clause unstable weather at the borders and else where, since they have been doing that for centuries. However I can't believe that just moving the Sun and Moon is a problem, only cause one; the Alicorns did not start moving them first, that was the unicorns. Two if no one moves them, they don't move at all. Three that means that the gravitational mechanics for that planet are different then Earth. Finally Cannon evidence could have had a time before the unicorns moving the heavens, since Discord and that staff the Storm King had could do the same. Therefor it's possible that there has either been a spirit, god, or species who has always done so.
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That's ok, it is a alternate universe. Meaning I have tweaked it, cannon wise some things haven't happened yet and some things never will happen. it is a 'what if' story, as in what if the planet used to move its sun and moon naturally but then a alicorn monarchy started. To get better crops, weather, etc they studied the seasons and solar system, eventually developing a magic to control the movement of the sun and the moon themselves. The immediate ramifications were not felt till literally thousands of years later.
Of course the ponies would fuck it up for everyone else.
Look on the bright side, this makes twerking much more amusing.
What the fuck is that name
I mean, really, what the actual fuck
i hope the main character isn't a wuss
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Have you tried expanding your imagination?
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JESUS SHIT this is the first story with a gender swap that is with a female that I had ever seen
This has piqued my interest...
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Eh...IF that were to happened now on Earth...We would feel the effect in the span of a single decade, no need to go to millenias...
So that logic you used is failing already.
I was interested til it turns out the protagonist had their changed. Considering all the bullshit happening nowadays in the real world, this just makes me automatically hate the story.
Time for Round 1 of Spot The Typo:
Not sure what to think here. I'll give it a chance, but I am not hopeful. The Princesses already seem too short-sighted.
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her parent must have hated her. Or loved her too much. you can never be sure.
Good Luck with the story. I don't think I can read any more than this, which is a first for me, I can normally push through some pretty bad stuff but apparently messing with orbital mechanics is my shut-off.
It was an interesting idea to have the character be a female to male gender-swap though, instead of the fandom standard "guy wakes up as a mare".
That metaphor is so mixed, a New York bartender just shook his head at you and said, "Mm-mm! You did not!"
Wish you the best of lucks with your fic, but here’s were I drop out, I cannot stand gender bender of any kind, I’m not homophobic I simply think the idea is over used and most of the time poorly addressed.
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Take the first letters of the name what doesn't spell
Faust Albus Tommy Everfree, I see what u did there clever.
Was that gonna be "shitty plan?~"
I know years passed since this chapter was posted but I just can't resist saying that all of this is Bullshit.
Anyone else want to invite Kratos over? He seems like a nice guy who will just love these commentors.