This story is a sequel to Elements of Equestria
Set a few days after "Equestria girls" (Or Elements of Equestria in my case), the girls are enjoying a picnic in the park when they begin to wonder about Twilight Sparkle's and Sunset Shimmer's history together. Sunset decides to come clean to her friends about her past with Twilight Sparkle, and how it shaped the people they turned out to be.
(Second story of my 'Elements of Equestria' series)
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Nice story. I really liked this story. Good job.
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Thank you so much!
As an aspiring writer and newbie fanfic writer this means a lot to me.
It's a great story i do love it, but...I still would rather seen the first story finished then read this.
Feels like I missed out.
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Sorry, but right now I'm kinda stuck on where I want that story to go without making it to similar to Imnopony's version.
If you have any questions though, feel free to ask!
Splendid job on this short story. This is definitely some good detail concerning Twi and Sunset's past together in this universe. And, yeah, I would DEFINITELY like to see your spin on the Siren's origins. You certainly succeeded in stoking my curiosity there.
As good as this chapter is, I'd like to know who's saying what. It may just be me, but when a character does something perfectly characteristically, I'm like, "That's So-and-so all right!!"