Then he is killed by the REAL reaper of equestria.
We have never seen that alicorn cause she is a death goddess so the censors said no

Good start. Looking forward to next part.

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Good start.

Human kicking buts!!!!! Finally!!!!!!!!!!!!

Whoever just dislike my comment your mom I said hoe. If don't like when a human kicks ass then you my friend should have been born a cockroach.

Please continue

8431383 At least the cockroach would have a better grasp on the English language.

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English is not my first language you moron. Also if you think that a cockroach has a better grasp on the English language then you have a serious mental problem and you need to go to the closest Nut House. May God have mercy on your pathetic little mind.

Also haters are going to hate hate hate seems they don't have anything better to do.

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That was one of the better insults I've seen.
I applaud you.

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That wasn't an insult but whatever.

15 up 16 down? Wow, this fic is crashing like Malaysian Airlines.

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I actually laughed so bravo, that's hard to do.

Also good story. If it keeps up like this I'll be looking forward to its updates. I'll be watching like Roz to Wazowski

This is pretty good, and the gramical errors aren't even that bad :) I'd sudgets reading it over by yourself out loud. It always helps me find the small stuff

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Savage

Still wondering why the first few comments have dislikes. Oh well, pls continue

Really good story I'm interested please update when you can