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>Tagged M
>Tagged Sex
>Says sex in the description
>"Warning: Sex"
Ya thunkit?
How can sex scenes be bad?
8522854 I've never written one before
8522817 can't say I didn't warn any one.
This looks like a promising story so far, I wonder if RD, while trying to find out who foalnapped the foals, is going to end up becoming the foals nanny.
I look forward to the rest of this
8522854
When you're a reviewer like me, you see some shit...
Go read Wildfire: Lighting The Flame from start to finish. Unless you have some very particular fetishes and tastes...
8522862
Can you be more specific? What exactly am I going to be reading? Are you referring to your bad writing, or the sex itself is actually bad. Or is it a kink you expect to be shamed on? Your readers will appreciate this.
10308724 what I mean is I'm not good at writing sex scenes.
Interesting chapter.
Needs some corrections in spelling throughout, but otherwise pretty good.
Not fond of Starlight being implied to be a victim as well, but that's just due to personal bias.
Can't wait for the next chapter
10728976 Thanks, Still I thought I got them all thanks for telling me.
10728981
No problem
Nice to see an update on this one. I love that they Panties are used as a symbol of their minds being dominated. I wonder what will happen to RP from this point onward? keep it up.