Join Spike Drago, his assistant Applebloom and the annoying estate manager Hoity Toity as they solve mysteries and take down criminals in the paradise Island of Haywaii.
This takes in the future where we meet a 27 year old Spike. Everything is looking up for the star police officer,; He has a great job, wife and is debt free. Life is good, but fate don't like that. He loses everything only to end up on a tropical island with a new job thanks to a recommendation from The Pony of Pop. He'll meet new friends, connects with some old ones, makes some enemies and maybe, just maybe get the girl. Who knows?
Oh and the prissy and proper Hoity Toity is skilled at Breyzillian Jiu Jitsu meaning he can snap necks like pencils and choke out an Ursa Minor.
Loosely based on the show Magnum P.I and yes cars(powered by magic), alcohol, guns, and drugs exist in this version of Equestria.
The image is owned by Hasbro and was found on DA. I just used MS paint to making it vaguely resemble my story.
LOL, magnum p.i + ponies = awesome..
I love it...
I wanted to something no one's ever done. Make a Magnum P,I parody and make Hoity Toity bad ass yet still prissy. He's an 10th degree red belt in Brazilian Jiu Jitsu and can kick your ass while spewing dry whit and trolling your outfit.
Nice idea for a storyline series. I approve the idea in full.
Please do keep up the good work upon such a great storyline idea like this one.
Excellent
I had to read it again, this is good stuff, and i just caught that Soarin' and Twilight were married
okay... um... why is Rarity alwas bad?
I just don't get it
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Because Some people don't like Sparity shipping.
Great! Can't wait for the first crime he's gonna foil! Maybe add Fleet as a boss or something. But then again, who am I to tell you what to do?
Can't wait to read more
This better come soon, boy....
Okay, I've waited too long for this. Time for my most pursuasive weapon in the internet: Screaming at you in german!
Was ist der Sinn dieser insubordinance! Ihre Vorgesetzten und ich warten schon viel zu lange für Drago S. I. 'S erste Kapitel veröffentlicht wird, und werden immer unruhiger! Wenn sie nicht beeilen, ich und Alptraum werden ihr kopf!
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Dude I've got a lot of things going on, and yes I have been dragging my feet on this one. It doesn't help I got homework to do for my programming class, job searching, mass effect 3 and a ton of stuff on Netfix to watch. I'll tell you what I write something in 2 hrs and what I write will be the new chapter. I'll lightly edit it and there you're new chapter. Oh, and how the hell does yelling at me in German help me.
Everypony's gonna hate me after this episode!
Cars used in this story so far for reference
'84-'87 Jeep Cherokee
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The '85 Ferrari 208 GTS
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Sikorsky S-64 lift helicopter
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'76 Chevy Blazer
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'06-'09 Ford Crown Victoria
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'05 Chevy Impala
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'92 Cadillac Allante
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Like always excellent work, however I felt that it was a little fast paced and there were a few spelling mistakes. Still I love the story and best wishes!
Oh, dear, I fear that I now look like a pervert, jerk, and many other names....
Boom, boom, boom, boom....
I got a-shot a-right down....
Shot off my feet....
They called my lot a heap....
Why do you hate me?
Boom, boom, boom, boom....
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Dude, most TV shows have cartoonist villains, but hey at least I made Wilcox a deeper character.
309969 Are you suggesting that I provide more info on Wilcox?
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what I'm saying is, I took his basic characteristics tweaked them and added more character to him. I still made him a Mopar(dodge, Plymouth and Chrysler) fanboy.
310042 You failed to mention his lifelong obsession with them.
Finally, I can beat the crap out of your stories!
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Me gusta.
Just wanted to say, I'm releasing a detective fic of my own soon. Hope you'll check it out, and hope you like it as much as i liked this!
Cheers!
*stands up while being beaten senseless by vigilantes*
NOW, YOU HOLD ON A MINUTE!
*gets in donkey's face*
My carlots...are NOT crumby! I supply personal luxury automobiles from quality brands, like- Cadillac, Dodge, Pontiac, Rolls-Royce, Bentley, hell, even for those communism buffs out there, a couple of GAZ Chaika's as well. You can call me a rapist, waffler, you can call me evil, but YOU NEVER SPEAK OF MY LOTS AS SUBSTANDARD EVER AGAIN!
I just decided to read it again.
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Yeah...*rolls eyes*... their great. Let's take a look at your one of your lots. oh what's this an AMC Pacer, a Pontiac Aztek, a Ford Mustang MKII, a Suzuki Samurai, a Morris Marina, a Chrysler Lebaron, a Chevy Luv, a Chevette?! BURN THE WITCH!!! WHAT KIND OF MONSTER ARE YOU!!!
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^ These are the citizens that found out you were using more bondo that actually steel in most of your cars.
649055 I CARRY NO SUCH THING!
HOW DARE YOU INSULT ME IN FRONT OF MY WIFE?!
Cars I DO carry:
*AMC Ambassador
*Chevrolet Impala
*Pontiac Grand Ville
*Almost every Cadillac ever made accept for the Catera and Cimarron
*Rolls Royce Silver Shadow
*Bentley Continental
*Dodge Royal Monaco
*Your Mother
649055 And I will also add that you have PERMANENTLY SOILED my reputation on this site, by doing two things:
*Making me a rapist
*MAKING ME DRIVE A MOTHERFUCKING ALLANTE! I would've rather driven an ex- cab like a '94 Caprice or a '92 Crown Vic, with all the vomit and puke and semen in the interior than an Allante!
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It doesn't matter the Fleetwood of my universe has been torn limb from limb and what's left of his body has been sold off to the glue factory which is how they dispose of criminal dead bodies and the glue factory also acts as the death sentence in this universe.
649087*Dinky Hooves and Twist are doing art project at school*
*Twist squeezes out some glue onto some construction paper*
"Wow, what do you think is IN glue?"
"My dad!"
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Glue needs to come from somewhere. It does give me an idea for a fic. Not just criminal ponies, other criminals of other species as well, glue is made by and regulated by the governments of every nation however the Changeling nation has no need for it due to their own bodily excretions and the same applies to the Griffon empire which like the Weaver bird they use their own saliva which of course is filtered and bottled and sold at Griffon Office Depots and other assorted school supply stores. The trial process for an Equestrian criminal to get the death sentence requires acts most heinous, three brief trails, in addition the bodies of deceased homeless and unidentifiable corpses are also disposed off in this way.
649331 Fleetwood's Final Score:
*Luna
*Rarity
*Trixie
*Unknown Griffin
*Some mare a dragon liked
*Quan's daughter
*AND MANY MORE!
This is some storyline as it seems that Spike may have an enemy or two overshadowing his activities in later chapters.
Please do keep up the good work upon such a great tale.
Okay, I KNOW I've already beat this to death, but there are some flaws in your story.
Flaws in YOUR story? It CAN'T be, you're SOOOOO much more educated in EVERYTHING than me!
Flaw 1: Spike's Jeep could've been sent over easily on a freighter.
Flaw 2: A real police officer wouldn't be so impulsive, unless he was a total dumbass, which I am quite sure Quan is not.
Flaw 3: FLEETWOOD WOULDN'T DRIVE AN ALLANTE'! He REALLY must've hit rock bottom to do that, eh?
Flaw 4: Fleetwood could've left them in the DUST with the Allante', although I think, even though it's not a Cadillac, he would drive an El Camino, or a Chevelle, or maybe even some souped-up '57 Bel Air.
Flaw 5: If a car gets a tire blown out, it would probably be slowed down just enough for the ponies chasing to catch up
Flaw 6: NEVER, in MY WHOLE LIFE, have I seen a car FLIP when it hit a pothole.
Flaw 7: Jeez, Fleet, did you become some sorta WIMP? You were raised by the biggest sumbitch in Ponyville, you should be able to take 'em! And, even if he did fight them off, he would've been put in police custody for what happened with Quan's daughter.
And, Flaw 8: You blew Fleetwood's original character WAY outta preportion. He was originally made to be an, "Everyday Villain", you know, those supposed. "best friends", that turn on you, or that weasel that steals your girlfriend.
I'm never gonna forgive you, I admit it.
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My answers to these flaws:
Flaw 1: It's set on an island, so there's no train shipping.
Flaw 2: Quan doesn't act out of impulse. He's pissed out of his mind and his revenge was a long time coming. He warned Spike to stay out of it.
Flaw 3 ,Flaw 4 and Flaw 5: I needed a fast car with problems and the Allante fit the bill with it's early Northstar V8. All for the rest of the chase the other cars were 2005 SS Impalas and The only reason the Blazer caught up with them was the winding mountain roads kept the Allante from truly reachinf top speed and it wouldn't make for an exciting chase otherwise.
Flaw 6: Blame it on movie magic, that and the rear end finally gave out.
Flaw 7 and 8: There were about ten or so creatures demanding blood and some were armed with police grade hardware. Unless he was going to go Hulk then his ass was grass regardless. Plus I needed a evil villain and I did so in the cheapest way possible. Also I don't anyone that steals from you is qualifies to be your friend. Fleetwood from your fics was already kind of an asshole, I just kicked it up a notch. I turned the knob to the extreme end of the cartoonishly evil villain dial. The only thing I didn't have him do is eat babies and breath fire while burning down an orphanage and pissing on the ashes.
988430 When I said, Freighter, I was talking about ships, not freight trains.
Eat ba-..........
How.....could you say such a thing?
*Cue cute, sad Fleetwood face*
988430 But, as much as I believe you fucked up, you still did a wonderful job at writing, and I will say, that you've given me a future to prevent in a story reminiscent of, "Back To The Future".
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Back to the Future...hmmm
"Marty you gotta come back with me to the future."
"What about Jennifer, we just can't leave her here."
"Bring her along too, this concerns her as well."
"Wait, what happens to us in the future? Do we become assholes or something?"
.....
988631 NOW WHO DOES THAT REMIND US OF? Hm........
SPIKE!
Nah......
ELDORADO!
Getting warmer.....
MEL-
Mel's DEAD in the future!
Oh, I KNOW!
Fleetwoood!
You can beat a dead horse with Fleetwood dieing, but you must remember, WE'VE GOTTA HAVE 1991 CAPRICE 9C1'S IN THIS DAMN THING!
They remind me of New York in the '90's, and the movie, "Jumanji".
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As long as you remember that I don't have a era-limit on what cars are in my fic.
I based the car selection on things I see around me like: Lexuses(cars and SUV's), Toyotas(Camery, Corollas, Tacomas, Tundras, etc), Nissans(Ultimas, Pathfinders, Sentras), Hondas, Hyundais, Ford(Mustangs, F-150's, Rangers, panel vans, Focuses), GMC and Chevy(Sierras/Silverados, Astro vans, Camaros, a lot of Cavaliers and a few Corvettes) and Volkswagen(Jettas and Bugs) for the general populous. Then I pepper the rest of the fic with cars I love, like: 60's/70's Muscle(Cameros, Darts, Skylarks, 442's, Mustangs, R/T Chargers, R/T Challengers and Cudas), 50's/60's favorites(Impalas, Bel-Air's, Chevy and Ford pick-up trucks, Imperials, 300 series E, C, A, Galaxies, Packard Caribbeans, Riverias-1965, etc), Foreign favorites(Europe -Triumphs, Tigers, Interceptors, 1973 BMW CSL, etc, Japanese: 95-97 Supras, 70's Corollas, MR-2, Nissan 510, 210 and Fairlady, Skyline, Z) and Last I like to throw in these cars(87'GNX, Novas, Crown Victoria's, 90's SS impalas/Caprice, Quattro,)
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1024290 GOOD JOB!
1024290 In recent books, Wilcox has a brother in the Police Force. In the storyline, right now, in my newest book that takes place in the present ("Just Where Did They All Go?"), they have started to phase out the old, '77 Plymouth Furies and Dodge Monacos, '74 Monacos, '71 Impalas, '72 Ford Custom 500s, etc., in favor of '90's Caprices, at least in Ponyville.
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Sorry, dude, but I don't like most of those cars. Mid 70's to Mid 90'S produced a lot of American crap cars. I'd like to blame someone but I can only blame the gas crunch, cheesy era gimmicks, and the Chrysler K-car series that introduced us to disposable cars. Only few American cars were worth buying: The Fox body Mustang, the camaros that weren't the R/S edition, The GM G-body(Regal, Cutlass, El Camino, and Monte Carlo), Chevy S10 pick up trucks, Trucks in general and Jeep (anything).
1024648 Hey, Monacos have done a LOT MORE than your crappy Oldsmobile. They were SO STRONG, "The Dukes of Hazzard" reused a lot of them. You get it bent out of shape? You can EASILY mend it.
Might I add that a '74 Monaco Police Car( Not the Bluesmobile) holds the record for LONGEST MOVIE JUMP?
But, you're right, especially about the disposable car, and those damned Ks.
This is so going to be one fun and crazy adventure.
Please do keep up the good work.