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These ladies, quietly panicking cause their stallion got them preggers on the first go, they better tell him soon, it'd be a real shame if something happens before they do. Rage mode Ari might be him going nova.
That suspicious *thump*, I'm still paranoid on him leaving his thobe by the hydra corpse a while back, that thing's just reeking of his scent.
Let me guess: Discord. Also, the word I should always be capitalized.
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Thank you for the catch and no, Discord is in stone for this story.
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With how often it rains in the swamps along with all the mud, I think the scent would have been covered by now.
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Let's be honest here, for every conflict that involves him killing something, a waifu is not far behind.
Chrysalis- Diamond dogs
Lyric- Lizardmen and Griffons
Hydra- ???
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Wellll you are tempting F.A.T..E. Also, please know that I enjoy your guesses, giggling like mad here.
I think no one sees this one coming though.
Ok, if you looked back far enough you could piece it together.
Out of curiosity and in light of the coming 'edit storm' I'm doing on the story: relationships, are they getting enough build? Too much exposition, not enough?
The faster I edit the faster the new chapter comes out.
And thank you, happy holidays and such applicable greetings.
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I'd say for the pacing of your story, they are progressing fine. You leave just enough mystery every time you reveal something to keep us wanting to know more. Keep up the great work!
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Thank you! Please give the edits a read when they come out. Glad I have some people enjoying it.
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Pacing's fine, canon-wise, if things like story arcs can be finished in 30mins to an hour, love in a week is nothing to sweat about
Let's see, things of note
That minotaur was left unconscious out in the desert, a griffon*3 was unaccounted for.
That young 'colt' was bit on the neck as show of dominance.*1
A bounty on Chrysalis- Alive*(2C)
Luna has a rough estimate of where he dreamed last, meaning any bat pony sent can follow up on his scent trail
Left his thobe by a freshly strangled hydra corpse in a place that otherwise masked his scent
*1
Scenario A: Colt*(2D) that was reigned in after being dominated, is following him on some wayward notion of a "Sensei/Senpai"
B: The 'colt' was super dirty, it could've been a filly, and that bite on the neck, followed by a patriarchal society/culture, is merely following her husbando at a respectful distance.
*2
Scenario A: Saddle Arabian government merely wants to capture a criminal of an allied nation.
B: She's exotic enough that the royalty wishes for her as a sex slave
C: Surviving changeling(s) is in the palace, either under custody or as a legitimate lover and bounty is a means to find her
D: They need her to act as a replacement for someone, *awkward coincidence if that dirty colt is a run away from some background political nonsense.
*3 The survivor reached here first, minding their own business, then *POP* arrives the killer, the bug and the traitor. And jumping into the alley to hide
Random guesses, harmless speculation
They better spill the beans soon.
The dreaded Night Thudder!
I'm hoping for a gryphon waifu at some point.
I want this entire thing to be a discreet plot to overthrow Tia and Lulu. With Discord being the God behind Ari coming to Equus.
The only good thing about slavers and slave owners is watching them scream and die as they are tortured to death. Anyone who thinks they can 'own' another is a monster to be killed, nothing more. There is no redemption for it. Slavery is slow torture, so pay it back with interest.
You should have at peast warned me earlier. Somehow...
Goodbye.
an airship
Capitalize the first "i"
"how to escape unharmed" is what I would suggest.
How would one hide a horn under a hood. It would just be covered but still glaringly obvious. Chrysalis would have to use magic to hide it.
At some point in time the sun will not be above them. If Equus is a planet and spherical, then the sun will mostly point directly to wherever Equestria is.
If he didn't know just by the way their cloaks fell over their heads that all of Ari's party had horns, he deserves everything this Gary Stu is going to give him.
Been a few chapters since Azure informed the princesses. I wonder how crazy Canterlot has been lately and if they’ll try to send the Element Bearers to fetch MC…