This story is a sequel to Sketched to life
Applejack prefers the simple things in life: working on the farm, helping her family, and hanging out with her friends. Of course, now that she is one of the protecters of Equestria and the Element of Honesty, things are changing, and she's not sure she likes it. Applejack would rather leave behind all the fancy titles and attention and go back to what she had before. But when an accident leaves the others incapacitated, she'll have to dig deep inside herself and find the strength to continue.
Meanwhile, more about the Elements of Harmony are revealed, could this be used to help save the day?
Chapters (5)
Very little I can say beyond, thanks very much for getting the next story started. And, yeah, the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-ups are all great in all the right places. I particularly liked the scene with AJ's family (though I have a bad feeling Apple Bloom and her friends are going to end up in some pretty deep doo-doo relatively soon).
At any rate, I'll very definitely be looking forward to more of this.
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What else can you expect from those three?
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Indeed. :-D
Very little I can say beyond excellent job on this latest chapter. Splendid work on the characterizations, exchanges and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I particularly liked Celestia's Spider-Man homage when she was addressing the Element Bearers, the scene with the Crusaders AND the signs of Applejack's new super-strength .
And, yeah, I'll very definitely be looking forward to the next installment.
Hey there. Once again, wonderful job on the exchanges (particularly between the main group in general at the start of the chapter AND the chat between AJ and Flash) AND the future chapter set-up in all the right places. Well, on to the next chapter.
Again, very good job on this latest chapter. The action, exchanges, characterizations and epilogue set-up are all well done in all the right places. I particularly liked the others giving AJ that pep talk as well as the others' reactions to AJ's super-strength . Well, the important thing is that the situation is taken care of and nobody got hurt.
I am very definitely going to be looking forward to the epilogue.
Hello there. Excellent job on the epilogue. The exchange concerning AJ's new ability was quite well done.
As for the order, well, obviously AJ was first:
Fluttershy will be second
Pinkie Pie will be third
Rarity will be fourth
Rainbow will be fifth
and Twilight herself will be last (not only was that the order the Elements were revealed in the first two episodes, but considering Twilight is already the best of the six in terms of magic, it would logically take longer for her new powers to become obvious anyway).
Of course, I WILL admit that I COULD be wrong.
At any rate, I will very definitely be looking forward to seeing what you come up with next, but I WILL respect that inspiration might not be easy to come by.
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Thanks again!
As for the order: Your frighteningly right. I wasn't even thinking of the show. Are you reading my mind?
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No. I just made an EXTREMELY lucky guess.
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Tree sap. Lots and lots of tree sap.
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Yeah, and mind reading is Sunset's power, silly!