This story is a sequel to Fluttershy's Big Adventure
Pinkie Pie loves parties, making and eating sweets, her family, but most of all...making people laugh. However, when she discovers her...unique power, what will she do?
Have fun, of course. But the others feel it's too dangerous and try to discourage Pinkie from using it. Can Pinkie show them that she can handle her power responsibly before it's too late?
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Hey there. Once again, VERY good job on the latest installment of your series. As usual, I LOVED the exchanges and characterizations. I particularly liked the others' reactions to Pinkie's new ability. I also really liked the little bit of world-building in the author's notes.
Something I'm realizing; so far all the abilities are those seen in "Legend of Everfree" (which is far from a complaint. Rather, it is a pleasing observation)
Of course, because Twilight, in this universe, already HAS telekinesis at a pretty respectable level, that means she'll probably have to get a different new ability. But, since she's being saved for last anyway, that will provide more thinking time.
At any rate, I will very definitely be looking forward to more of this.
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Would you believe I actually came up with the idea of the girls each having their own superpower long before Legends of Everfree?
AJ, Rainbow and Fluttershy were easy to figure out. (I mean 'duh'). But originally I gave Rarity the power of Invisibility and after a bit of brain-wracking, I gave Pinkie a sonic scream. But after the movie came out, I decided to go with those.
Don't worry about Twilight, I already got an idea for her...
Do you think I should also put more 'world-building' facts at the bottom of these chapters? That way I wouldn't have to do too much exposition in the chapters.
Love it so far
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Yeah, I can believe that.
Anyway, thanks very much for the added info.
And, well, if you DO wish to include added world-building info in the author's notes, that is entirely fine by me. Of course, I'm not going to object if you find a way to also include the info in-story if you can find a way to do it logically (such as one or more of the heroes researching a particularly tough villain or monster or a character being explained by another character that knew them in the past to other characters who DIDN'T).
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Thanks!
Hey there. Yeah, I can completely understand how it can be hard to think of a good storyline for Pinkie. Still, it WAS worth the wait.
Excellent job on the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up. It is certainly very easy to understand both sides. On one hand, you can hardly blame Pinkie for getting frustrated. On the other, you can hardly fault her friends for getting a little jumpy. And yeah, I loved Pinkie's little bit of Genre Savvy just before she got the emergency text . The little bit of added universe info in the author's notes was also quite welcome.
Of course, now we have to wonder what particular sort of emergency would require Pinkie to gain that particular power, but that's exactly what we will find out in the next chapter.
I'll very definitely be looking forward to more of this.
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Yeah next chapter might be a while.
First, I'm stuck on where I want this story to go.
Second, I'm moving back to college on Sunday and I'll be pretty busy getting ready until then.
So, it might be a few days or even weeks until I can get back to this. Sorry about that.
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Perfectly all right. Thanks for the explanation.
Once again, great job on the latest chapter. It took a while (understandably so, given your current real world concerns), but it was WELL worth the wait. Again, great job on the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I particularly liked the reactions to and description of the Orcs.
Of course, something is going to end up going wrong with the plan (1. every time somebody goes into detail about a plan BEFORE it is put into action in a story like this, it ALWAYS fails [which is why Indy Ploys tend to be MUCH more effective; the enemy can't figure out the plan if the executors themselves are making it up as they go along] and 2. because of the nature of the story, Pinkie's going to have to get a chance to shine), but it's still going to be interesting to see.
At any rate, I WILL be looking forward to more, but will also more than respect that real world concerns have to come first.
Again, you did a great job on the action, exchanges, characterizations, humor and future chapter set-up in all the right places. And, yeah, I feel sorry for Pinkie for wanting to be useful, but also realizing her efforts made the situation worse. I'm going to guess the next chapter is going to have Pinkie successfully rescue her friends, but also realizing she needs to be much more responsible with her power .
At any rate, I will very certainly be looking forward to more of this, but will also recognize that real world concerns have to come first.
Well, that's another story in this series wrapped up. Great job on the action, exchanges, characterizations and future story set-up in all the right places. And, yeah, that WAS a clever plan by Pinkie and I'm glad she IS learning to be more responsible and patient. Three down, three to go. I'll definitely be looking forward to the next story in the series, but I will more than respect the fact that real world concerns have to come first.
I did too
Brilliant!!!!!
Wait, the language of the magic is Garlic?!
I still clove your story.