This story is a sequel to Digging Deep
Fluttershy is a quiet girl. There's nothing she enjoys nothing more than caring for her animals, except maybe hanging out with her friends. However, when the animals start talking back, she finds herself torn between excitement and terror. When a manticore starts causing trouble, will Fluttershy's new ability be able to help?
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Sorry I took a while to get around to reading this, but I have to say, once again, excellent job thus far. The characterizations, exchanges and future chapter set-up are all well done in all the right places. I particularly liked the scene at Fluttershy's home as well as Fluttershy's surprised look at the end of the chapter.
Though I have to say, I hope Dog-Spike took Owlicious better than his dragon counterpart did at first.
Well, on to the next chapter.
Once again, splendid job on the characterizations (particularly with Fluttershy's mixed feelings about her new ability), exchanges (particularly AJ's attempts at being supportive) and future chapter set-up in all the right places. And, yeah, I can definitely see the points you made in the author's notes.
I'll very definitely be looking forward to the next chapter.
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Yeah, he's pretty cool with Owloicious. My idea is that her parents got Spike when she started Crystal Prep and they noticed she was having a hard time. (After-all, you can't cuddle a bird.)
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Intriguing thought and point quite well taken. :-D
Now, all I can say is thanks very much for getting the final chapter up. :-D The action, characterizations, exchanges and wrap-up were all very well done. I particularly liked Fluttershy's chat with Angel as well as the others' response to how Fluttershy handled the situation.
I'm quite certainly going to be looking forward to the next installment.
Everyone knows the angel can be a bit of a crank and at times seems like he only gives a damn about himself but he really does care about Fluttershy as he has shown numerous times plus he sure as hell has a mischievous side
Yes she said the thing score she even went through the motions bonus
That's my dear Fluttershy! What a cool story!
This kinda reminds me of the second episode of "MLP: FiM", which showed a similar thing with that manticore, and Fluttershy stepping in to take care of it.
Definetly getting favorized. Well done. :)