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9071267
don't do it stay with your original plan.
I think those vines take a bit too much enjoyment in whipping Ari's flanks
9071329
Too late.
And its back yay
9071351
I saw after i posted. well guess the chapter's are out of the bag now.
One of my favorite stories that is still in progress and it's only getting me more and more.
faze
9071665
Thank you, corrected
9071668
Also; Why does he have "forearms"? This doesn't seem to be an anthro story.
9071694
Good catch, I always seem to miss something.
9071713
Well, nobody's perfect.
Wooot! I was getting worried this story went to the Greater Unfinished Heaven. That was a fine escape sequence.
peaked → piqued.
first i wanted to read the two new chapters last evening but a lack of power changed my mind. dang flooding.
i can say thesis two chapters are amassing i can see the reason for the time gap, this had to be a real bother to get right.
i am vary impressed with the story ark and how it all is coming together.
i am really surprised with Zecora helping Ari i did not see this happening.
i am wondering how this will all play out with Ari losing the key to the blockers, i can see this being a little problem.
How does Zecora know Ari's name? I don't think he mentioned it.
9072415
The papers, once he was announced to the court he was everypony's obsession.
i love this story
Zecora has joined the group
No stories not going nowhere
So i’ve Been binging on this over the past day or so and the only real complaint I have is the misuse of the word racism. For the pony/zebra/thestral thing it works but otherwise it’s xenophobia. But eh, that’s me. Like how the focus isn’t on the change, but I’m sure that’s going to come back(gender I mean, you don’t live half your life just to have your set swapped, there are too many chemicals that are different between male/female, not to mention humans literally have different eyes. Males-depth perception, females-colors).
The threat is a well thought out one and I’m legitimately curious about how you’re going to go about this. I don’t think I’ve seen the “control over the solar cycle is hurting everyone else” plot played so well.
Will you continue the story soon? I hit the last chapter like a brick wall. Where the next. Damn this story is on my favorite list.
9106210
Glad to hear you are enjoying the story, as to it's continuation, that is coming along. Hoping the last week in August, if not sooner. I have started the prequel as well, so that is going to be a treat
9116545
great chapter love how your conveyed just how tried ari was. i was just wondering when the next chapter was going to be. i am hoping to see how things go after he get the princesses out of equestria.
Gonna continues?! I want next chapter.
9222400
Yes, I have two chapters in editing, third one writing. It is not dead.
(Can’t get the image thing working, so)
https://goo.gl/images/psv1Wn
just wondering when we all should start looking for a update?
9273964
My third chapter is almost done editing. Sorry for the wait, I want to get the big talk just right.
9279072
i understand i help wit a few story's and we worked 2 weeks just to get one thing right.
take your time if any thing get a chapter or three around so you are sure things play out right.
I'd like to say that waiting for this moment when he started closing inhibitors were darn painful.