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That last line. Did you leave it alone intentionally, or miss it?
Thanks for the awesome double post. Seriously this is one of the stories I'm regularly checking for.
In case someone is wondering, it means "Good luck" in Swahili
Zebrica is willing to help, this deal however, secretly hangs on the notion that blood ties are made with the people.
Good luck you two
Loved the chapter. Looking forward to when Ari finally meets the princesses. Not too sure how I feel about the zebras potentially joining his herd, but I'll just have to see where that goes.
Yay, a gryphon!
Yeah, that plan is working sooooo well, Ari.
Seems like Chryssie's in the mood for some fresh meat.
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Your very welcome, I'm glad to hear that.
Have to say I enjoyed the theory talk you were having before, sorry that I couldn't comment, but I would hate to spoil the surprises. They are definitely about to be revealed in the next couple of chapters.
See you in three days
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Good catch, I missed it, corrected
Lots of errors in this chapter. Was a bit rough to read.
should be bearing
a lot. Always two words.
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Thank you for catching them and sorry for the rough read, this one was not really edited Will be combing it over tomorrow.
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I've been there. Fair enough.
He's going to add those three to his herd, regardless of what he wants
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option C, mostly. in other countries, beings are trying to keep those that can stop them either ignorant or on their side. In Equestria, ponies are xenophobic of all others, so most of the bad ones are just saying how it's impossible because they're in Xenoquestrian, or just kicking them out to prevent themselves and other ponies from catching "(insert racist opinion of selected species here)"
Damn last chapter, can’t wait for more
Did you mean "dead" cause I think "deed" sounds better.
Besides that, good job, I loved reading your two latest chapters.
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Oops, another one slipped through, thank you for catching it
I'm glad to hear you enjoyed them
Had excellent
la pobre cebra la va a empalar
Ari never mentioned Earth. This zebra knows too much for just learning about the escaped slaves. Unless they also have a communication rig and had all the details spilled to them.
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I am going to assume that it might have been edited at some point to give you the benefit of the doubt, but Ari dose mention Earth before Wekasi brings it up.
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I don't remember that being there, but good eyes.
Dang it Ari! With all that you eat and the foals on the way you could probably use the funds. At least sell two of the ships.
I’m sure when he has to fend off a dragon, he’ll have plenty of bits afterwards.
It’s nice that they all get a chance to heal and rest before the next round of craziness. I feel like I need it too.