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Crystal Aura


Long lost Princess of Crystal Empire. Writer & Editor. Admin @ Female Writers & Please Read My Story! <3MLP & Miraculous : Tales of Ladybug & Cat Noir<3 <3Percy Jackson<3

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[Update : 21/07/2019] Thank you to all who read my story as my story has 684 views!

When King Discord & Queen Celestia married, they brought all the lands together to call it United Nation of Equestria & sent all the villains in the land to a Isle separated from the main land. Twenty years later, the children of the Main four villains : Nightmare Moon, Chrysalis, King Sombra & Gaia Everfree, come together & become the best of friends & travel to Equestria to study there as per the wishes of the benovelent Prince. At this offer, Nightmare Moon has different plans. She instructs the gang to retrieve the Magic Wand & to hand it to her so that she’ll be able to do as she wishes. What will happen in Equestria? What adventures await for the gang? What if it changes their lives forever? Will they do as per their instruction or choose the path of heroes? Find that & more in this story.

Chapters (4)
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Comments ( 31 )

The first time I've seen anyone write a story based on Disney Descendants

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I loved that concept very much. Did you enjoy the story? xxxx

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I'll have it read by day's end today

So a button can open the magic barrier around the isle, very interesting...:moustache:
Anyway can't wait to to read more of this. I can feel the "magics" of this story!:coolphoto:

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Ooh, I'll give you more magics in next chapter hopefully!

I look forward to seeing this continue.
There's so many ways to be wicked

When I was reading crossover I thought they and the other characters existed here. I think I also got the movie wrong, but I think this is the type of crossover where the characters are replaced right?

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You are absolutely right, kind sir/mam!

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HHhhmmm okay, I'm leaving on neutral terms then, sadly this is not what I call a crossover personally. I like it if both worlds meet each other instead of "the same stuff" in slightly different.

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I understand. I respect your opinions. So sorry that it didn't meet your criteria... :ajsleepy:

leave it to the thief to mess to forget to check for alarms

The interaction between Nightmare Moon and her daughter is just so intense. Twilight seems to be feeling conflicted: on one hand she wants to make her mother proud, but on the second she knows that what she is doing is wrong. I can’t wait to see what she chooses in the end.
Also great job Soarin. You managed to ruin everything! :twilightangry2:

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He did, thankfully. Or else imagine all the villains coming together to destroy the place!!!! :pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp:

What about Discord?

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I guess that Starlight Nova maybe wanted to see Discord as a villain or something.

But he's the King on this story.:unsuresweetie:

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You're right...! Although he was a villain before... kinda... :raritywink:

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How do you feel about the story so far? :duck:

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Yep!:yay:

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Oh, I didn't start reading it.:twilightsheepish:

But I'll do it.:twilightsmile:

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Hope you'll read it ASAP! :twilightsmile: xxxx

If I were Rainbow Dash I would have wanted to take part in that tourney. The suspense was very effective. Furthermore now Twilight will have to choose between her affection for Flash and her loyalty to her mother. Looking forward to reading more!

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That part when Rainbow joins Tourney is coming in the 2nd installment of the series. There'll be a conflict on that which I can't disclose... Don't wanna have you know it beforehand! Glad to read your comment!
xxxx

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Rainbow is coming? I guess I should have guessed that you had plans for her already!:pinkiegasp:

Okay, first Trender needs to be condemned. Second I am happy to see Twilight and Flash together. If I am to be honest, I did not see this coming at the beginning of the story, but romance is all well and good. I just hope that the main characters will make the right decision in their hearts. Finally, congratulations for the call scene, you’ve pictured just how good parents can be at making you feel embarrassed perfecty:twilightsheepish:.

PS: don’t worry about your exams too much, stress can be hurtful. Just remember that we are all here to support you.

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Sorry for replying very late! Guess I forgot that you had left a comment (how stupid of me...). The call scene is funny, I know. And I guess no story is complete without a tad bit of romance for taste... xxxx

Rainbow Dash and Soarin. The two most shipped pegasuses in MLP are my favorite pair in Defendants.

Also Carlos and Fairy Godmother's kid romance in the second one. So kinda awkward.

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