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Grab them, tie them up, and drag their cake inflated asses (or what ever Luna eats) outside their "perfect" kingdom, Point out the problem, and say:
"DO YOU SEE THAT!"
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Spoiler....
This is an interesting story!!! More! More! More! More! More! More! More! I must read more!!!!!!!
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A chapter a day...
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well, it's definitely an interesting take on the planet's history. This is a rare reverse genderbender. There is far too many m—»f tg on fimfic.
Also, could you please change this /\/\/\/\/\/\/\/\//\/\/\ to something else? Maybe something more compact? Because I mostly "read" on my phone thought google tts in moon reader and it sounds like this " slash backslash slash backslash slash backslash slash backslash" for quite some time. It's not necessary, but will be quite appreciated.( in other fics it sometimes waaay worse, like "dotdotdotdotdotdotdotdotdot")
Hope to read more from you soon.
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fixed it
Personal space? What's that?
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So, when does the god-guy thing learn hes messed up?
This is turning out to be a very interesting story, you get a yay x 5.
Are you even trying? Two typos back-to-back. Cripes. I counted no less than eight typos in this little chapter. You might want to consider proof-reading your chapters before publishing them. On the plus side, other than the annoying diety, I am enjoying this more than I had originally anticipated.
Change "feed" to "fed" if you are worried about all the sentences in a paragraph sharing the same tense or could change "maybe" to "might".
need a comma after "me" or add "with" after "me".
I believe you need to capitalize "earth's" due to it being a proper noun, like a country or city.
Other than that, good to go as far as I can see. If someone wants to correct me, I'm all ears... or in this case eyes... I'll read the thing.
Don't worry. I would do the same.
Well i mean you can’t really blame them for being racist when 100% of changeling have been complete duchbags. ESPECIALLY when the changeling in question was responsible for the the invasion of there homes.