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Moonking


Praise the moon and the princess https://www.patreon.com/Battlelord

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Then he is killed by the REAL reaper of equestria.
We have never seen that alicorn cause she is a death goddess so the censors said no

Good start. Looking forward to next part.

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Human kicking buts!!!!! Finally!!!!!!!!!!!!

Whoever just dislike my comment your mom I said hoe. If don't like when a human kicks ass then you my friend should have been born a cockroach.

Please continue

Comment posted by Skye787 deleted Nov 16th, 2017

8431383 At least the cockroach would have a better grasp on the English language.

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English is not my first language you moron. Also if you think that a cockroach has a better grasp on the English language then you have a serious mental problem and you need to go to the closest Nut House. May God have mercy on your pathetic little mind.

Also haters are going to hate hate hate seems they don't have anything better to do.

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That was one of the better insults I've seen.
I applaud you.

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That wasn't an insult but whatever.

15 up 16 down? Wow, this fic is crashing like Malaysian Airlines.

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I actually laughed so bravo, that's hard to do.

Also good story. If it keeps up like this I'll be looking forward to its updates. I'll be watching like Roz to Wazowski

This is pretty good, and the gramical errors aren't even that bad :) I'd sudgets reading it over by yourself out loud. It always helps me find the small stuff

Still wondering why the first few comments have dislikes. Oh well, pls continue

Really good story I'm interested please update when you can

Awesome I've been waiting a long time for this new chapter. Can't wait for the next one.:pinkiehappy:

Please continue

i found this to feel a bit rushed with bad grammar and the like. it could be better paced and i have no idea how to improve the grammar as i suck at it myself. but i actually enjoyed it. the idea behind it amuses me so i will continue to read future chapters.

HAaaaHahahaa I hope there’s more chapters soon :pinkiecrazy:

i'll read this later but the moment i read the title i immediately thought of the song don't fear the reaper by blue oyster cult/:twilightsmile:

I like this story keep up the good work

Happy to see this story isn't dead^_^

"Please sir, may I have some more? :pinkiesad2:"

4 females, one dude, I think we all know how this is going to end up.

Oh god naw I really want more

red stallion with the mare who nearly kicked my skull in. They had two pies in hand with an awkward smile on their faces. A little filly was behind them waving a small we're sorry flag. I clicked my tongue then took the scythe off my shoulder and started to walk over to them after pushing my way out of the group. The red stallion put himself in front of the mare and filly as I got close. I stopped in front of him then put the tip of the scythe at his throat. "If I see any of you again, then I'll kill them now get lost." that was rude and not nice

We need an update!

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They literally tried to kick his head in for no reason whatsoever, I would have said the exact same thing to them all the ponies who were total dicks I wouldn't want anything to do with them

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