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A crossover/HiE writer whose own distractions with the internet ended up with him running into ponies. And now he's a fanfiction writer.
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First things first: I wasn't joking when I said I'd write something for every genre.
That includes clop. The only ones I probably won't do are tragedy and sad, because I hate being sad, and would very much rather be awesome instead.
Second, this was the result of an idea I had floating around in my head revolving around the idea of estrus and being a bit insane in one of my temporary insomniac stints. I wrote it down, and this is the result. I'd like to know what readers think of this. As of right now, I don't really have any current plans for future chapters. I'm also wondering whether or not this really qualifies for a 'Slice of Life' tag since ending up in a giant... well, you-know-what may seem a bit over the top.
TL;DR: I'm looking for feedback on this. Please provide some.
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Hmm, interesting. You've gotten my attention. I'll read later, and try to give some feedback.
~Syn3rgy
This is some good stuff. I thoroughly enjoyed it, and I hope to see more of this.
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960689 Any more specific thoughts on it? Just trying to gather some more in-depth feedback on it. Anything about the story, characters, all that other jazz, etc.
960785 Well, I already like Linen. He seems like he has plenty of potential, and I just like the way he acted throughout his first interactions in Ponyville. I would certainly like to see him try to resolve his problems, and even get with a mare, or two. I do want to see more of Linen, and I trust that you'll think of some ways to get him back in the game. I'm also really curious about that gift. I must know who sent it, and what's inside. There's just so many possibilities, considering that he got with every mare in Ponyville.
960811 Thanks, that's sort of what I wanted to hear. Aside from the initial reception, I'd like to see what viewers are thinking of it from their point of view. Helps give me a better idea of what's within scope and what isn't, and I can work better from that. I should also note that I like leaving more subtle clues when it comes to pointing things out. If you go back and think about it, you could probably extrapolate who left the package on the doorstep without too much trouble.
960850 It's pink... But I figured that was too obvious. So instead I'm thinking Colgate. And subtle clues are good. They make it really satisfying when you find out the actual answer.
960863 Well... I don't like making the clue excessively hard where I'd end up as Edward Nigma the Second. So, yes, if it appears simple, that's because it probably is.
EDIT: I'd stick this in the Clopfics group, but I don't know whether this qualifies as Romantic Clop (which it will be down the line), or Erotic Clop (which is what it is now).
Honestly, I rather like it... except for the whole bit about pony-sex, but even that didn't feel out of place. Still could have done without the image though. The character feels real, he knows he has a problem, but seems very reluctant to work out how to solve it. Almost like he doesn't want it solved.
Hope to see more of the story.
Normally, I tend to stay as far away as possible from clopfics starring OC's, especially if they're written poorly. But something compelled me to give this one a go.
And I don't regret it in the slightest. Which means you've done something really right.
I'll work up a more in-depth analysis when I'm able to do so (at work right now, and before you ask, no I don't read clopfics while on the clock
), but I will tell you this for now: I'd really like to see more of this. 
Not to sound like an A-hole but don't you have about 4 other stories running?
964838 That is true, but I like juggling. Too much focus on a single work produces burnout way too fast for me. I'm sure that might not be the case for other authors, but it is for me. Also, it's a fantastic way to touch off on all of my creative bases, since I like to dabble in all the categories.
Lucky I wasn't that guy if that happened to me I'd likely be pissed at anyone who tried to talk to me who wasn't a stallion
I may havereadwhat people do during this mating season idea but nevah the aftermath dis is gonna be good
Good chapter but.
kind of contradicts sense of doing that
Otherwise pretty solid update. Hoping to see next one soon.
1061198 Thanks for the comment! But I don't see the contradiction there: Twilight wishes to know more about Linen, so she decides to ask Davenport about it. When Pinkie Pie asks, Linen says that he has already met her, and given on first impressions, thought she was a nice pony to know. So she believes that it will make getting an apology from Twilight much more easier than if it were just any other mare in Ponyville.
Exellent chapter my friend! cant wait for more.
...but he'd become too proficiently at it.
Dear lord! Look at that adverb! Look at it! Fix this right now! In the name of god, and all that is holy, fix this!
1063536 Fixed!
1064032 Thank you. That was physically painful to look at. Made my eyes bleed...
Don't accept any apology linen they deserve guilt and make them die because of it and make sure it's most painful to rainbow dash because I just got mad at her when she said she didn't care. END THEM NO REGRETS
I think Linen Spool is quickly becoming one of my favorite OCs. I wish I could say more other than "hope you update soon" (really I do, I feel stupid for doing it), but that's all I got, I'm afraid.
Please continue this for this is really good in plot and pacing.
1093567 Thanks, I'm glad you like it. The next chapter's pretty close to being finished, so keep an eye out for that.
Yeah o far so.good. Love the fact that Fluttershy politely raped him. Found that kind of funny and eerie.
Fuck this man now i can't like any if the mane six now
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I know that feel bro.
i want to rip Rainbow's wing off in this chapter
1099420 Now all I can think of is teleporting to ponyville and blowing shit up to get to linen and saving him
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...Ok then *slowly backs away* I'm just gonna... GTFO! *runs away*
I'll be honest with you: a young guy with a psychosocial disorder gets serially raped and the only end result is awkwardness from the mares? Yeah, no.
I'm not liking it much right now, but I'm not gonna judge before I get done with the other chapters.
Okay, this eased some of my fears.
And Linen better shoot Rainbow Dash THE FUCK DOWN. Bitch has it coming for her.
1104122 Well, Linen's not given to being angry, so...
1105118 -_- make him angry now.
this is pretty much me after reading what rainbow had said.
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1105118 He may be coy and submissive, but remember, people are like springs: push one too far, and you risk getting a face-full of metal at high speed when it snaps back.
1106270 I agree nobody or pony will take that situation and simply "Forgive" people/ponies after being raped BY EVERY MARE in Ponyville. Hell, if i was is in his position shit would go down
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1105165 Writing doesn't work that way, boy.
1198679 true that
Ah yeah approval. And Applejack being level headed as usual is boss.
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I sense this party is gonna go down in the ahit gone horribly wrong category
I'm expecting Rainbow Bitch to see the damage she's done and not being able torepair it. Anything less would be less than satisfactory.
Welp. This shall be interesting.
I know I think that RD is best pony but this time, she's gone WAY too far.
On a different note. This story Asura approved... Wait.
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RUN!!!
Okay, this was an idea born of one late night of insomnia, and I think it's time to put this one to rest. This story will come to a close within the next one or two chapters, with possibility for a sequel dealing with a full-blown romance. There's a bit of implied romance for this one, but I'm hoping to actually flesh that out in the sequel.
Silk Weave: You got some explaning to dooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great story keep it up.
Iz like this one...
i wonder how much of a berserker button Silk has
Hmmm FUCK