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Rakoon1


I'm a Portuguese author who wants to share his stories.

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  • TThe Taking of Tartarus
    When the Lord of Chaos conquer Tartarus, he use every villain in there to get revenge from the ponies who ruined his plans and also to spread his darkness. Will our heroes win this new battle agains the most evil being that exist?
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This story is a sequel to Twilight and Blue Sword


It had been a few weeks since Blue Sword had departed on his mission given by Princess Celestia. After some time on the road, the newest prince of Equestria found what he wanted: a certain fallen and petrified kingdom where he finds somepony who will be the key to the mystery of the mysterious Light Kingdom and the beginning of the search for the star seeds of the six Generals of the Order to save and retrieve the powerful kingdom, and Princess Twilight Sparkle is the one who will have the most important role in its resurgence. But the worst part is that the young princess and her friends will have to do it before that Evil has the opportunity to catch the six star seeds and soak Equestria and the rest of the world in total darkness.

Note: This story talks about Blue Sword's mission and Princess Twilight Sparkle's fate as princess. It is the true sequel of Twilight and Blue Sword. It must be noted that this alignment of stories doesn't follow the main alignment of the fourth season of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic.

First story: The Life of a Young Colt
Second story: Twilight and Blue Sword
Fourth story: The Taking of Tartarus
Fifth story: Star Knight and the Nine-Tailed Fox
Sixth story: The Island of Tambelon
Seventh story: Light and Darkness - The Shadow of Midnight
Eighth story: The Hidden Prince
Nineth story: Aventures in the Bermikun Triangle
Tenth story: The Elements of Virtue
Eleventh story: The Prince of the Cursed Kingdom

Chapters (20)
Comments ( 35 )

Wow. this will be interesting. I wonder what this story will be like. Good luck.

Wow. I wonder what is going to happen next. Good job with this story.

Wow. So we now know that is the general of Affection. She also has alot of power. Good luck Twilight and Blue. Maybe you can adopt Heartbeat in the end.

Could you put a Flashlight romance in your story?

4603561 I have not yet considered it, because I have other romance stories for Twilight, but I think I can make one with Flash Sentry.

Wow. Go Heart Beat. It looks like Twilight knows where the star seeds are hidden. I know too.

Oh boy. I know two ponies that are going to be causing trouble. I think will see the villain's identity before the surprise at the end. I know cadence is going to love that surprise. Good luck with future chapters. Sorry if this is vague, but I didn't wait to give anything away with my suspicions.

NO. I hope they can retrieve the Star seeds in time. I wonder if they get the other seeds, will the other generals free themselves from stone or not? Great chapter.

omg!!! did two get pregnet whenthey had smexs in the first book???? in a erlyer chapter when it siad she wasent fealing good and then she vomited i was like SHES PREGGY!!! lol luv this soooooooooooooooooooo much! no words!

i think twilight should louse the babay to mack for a more dramatic story but if u do please get her re preggy... i just sugjest this cuzz i want to see more of blu and twilight loving on each other and this would gave blu the opertunity to hug on twi and such! hope you at least think about it!

4710464 I'm dealing with it, but I have had other things to do.:facehoof: Don't worry, I'll post it soon.:scootangel:

4710495 k thanks! Just love this so much i can hardly waite! :twilightsheepish:

yay the chapter was awsome and a saw that comming!! haha you go dissy!!

YAY!!!! AWSOME!!!! :twilightsheepish: :heart::heart: LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!! And can't waite till twily tells blu shes preggy... but please think about what i siad in my other comments!! But any who keep of the good work!!

I added more text to complete more this second part.

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Maybe, but it's still to soon for that yet. I have not outlined my next work in this saga. But, in the meantime, I may able to post some other stories.

I hope there's a sequal to this sequal!! It's a really great story by the way!:heart: :twilightsmile:

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Of course, it's The Taking of Tartarus.

"Star seeds?" Twilight repeated. "But what is that?"

You know, The thing the Sailor Stars’ plot was centered on?
Really Twilight have you not seen Sailor Moon? Disappointed in you Twi.

Did I miss the blue one or is there only 5 on the map?

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The blue one is there. See above Dodge Junction.

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Wow that is an stupidly light blue!

That was very interesting history

A great masterpiece on chess ♟️ part I love it :twilightsmile: :heart:

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