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thiswasamistake


I'm Mistake or Delusional Junkie! Sometimes I write, sometimes I prowl and leave (nice) comments on stories I like! [They/Them] (pfp credit is hioshiru-alter on DA)

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Didn't this story used to have more chapters?

10583073
Ah yeah I accidentally hit publish too soon; it's up now!

10583285
I'm afraid I'm going to have to ask you to clarify

I quite like this alternative universe that you have weaved so far, let's see where this ride takes us.

10583095
Oof!, I did that too on my story lol. It's a shame that the "Edit" feature is literally right there next to it... I almost click on publish soo many times. :rainbowlaugh:

10583502
Thank you! I've got big plans :twilightsmile: Hopefully I don't disappoint

10583822
If it happens again I might just have to start taking shots every time I hit publish too soon :yay:

before I read this, just gotta say from the title alone:

'From where king sombra is standing, the alicorn are evil'

10585933
Omg I hope not! :rainbowderp: That's definitely not what I'm trying to convey with this story. I want to write a story where the characters aren't as black and white as they are in the show; everyone fucks up, even the Princesses. If, by the end of this story, you struggle to know how you feel about at least one of the alicorns to some extent, then I've written my story right!

10585947
that a star wars reference :rainbowwild:

10585947
I know, but just wanted to quote the movie in some way.
my views on the story

chapter 1-setup
chapter 2-setup
chapter 3-twilight loosens her bias against celestia being always right and willing to listen.
chapter 4-sombra's testimony

I take it this is an AU where Twilight became an Alicorn earlier? Cause if I recall, she was still a unicorn during the canonical first meeting with Sombra.

10586364
You know, honestly I was half asleep when I started writing this and it must've slipped my mind entirely! But hey, that gives me an excuse to write even more lore for this AU in upcoming bonus chapters, right? :rainbowwild: Let's say for simplicity's sake, the short explanation is that she got her wings from the Canterlot wedding. I've got some interesting plans for that chapter/explanation :raritywink:

You have kept my intrigue hostage for over a week, now. Lol

10603032
Luckily for you, the next chapter's out! And it's a heck of a doozy :rainbowwild:

So which Sombra are we talking about here? Season three or season nine?

Did I ever mention- WOW that's a doozy!

10608146
Y'know, I probably should have specified that! But, as you (and hopefully most other readers) may have deduced from the lack of Starlight Glimmer (and various other Season 9 plot points :rainbowwild:), this is Season 3 Sombra. I'm not sure if you saw the other comments, but just in case you were unsure because of alicorn Twilight: She's a princess because I'm a forgetful fuck and forgot that she doesn't ascend until later in the series, so the short explanation is that she got her wings from the Canterlot Wedding instead of Starswirl's Spell in this universe.

"Oh, did I never mention that I'm the creator of the Crystal Heart?"

Now that's a hell of a cliff hanger line!

Very nice, give a very "Dracula untold" feel ti the story. Would like to see where this goes.

I didn’t expect that twist.

Very nice ending!

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