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A couple misspellings in this paragraph.
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Ouch, good catch! Edited
Great work on this fine work of art that is this story cant wait for more
PS- i hope you get over your sickness
Loved it. I'm looking forward to whenever we get back to the princesses POV. Also, will Chrysalis ever have her wing healed, perhaps as a peace offering from Celestia and Luna?
Worst case scenario, the shackles melt the moment they try forcing magic through them, the prototype was being tested on a magically starved Ari, what're a few extra going to do to two alicorns whose peak energy levels means they can shift celestial bodies? Our boy has eaten mountains of hay and fruits but the princesses have access to high quality foods and ALL the sugar the want, and from what it's inferred by them, sugar is like dropping coal smothered in octane with a bomb inside into a fire and somehow getting a nuclear reaction, and they've been eating it every day. What effects could poison do to ponies, in comparison to our battered, injured, hungry boy, who're at the top of their game, would they note that that one cake in particular tasted funny and burn through it?
Damn, too many guesses and factors he hasn't considered
Getting closer. And I second astronomy's question.
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You are half right. Ari was not the best being to test it on to find a power base. Perhaps they won't melt per say, at first, but instead do exactly what they say...Block magic...All magic.
Also, love that description of sugar...I really want to use it somewhere now...
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Glad to hear that! The princesses are coming back soon, along with several other characters, We will be switching back to their POV in two to three chapters, depending on the word count. As to the wing question I really don't want to spoil everything, so I won't be revealing that yet, although that issue will be addressed in the story soon.
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When at the castle, Ari stumbles into what seems to be the royal pantry, with rows of shelves stuffed with sacks of sugar...
What follows will be known as The Blackout, where a sudden blast of magical over-pressure erupted from the castle, and rendered most of the city unconscious
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Is confused what is joke ?
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There's a joke?
8820055 Thanks for responding. Could you help clear up my mind on a few things so I don't sound like a judgemental @$$hole? Is Lyric the morally bankrupt psychopath she seems or am I really missing something? I do not like being wrong, but I like incorrectly gauging others less.
And while I would like to see somebody set Celestia and Luna straight on the racism, Chrysalis was at least partially to blame for the invasion fiasco. She never sent any letters stating the problem or made any attempts to resolve the issue peacefully.
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As to the first question, Lyric as a character is meant to be extremely flawed. Raised by morally questionable beings that were both outright disliked for their species alone and their coupling, this in turn coupled with the antipathy most beings have towards hybrids she grew a general dislike for others outside her family group. Most notably, she hates a certain swirly bearded fellow, not spoiling why. So, is she a psychopath? Not intentionally, although her great apathy towards equestrian ponies, who are the main targets of the gang, makes it appear so. The only reason they let her in the gang to begin with was her powers. While she only wanted acceptance, a simple need that she did not get with her family suddenly gone and no being to turn to, a fake relationship was better than none at the time. Of course, she wants to bring them back, but that has been beyond her means so far. His gang was not her first choice, nor was it her first time withstanding such treatment. Hopefully that covers most of it.
As to the racism, as with a lot of elements in this story, it is not what it seems to be. Sorry that I can't say more but that is about to be published soon so I can't spoil it.
I Hope this helped a little and never be afraid to comment. Sorry that I couldn't elaborate more, but important chapters are coming soon so I'm limited in how much I can reveal. But I hope you continue to enjoy it.
8820264 Fair enough. And about what I said regarding our Changeling Queen?
8820937 Would you prefer what happened in Hati?
Um... if it only requires seven gates, and all creatures rely on magic to sustain them... would 12 gates kill? Eagerly awaiting more though.
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Instead of trying to woo the princesses, why not intentionally triggering their estrus cycles and then leaving? They’ll then seek him out eventually and maybe do whatever he wants.