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Rakoon1


I'm a Portuguese author who wants to share his stories.

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is the romance going to be Shining/Twilight, Twilight/Cadence, or something else entirely?

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Well, I don't like to spoil my stories, but I can't ensure you that there will be other pairings as well. Think of this like a soup opera. At least, that's I'm trying to do here.

Just giving you fair warning here, if there's going to be incestuous sex, I'm not going to read this story.

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You have to read the description. This is a reboot with me giving new lives to the characters. Don't worry, I don't have plans to make something like that... not in one of my sagas.

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You said that this contains, *Explicit M/F and M/M sex. Does that mean that there isn't any lesbianism?

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I don't know yet. I go where the story goes. But if that happens, then I'll just add it to the list, don't worry.

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Oh.....I was only interested cause I thought it would be a Twilight x Cadance romance fic

*adds to tracking
I demand MORE!!! :flutterrage:

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So does that mean there won't be any Twilight x Cadance romance?

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Okay, I'll say this because you really want to know. This story doesn't have Twilight x Cadance romance. It is not in my plans.

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Awwww! There aren't many TwiDance fics, and out of the ones that do exist, only very few are good.

I was hoping this one would be another good one. *sigh*

well this is going to be great when they learn who twilight really is,
part of me hope that twilight is now preggers

Now, I haven't read this story yet, but shouldn't there be an alternate universe tag?

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AU is not, however, appropriate for cases where MLP:FiM has no significant impact on the story. When all characters are stripped of their defining features and replaced with fundamentally different traits and characterization, any and all relevance to MLP:FiM is discarded.

I was liking this fic it was good but you ruined it with the Shining and Twilight pairing bit. THAT'S DISGUSTING!

Yes i knwo AU story but don;t care it still gross and ugghh!! :pinkiesick::pinkiesick:

It sure took time, but I finally got myself into reading this one.

And... this is a fairly good fic. Not the best, but definetly not the worst. Few grammar issues here and there but otherwise good english and readable. I'll follow along and see where this goes
:twilightsmile:

Are you gonna continue this? :pinkiehappy:

Yes, of course! I just need more time to think about the next chapters.

You seriously have to fix the grammar. I can't read further then the 6th chapter because my head is pounding so much that if I didn't know any better I would swear a large civilization of dwarfs had moved in with and got to mining and smithing with a gusto.
I really like the premise fr the story and I'm certain that I would love the story itself, if it wasn't for the grammar. I mean I could write better and I'm so bad at writing that I'm pretty sure there's laws prohibiting me from writing stories.

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English is not my first language. I'm doing the best I can with the grammar and I believe I'm getting better at each chapter I post. Right now, I'm more focused on my stories in FanFiction and I'm trying to pass my FimFiction stories to there. During that process, I'm also trying to fix the grammar errors I may have done there.

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I'm sorry for how nasty I must have seemed to you. I was having a bad day and I let it get to me. It is a really good idea for a story and I wish you luck in working out the issues it has. I'm looking forward to seeing how it all turns out.
Again I apologize for how offensive my comment was. I mean when I reread it a moment ago it was offensive to me, so I can only imagine how it was for you.

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It's okay... No worries.

Is this story dead. Cause I keep checking it yet it's still incomplete and the last chapter is still 'The Apple Family'. Also, I
don't know whether to like or dislike it since I really do love the story plot and have been looking forward to the next chapter but the whole Twilight and Shining Armor in love thing is just gross since in the series they are siblings and I really just hate the fact that Cadance and Shining Armor don't love each other since their love power defeating Chrysalis scene always brings a tear to my eyes.

Comment posted by ace123 deleted Oct 16th, 2022

is this canceled just wondering

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I just have a lot to deal with and other projects that have more priority. This story is just a side project.

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